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541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

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541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Sialboats on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:18 pm

Previous Episodes (in the Intrest of Newer Members, it's highly reccomended that you catch up before you start reading further Wink !)
541st Chronciles #4
541st Chronicles #5
541st Chronicles #6
541st Chronicles #7
541st Chronicles #8
541st Chronicles #9
541st Chronicles #10
541st Chronicles #11
541st Chronicles #12
541st Chronicles #13
541st Chronicles #14
541st Chronicles #15



No major GIMP'n here, just added in text bubbles and touched up the pictures. I hurried this one out in hopes of putting some time into the next comics Smile, for this was just storytelling!















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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Zepher on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:29 pm

Wonderful as always. Your story is amoung the best. Still waiting for your comment on my comic.

P.S. Not all comics need flashy GIMP. This one is fine without, in fact, even though it's lacking GIMP it's one of the best so far.

ADVICE: People read from left to right, up to down. Put your text bubles so they work that way. Imagine an arrow from top left to bottom right. Put all text in order of it being siad. it avoids confusion. Sometimes it looks like they're responding to something that hasn't been said yet. THIS IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR THE COMIC TO BE GOOD. TRUST ME ON THIS ONE THING.
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Sialboats on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:33 pm

Zepher wrote: THIS IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR THE COMIC TO BE GOOD. TRUST ME ON THIS ONE THING.


I know, I know, I know, I know! I'm just too damned lazy to do it. DP has called me on this countless times before Wink . In fact... I think he called me on this in every comic I've ever done! But the positioning of the figures just never occur to me during the shoots Mad .
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Comrade Faie on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:37 pm

I love the story in this one! You pitless bastard! I've got to use that sometime or make it my catch phrase. Razz Fordo Yo!

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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:40 pm

Zeph is right, Sial. It gets very confusing sometimes.

But I like how you structured the story in this one, even though it doesn't have alot of effects! Wink
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Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:43 pm

Wow! Even without effects (which you don't need in this particular comic) it's still awesome!!

Love the storyline! I can't wait till they break him out!
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Jens on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:46 pm

This one is one of your best comics so far. great story!

Oh, and about catching up, I don't need that, I have followed this story since your first comic and I have really enjoyed it.
Can't wait for the next part! Smile


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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:46 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Wow! Even without effects (which you don't need in this particular comic) it's still awesome!!

Love the storyline! I can't wait till they break him out!

If they break him out... Razz
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Sialboats on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:49 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:
Thunder-blade wrote:Wow! Even without effects (which you don't need in this particular comic) it's still awesome!!

Love the storyline! I can't wait till they break him out!

If they break him out... :


Wink




I knooooow noth-dink! Don't'a look at me Razz !

Trust me... I'm going to keep you guessing through the end of this series and into the next Shocked .


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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Zepher on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:49 pm

Sialboats wrote:
Zepher wrote: THIS IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR THE COMIC TO BE GOOD. TRUST ME ON THIS ONE THING.


I know, I know, I know, I know! I'm just too damned lazy to do it. DP has called me on this countless times before Wink . In fact... I think he called me on this in every comic I've ever done! But the positioning of the figures just never occur to me during the shoots Mad .

Just try to think of the text bubles when you take your photos. That's why my photos are sometimes with lots of empty space over the head before edited. It looks stupid, but it allows you to line them up in any way you like.
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Dec 30, 2008 10:53 pm

If??

I sure hope they do! I want to see a great escape/battle scene!!
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Zepher on Tue Dec 30, 2008 10:56 pm

They do. How I know? Go re-read Sialboats Interview. They're good for something after all!
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Sialboats on Tue Dec 30, 2008 11:24 pm

Zepher wrote:They do. How I know? Go re-read Sialboats Interview. They're good for something after all!

I leaked no secrets in there.... Razz !
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by -Aki- on Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:00 am

That was great! I loved that prison cell.
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Sialboats on Thu Jan 01, 2009 12:14 pm

Aki-kundu wrote:That was great! I loved that prison cell.

I never thought of a prison cell, actually. More of a converted meeting room Razz .
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by republicFORCES on Fri Jan 02, 2009 3:37 pm

Nice prison, (i like all your comics Razz )
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Fri Jan 02, 2009 3:43 pm

Nice enough, except you mixed up Ied and Turaki's names again (first panel Razz ). And I might as well second everything Zeph said about speech bubbles.
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Sialboats on Fri Jan 02, 2009 3:59 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote: except you mixed up Ied and Turaki's names again (first panel Razz ).

GODAMNIT! I can't believe I did that again Wow this thing looks'oh: (I had at first intended for the Colonel to have the last name "Iedydrie", it seems to be a reflex).
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Post by The Jinja Ninja on Fri Jan 02, 2009 4:33 pm

Sialboats wrote:I had at first intended for the Colonel to have the last name "Iedydrie"...
Thank Krishna you didn't, half the forums wouldn't be able to pronounce it, let alone spell it.

Maybe this'll help (print it out for future reference):

Colonel Turaki
Commander Ied

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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by Commander Lukas on Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:12 pm

Sialboats wrote:

I like that one the best. Can't wait for the next one!
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by -Aki- on Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:23 pm

Heh. It's out Lukes Laughing. Check it out!
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Re: 541st Chroncicles #16: Heart of Black, Hearts of Gold

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:21 am

Very nice Sial, as usual again. Can you make crappy comics as well? I bet you can't. Razz
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