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Episode 16: The Plan

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Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Zepher on Tue Dec 30, 2008 2:53 am

Episode 16
Season 2
"The Plan"


Other Episodes in this story-arc:
Episode 13
Episode 14
Episode 15

































Heavy stuff at the end there. Razz

Again vote for your favorite! They may just survive!

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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Alpha on Tue Dec 30, 2008 2:55 am

Ahh.

Nice floor tiles! Although, I don't understand that in the 2nd or 3rd frame, how'd that Clone (Can't remember names especially when they all look identical) survive? He had a blaster pointed at him...

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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Darth Yoda on Tue Dec 30, 2008 3:10 am

I like the Moc, although a poll for every comic... weird... Surprised Razz
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by DarthPineapple on Tue Dec 30, 2008 7:54 am

Looks very cool, as usual Zeph. Wink
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by -Aki- on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:31 am

This is really cool! I like that little transport of theirs.
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Jens on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:37 am

DarthPineapple wrote:Looks very cool, as usual Zeph. Wink

Totally agree here, but my favorite part of this is all of the characters and how you have "rookies" with the squad!
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Zepher on Tue Dec 30, 2008 2:56 pm

Alpha wrote:Ahh.

Nice floor tiles! Although, I don't understand that in the 2nd or 3rd frame, how'd that Clone (Can't remember names especially when they all look identical) survive? He had a blaster pointed at him...

Gimmick was in the second and third frame. He's the one with a bag. I made the important ones (other than Nooks) stand out. And I needed a way to blaance him Wow this thing looks He shot first (Like Solo!)

darth yoda wrote:I like the Moc, although a poll for every comic... weird... Surprised Razz

Well, I like to know how people like the characters as the story evolves Razz It tells me who I need to work on as a character, and who they would be the saddest to see die.
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Comrade Faie on Tue Dec 30, 2008 4:38 pm

I like your comics, they don't show a big amount of the area which is good because if you show to much there would not be plot and setting development. I love your plots! Fordo Yo!

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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Zepher on Tue Dec 30, 2008 4:41 pm

For those of you who are wondering, next week will basically just be an insane fight for both groups. Be on the look-out. And if you don't want someone dead, vote for them. Or else they will die. Most members will.

P.S. Thanks Faie!
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by captain thire on Tue Dec 30, 2008 5:30 pm

a very good comic i hope nooks survives because it would be like episode 5 of the new clone wars seires where the rookys are the main characters Fordo Yo! Kabam!

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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Zepher on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:30 pm

Well, this does draw from rookies, only there's one rookie and a bunch of vets, instead of the other way around! Thanks for the sorta low amount of feedback everyone...
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:42 pm

Very cool, my only suggestion would be to make the lazers bigger.
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Sialboats on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:43 pm

GODAMNIT! I've typed this commentary three times now, because my browser wants to go back a page (erasing my work) each time I accidentally tap the bloody backspace key after deselecting my text!

Anywho....

Story: great! Try to make it a little less strained (it comes off as that) and yer golden! It's a bit wordy and all, and while I don't consider it a bad thing, brevity is sometimes appreciated in a audience.

MOC: I envy your camera's macro function! Because of it, you're able to make these nice, in-close, all-lego backdrops without fretting over blur! The street looks quite nice, and you haven't a problem with clutter, like I do.

GIMP: Don't be afraid to make those speech bubbles bigger. Turn on the centering option for the text, use a bigger font, and try out some unique fonts on the more important characters. Use it to fit their personalities (I.E: Turaki is very refined, Book Antiqua; Meehan is a bit unsure of himself, the wavy Manderia MT). Start defining your blaster bolts early on in your career, and you'll get good at it. I'm still struggling to get mine up to speed with everything else Embarassed .


All in all, solid comic! I can't wait for some action later on in the series.
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Zepher on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:48 pm

Thanks so much Sial! It really means a lot from you, and on top of that, you give good advice!
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Clonecommando007 on Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:17 am

I love all the tiles, and you have great photography, but my general opinion here is too much talk too little action. Good work though!

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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Zepher on Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:06 am

Clonecommando007 wrote:I love all the tiles, and you have great photography, but my general opinion here is too much talk too little action. Good work though!

Yeah, this arc is a massive amount of talking. The next episode should be about 20 pages of sheer action!
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Astor on Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:20 am

I like chucky becouse hes named after a killer doll! Smile
EDIT: NVM I read wrong! Laughing
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Re: Episode 16: The Plan

Post by Igor7 on Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:52 pm

Once again you've made a great comic. I hope that not too many clones die (At least the ones I like!). Can't wait for the next instalment. great story and photography too!
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A-W-S-O-M-E !!!!!!!!

Post by commander324 on Fri Apr 24, 2009 12:25 am

This was a great read I loved it,at the end (snif) that was sad. It was a great comic!
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