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White Lightning WIP

Post by -Aki- on Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:14 pm

I am working on a starfighter for my sigfig, but in no way am I happy with it. Can you guys point out some flaws and how to solve them?







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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by Jeremy012399 on Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:20 pm

I like it especially the engines.

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Post by Alpha on Tue Dec 16, 2008 11:17 pm

Personally, I don't like the front. Give it a smooth feeling, and maybe add some of those 2x6 slants. It's a good start!

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Post by Clonecommando007 on Wed Dec 17, 2008 12:22 am

You could put this in the Hospital.

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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Dec 17, 2008 12:29 am

I concur.. it isn't really bad.. but it needs work...

It's too blocky and needs some more slopes...
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Post by pdragon27 on Wed Dec 17, 2008 12:34 am

Yeah, it needs some rounded slopes, a lot of em'. Other wise, I think its just the overall design that you are trying that people don't like. I think its pretty good.
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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by Axel on Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:16 am

The parts you used under the blasters on the side end too abruptly. You could consider slopes for more sleekness. And the colours clash a bit. The old gray tile at the front is sort of strange, and the random black bits are distracting as well.
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Post by Sialboats on Wed Dec 17, 2008 10:12 am

I too don't like the front all that much, it's just too jagged. And I agree with axel on the guns!
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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by Mike on Wed Dec 17, 2008 12:53 pm

Smooth it out, put a trans disk piece on the engine, and put some trans studs on the blasters.
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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by -Aki- on Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:05 pm

Thanks! I will try this at the weekend! The problem is that I don't have a lot of rounded slopes. I will have to get creative with this...

@Axel: How can I?
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Post by Rook on Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:58 pm

Ah don't mix the bley with brey. Looks like crap unless you're doing stone texture.

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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by -Aki- on Wed Dec 17, 2008 8:01 pm

I am in the process of solving that problem Rook Wink.
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Post by Darth Yoda on Wed Dec 17, 2008 10:57 pm

Rook wrote:Ah don't mix the bley with brey. Looks like crap unless you're doing stone texture.

And all of those times when DP said it didn't look good with rocks... Razz
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Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Dec 17, 2008 10:58 pm

Brey? I assume you mean gray... Razz
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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by -Aki- on Thu Dec 18, 2008 6:23 pm

I have smoothed the front, sorted the "Wings", and have finished the interior. All in all, it is finished! Can someone please lock this topic?
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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Dec 18, 2008 6:29 pm

Can we have a pic? I want to see it!

Unless you're going to make a full topic for it... Wink
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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by -Aki- on Thu Dec 18, 2008 6:31 pm

Just wait. It should be up tomorrow!
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Re: White Lightning WIP

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Dec 18, 2008 6:32 pm

Ok cool!

Can't wait to see the improved version! Smile
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