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A Disturbance over Coruscant

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A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Alpha on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:48 pm

Master Windu and Coruscant Guard Commander Fox are investigating a salvaged Acclamator I Assault Ship, that has recently reentered space above Coruscant. However, Droids may not be the only things on the ship...



Mace Windu crawling out of a Maintanence Tunnel on Sublevel 327.


On the top level, Commander Fox is dealing with 2 Battle Droids.


Sublevel 327.


Maintanence Tunnel.


The Maintanence Tunnel door.


Mechanism.

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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by -Aki- on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:49 pm

Wow! That's really cool! I love the amount of greebs.
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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:50 pm

I seems a little dark. But it looks pretty nice!
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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:51 pm

Not bad, it has pretty cool greebles!

The studlessness is cool too!

But how come you didn't add any SFX?
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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Alpha on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:52 pm

Why add SFX?

It's a MOC.

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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:52 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Not bad, it has pretty cool greebles!

The studlessness is cool too!

But how come you didn't add any SFX?

Alph and I don't do comics like that anymore. We just do MOCs, a whole lot better! Razz
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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:53 pm

Pssh.... that's a matter of opinion! Wink
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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Alpha on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:53 pm

Well, no offense to any other comic makers, but most comics here have no greebles, and have an average amount of details. :\

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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Comrade Faie on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:54 pm

So no more comics from Alpha... Sad ! You were really good at them too. Fordo Yo!

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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Alpha on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:54 pm

I might do one once in a while... Wink

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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Jeremy012399 on Tue Dec 30, 2008 7:15 pm

Looks good, there is a lot of detail.

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Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Zepher on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:52 pm

Better lighting is required. I really can't see the MOC.
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