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Republic Shuttle

Post by ODST7 on Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:26 pm

Since I haven't really made a "MOC" for awhile so I thought i'd make this:



I would've taken more pics but my camera battery died. The inside is alot bigger then Lego's, More pics coming later.
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Alpha on Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:28 pm

It's good, although the side of the interior could be sloped, and the wings are placed too high.

Also, add a bit of a slant to the cockpit, and it'll be great!

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Post by Comrade Faie on Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:30 pm

I like the cockpit and the hull, but the wings are a bit jumbled. Fordo Yo!

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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by 667thLegion on Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:41 pm

I think the cockpit is about perfect, but the wings are too thin and the back is a bit boxy. Nice start though! Wink
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Guest on Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:48 pm

The only things I don't like are the wings and the color...

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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by 80-0 on Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:51 pm

I'd like to point out the best of it, but for now...

The wings are fat, the torso is a brick, and the cockpit is too bubbly.

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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by noobswatter on Thu Jan 01, 2009 5:56 pm

I love the colours on it! The main "torso" IS a bit too...blocky.
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by huntmaster on Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:04 pm

I like it though a bit to blocky.
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Sialboats on Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:16 pm

The front of it is very blocky. But other than that... not too shabby. I assume the legion using this shuttle wears armor with orange decalling Razz ?
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:21 pm

Sialboats wrote:I assume the legion using this shuttle wears armor with orange decalling?
Why? It looks red to me. Razz

Anyway, the thing that bugs me about this is that the wings are attached too close to the fin. Move them down and out a bit, and it might look better.
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Sialboats on Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:26 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:
Sialboats wrote:I assume the legion using this shuttle wears armor with orange decalling?
Why? It looks red to me. Razz

Anyway, the thing that bugs me about this is that the wings are attached too close to the fin. Move them down and out a bit, and it might look better.

Nope, that's orange. The contrast on his camera makes the wing area look a bit more like red-orange. The rest of the shuttle is DEFINATELY orange, though Wink .
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Jedi Joe on Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:31 pm

It's a little blocky, but it's a good start! Keep up the good work, OD! Smile
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by ODST7 on Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:15 pm

Sialboats wrote:
The Jinja Ninja wrote:
Sialboats wrote:I assume the legion using this shuttle wears armor with orange decalling?
Why? It looks red to me. Razz

Anyway, the thing that bugs me about this is that the wings are attached too close to the fin. Move them down and out a bit, and it might look better.

Nope, that's orange. The contrast on his camera makes the wing area look a bit more like red-orange. The rest of the shuttle is DEFINATELY orange, though Wink .
*cough*crazy*cough* It's red. I'm going to add the second stripes and move down the wings a bit....
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by DarthPineapple on Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:39 pm

Pretty cool. Where have you got so much orange from? BL?
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:58 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Pretty cool. Where have you got so much orange from? BL?
ODST7 wrote:*cough*crazy*cough* It's red. I'm going to add the second stripes and move down the wings a bit...
Compare it to the (non-dark) red wedge on the RGS in the background. Razz
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by DarthPineapple on Thu Jan 01, 2009 8:19 pm

Wow this thing looks'oh: Yea but it looked REALLY light...
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by ODST7 on Thu Jan 01, 2009 8:24 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Wow this thing looks'oh: Yea but it looked REALLY light...
I'm going to put a small orange stripe next to the yellow ones, as well as greebles. So i'll add orange and yellow.(I already added yellow)
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Post by Foxfang19 on Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:20 pm

Wow!
I think your camera is a bit off...it shows Bright Red as orange! Wink uh... lego just released 1 of these Fordo Yo!
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Bantha on Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:27 pm

great job! Maybe a little boxy though.
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by ODST7 on Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:35 pm

Foxfang19 wrote:Wow!
I think your camera is a bit off...it shows Bright Red as orange! Wink uh... lego just released 1 of these Fordo Yo!
I know, I just can't get one yet. By the way it's because of the yellow lighting.
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Guest on Fri Jan 02, 2009 1:34 am

This looks awsome I give you major props on this it looks cool what are it's fetures.

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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Darth Yoda on Fri Jan 02, 2009 1:42 am

Love the cockpit, but I hate the body... Use more slopes.... they are your friend. Wink
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by ODST7 on Fri Jan 02, 2009 2:22 am

boost wrote:This looks awsome I give you major props on this it looks cool what are it's features?

It's wings can fold and unfold I added two flick fire missles (Pics coming soon) a removable roof to see large troop compartment and two moving turrets. I have lots of greebles on the upcoming version!
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:03 am

The main body is too blocky IMO...

And doesn't the top "fin" have to be bigger?

It's not bad, but I would consider this a WIP at this moment...
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Re: Republic Shuttle

Post by Alpha on Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:04 am

Yeah. Send it to the hospital. Wink

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