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Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

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Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by Alpha on Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:43 pm









After Alpha's employment under Darth Sidious in 42 BBY, Alpha began bribing well known employees of Republic Sienar Systems and Kuat Drive Yards to create a Battlecruiser, from plans that Alpha designed when he was 11, for a very wealthy payment. After being constructed over Ruusan over Alpha's Shipyards, the Predator stayed there dormant for over 5 years. However, Alpha had been secretly storing his BodyGuard droids, his M6 Hunter Droids. Once the Predator was complete, all Hunter Droids were activated in the cruiser, and killed every man, woman, child, and droid that knew of the Predator. After that, the Predator was left over Russan, guarded and maintained by Alpha's Droids.

When Year 3 of the Clone Wars begun, Alpha brought his 20 year old ship out of Hyperspace into a CIS and Republic battle over Galt'oran. Smashing into 1 Lucrehulk and ripping the hull off a Venator, the Predator devastated the entire CIS force over Galt'oran. The Republic Fleet fled, having no choice. Since then, the Predator has not been seen since.

It contained a very durable hull, enough to ram a cruiser without any structural damage. Armed with a Prototype Plasma cannon, it can lower the shields of a ship within 5 hits. The cruisers weaponry are divided into 5 sections, which are controlled from a bridge, so the cruiser can fire at only 5 things at once. Everything is controlled from the bridge. Alpha's M6 Hunter Droids are kept in the Hangar section, deactivated. Only Alpha can deactivate them, as he uses his brainwaves to control them.


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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by Alpha on Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:44 pm

Surprisingly, I made this ship over 1 month ago. Guess I never got around to posting it.

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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by Clonecommando007 on Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:46 pm

Nice! It's smooth and flowing, but it's hangar really isn't big enough for a hangar.

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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by vecol05 on Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:47 pm

I say you should put more turrent's on top.
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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by Alpha on Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:49 pm

Well. Maybe I missworded it. It's that thing that the Venator and Imperial Star Destroyers have, that can tractor beam small corvettes into.

Seeing as there are no starfighters... I guess there is no Hangar.

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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by -Aki- on Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:50 pm

This is really nice. I like the shape and the sleekness. The storyline was awesome. However, it could use some greebs.

Are all of you mocs in one peice?
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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by Comrade Faie on Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:22 pm

Reminds me of my Ravager, and with a few more details I would like this more than my Ravager (which is a lot). great job! Fordo Yo!

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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by Sialboats on Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:44 pm

Very sleek, reminds me of the Mandator-Class cruisers. I love the use of the ETA sticker pieces Smile . I just found out how useful they are when I was modifying my HAV/w.
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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by Igor7 on Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:45 pm

That's a good MOC. I really like the design and the coloring. great job. Add a couple more guns and blasters though and it would be even better.
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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Dec 31, 2008 11:45 pm

Oooh!

This is very nice looking! It's smooth, and it has nice angles!

But IMO the "head" is too small... looks puny compared to the rest of the ship...
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Re: Predator - Predator-Class Battlecruiser

Post by Alpha on Thu Jan 01, 2009 3:55 pm

Well... if you have a big bridge... it'll be too much of a target.

I mean, when you're fighting, if your enemy says "CONCENTRATE ALL FIRE ON THAT CRUISER'S BRIDGE" and you have a big bridge, the chances of getting hit are higher.

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