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The dusk rider

Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:14 pm

This is a black gunship used for night only. It has a lot of guns, and it ain't afraid ta use 'em! Shocked It's primary use though is for bombing. The dusk rider is the most heavily armed vehicle I've ever made!
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There's some heavy firepower

The bomb hatch

What comes out of it

The bombs that come out of what comes out of the gunship. Razz

Following missiles

Off their racks...

Who mans it? These guys!


Please keep note that this was made from scratch, and I don't have that many good gunship pieces... thanks.
Enjoy! Smile
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Comrade Faie on Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:21 pm

Looks pretty good but this barely took you any time. The slopes sort of make it look like a "rock" in the front. Fordo Yo!

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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:23 pm

Not bad...

The back is too boxy and plain, maybe add a door or hatch of some sort?

The wings are also plain... maybe a streak of dark bley?

Guns look great! This thing would be terrifying on the battlefield!

As I said in the WIP topic, ditch the cockpit, use the other kind that was used in the original Gunship set.
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:23 pm

Commander Faie wrote:Looks pretty good but this barely took you any time. The slopes sort of make it look like a "rock" in the front. Fordo Yo!

It actually took me about 5 hours in all.... which is a medium amount. Smile
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Alpha on Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:25 pm

Yeah. Use 1x2 Slopes on the side, just to balance it out. The front kinda looks like a rock. (As CFaie said. Razz )

Overall it looks good. Just needs some straightening out here and there.

Also, make the missiles thin and sleek, and 1 shape. Unless they're bombs...

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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:43 pm

Make the wings at a larger angle from the body, more straight out than down.

The front could use some work, not sure how you'd do that though. Good starter!!

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Re: The dusk rider

Post by vecol05 on Sun Nov 30, 2008 12:40 am

It's awsome but to bulky on top.
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by LegoBoyRobert on Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:07 am

Nice! But it would be cool if you take the red off and put white! Shadow Squad Gunship! Wink Laughing

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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Bantha on Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:09 am

Wow that looks great. I love the shadow clone.
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Zepher on Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:14 am

There's something about it I don't like. It's two dark and it looks incomplete. It looks okay, but not great, sorry!
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Alpha on Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:28 am

Agreed. I think you should send it to the hospital.

(Note, sending it to the hospital doesn't mean it's bad, it means there's room for improvment!)

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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:30 am

I don't think it needs the hospital... I think it just needs more work...
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Darth Yoda on Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:32 am

I guess I could, but right now I'm feeling t lazy to do anything else to it... Razz
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:42 am

It looks pretty sweet, but it looks too busy in the front. Good job though. Smile
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Darth Yoda on Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:37 am

Well, this is my second gunship and I didn't really improve. I guess gunships aren't my thing. I'm going to scrap this soon unless anyone has any objections...
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:11 am

I wouldn't be using all those smilies and stuff if I were you... Wink
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:18 am

Looks pretty cool but you've used your slopes in the front not in a 'order', which makes it very rough and ugle. The wings are too vertical and the back of the ships is too blocky. I also miss the side doors.

Apart from that, it's a neat Gunship! I love the bomb idea! Smile
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by -Aki- on Sun Nov 30, 2008 11:05 am

Wow! This is freaking awesome! I love the bombs. great work Smile!!!
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Re: The dusk rider

Post by Sialboats on Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:49 pm

I really don't like the missiles, I'd like some more creativity in the pilots, and the front looks like a rock Shocked , but other than that, it's good Wink !
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