Customizers and Builders Guild
Welcome to the Customizers And Builders Guild Forums, remodeled from the Clone Army Builders Guild!
You are welcome to browse as a Guest, but we invite
you to take advantage of more abilities by registering
for our website, and applying to the Guild later on.

Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Page 1 of 2 1, 2  Next

View previous topic View next topic Go down

Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sat Jan 03, 2009 8:29 pm

Here is my one entry picture to the OH NO! Contest:



With scouting out a large island on a CIS controlled planet as their objective, two 222nd Legion FAR troopers jump out of a Larty from 50 Thousand Feet with Extended Flight Packs...or without... Shocked

This is my first experiment with perspective...the micro island is supposed to seem like it is thousands of feet below the gunship. How do you think I fared with that? This thread is being made so I can get replies about my experiment with perspective...how can I improve, what should be done, etc.

Sorry, no gallery link. Only other pictures taken were from different angles.

________________________________________________________________
avatar
Clonecommando007
Kinda like a UFO
Kinda like a UFO

Location : Ohio


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by pdragon27 on Sat Jan 03, 2009 8:38 pm

You should probably put the gunship more close to the island...
avatar
pdragon27
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 22
Location : Maryland


http://www.flickr.com/photos/31819631@N06/

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Zepher on Sat Jan 03, 2009 8:39 pm

pdragon27 wrote:You should probably put the gunship more close to the island...

Oppisite. Make it farther away.
avatar
Zepher
VIP Former Staff
VIP Former Staff

Age : 23


http://mocpages.com/home.php/8408

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Jens on Sat Jan 03, 2009 8:42 pm

It looks good, the only problem for me is the the white paper in the background, I think it'll look better with blue paper.
avatar
Jens
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Denmark


http://www.flickr.com/photos/31580381@N05/

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sat Jan 03, 2009 8:46 pm

Gah that's what my dad said Jens! Laughing Yea I just wanted to blind out the backround, so I used the normal white.

________________________________________________________________
avatar
Clonecommando007
Kinda like a UFO
Kinda like a UFO

Location : Ohio


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by 80-0 on Sat Jan 03, 2009 8:49 pm

Zepher wrote:
pdragon27 wrote:You should probably put the gunship more close to the island...

Oppisite. Make it farther away.

Yes, what I said, and raise up the clouds so they're closer to the gunship to show almost 3D perspective. Wink

And that other thing I said in that other topic.

80-0
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 23
Location : New York, New YORK!


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Sithassassin on Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:05 pm

No you took my idea!!! I built mine yesterday and did not have time to post it!! I swear I had this same idea, the forgoten jetpack thing!!! Mad Mad Mad

I hope that you know I am still going to post mine. I swear I did not copy yours.
avatar
Sithassassin
Guild Member
Guild Member

Location : Probably on an ice rink dangling some goalie.


http://www.mocpages.com/home.php/12964

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Jens on Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:12 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:Gah that's what my dad said Jens! Laughing Yea I just wanted to blind out the backround, so I used the normal white.

Haha, great minds think alike.....
avatar
Jens
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Denmark


http://www.flickr.com/photos/31580381@N05/

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:16 pm

NICE! I love the use of forced perspective, and the "red Light" in the Gunship is a great touch, FANTASTIC WORK CC!!! Smile Blue Arc
avatar
astoriabluelegos
VIP Former Staff
VIP Former Staff

Age : 28
Location : Oregon


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Jeremy012399 on Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:52 pm

Ha ha ha ha, very nice.

Jeremy012399
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Why do you want to know


http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=346321

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by pdragon27 on Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:55 pm

astoriabluelegos wrote:NICE! I love the use of forced perspective, and the "red Light" in the Gunship is a great touch, FANTASTIC WORK CC!!! Smile Blue Arc

I think that is just light going through the white pieces...
avatar
pdragon27
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 22
Location : Maryland


http://www.flickr.com/photos/31819631@N06/

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Igor7 on Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:57 pm

That looks pretty good. But the forgotten extended flight pack...priceless!
avatar
Igor7
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member



Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by quinten on Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:03 pm

its very coool Blue Arc Laughing

Admin - Use proper punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and have five or more words in a post.

quinten



Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by ClonecommandoJazz on Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:25 pm

The backround is grey and the sky isn`t so I thick you should take another picture but with blue backround so it looks more realistick. Smile

Please edit this post and use proper spelling, grammar, capitalization, & punctuation. Thanks. ADMIN

Read this before posting again. http://cabg.forumotion.com/the-guild-constitution-f1/the-constitution-t1.htm#1 ADMIN
avatar
ClonecommandoJazz
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : CA


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by ODST7 on Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:29 pm

Heh, I can imagine him going splat. If you were to do this for a comic I'd just edit the background, I can show you how maybe if you want.
avatar
ODST7
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : In a galaxy far,far away....


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:37 pm

Very cool!

This is a great technique!!
avatar
Thunder-blade
Thunder-Sharpie
Thunder-Sharpie

Age : 22
Location : A galaxy far, far away...


http://mocpages.com/home.php/15131

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:46 pm

jens100 wrote:
Clonecommando007 wrote:Gah that's what my dad said Jens! Laughing Yea I just wanted to blind out the backround, so I used the normal white.

Haha, great minds think alike.....

I love him >>>
Smile

pdragon27 wrote:
astoriabluelegos wrote:NICE! I love the use of forced perspective, and the "red Light" in the Gunship is a great touch, FANTASTIC WORK CC!!! Smile Blue Arc

I think that is just light going through the white pieces...
Actually the red light is intended...I used a special LED...I had to recruit someone to hold it from the other side of the blind...I wouldn't let something that cool go undone by me...thank you very much.

________________________________________________________________
avatar
Clonecommando007
Kinda like a UFO
Kinda like a UFO

Location : Ohio


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by cln-cmndo on Sat Jan 03, 2009 11:32 pm

astoriabluelegos wrote:NICE! I love the use of forced perspective, and the "red Light" in the Gunship is a great touch, FANTASTIC WORK CC!!! Smile Blue Arc

Actually, I was testing with stuff like that only a few days ago! For Christmas, I got a pen with a detachable LED light that had two modes - white and red. I stuck it in my newly built gunship, and thought about using that same light in the gunship for a comic.


Last edited by cln-cmndo on Sun Jan 04, 2009 2:38 pm; edited 1 time in total
avatar
cln-cmndo
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Ohio (like CC007!)


http://www.mocpages.com/home.php/16619

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Wuzzupbob on Sat Jan 03, 2009 11:40 pm

I love it. It's perfect the way it is. Razz
avatar
Wuzzupbob
VIP Former Staff
VIP Former Staff

Age : 30
Location : GR Michigan


http://clonearmycustoms.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by commader runo on Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:46 am

I like it. It's funny! Kashyyyk
avatar
commader runo
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Crashed on Tatooine


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Comrade Faie on Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:57 am

I say the perspective was okay, but move the gunship up a bit further.

Comrade Faie
Guild Member
Guild Member

Age : 22
Location : Viva La France and Rick Alstley


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Guest on Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:59 am

I think the red florecent light is genious i love awsome work!! 5 star rating

Admin - Please use proper capitalization and punctuation.

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Sialboats on Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:51 am

You never fail to impress me CC! You can pull off the same effects of a GIMPer's flawlessly! My only complaints are the facts that, as some have said before, it doesn't look as though he's jumping from many miles up, and the MOC itself is very unsubstantial. It's a gunship (again, with wicked cool lighting), and a miniature-scale island Wink .


boost wrote:I think the red florescent light is genius. I love awesome work!! 5 star rating


Learn to spell, improve your bloody sentence structure, or get out Roll Eyes . To quote Mr. Jackson... "I'm tired of these motherf*cking [noobs in] this motherf*cking [forum]."
avatar
Sialboats
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Florida, United States


http://www.youtube.com/user/ChaationBergin

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:57 am

Do you mind if I do something like this in a comic?
avatar
Thunder-blade
Thunder-Sharpie
Thunder-Sharpie

Age : 22
Location : A galaxy far, far away...


http://mocpages.com/home.php/15131

Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by commander gomez on Sun Jan 04, 2009 4:04 am

Looks really cool ,but the ship looks like it's about to crash in a white wall Razz ..... still I loved it. Smile
avatar
commander gomez
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 22
Location : miami


Back to top Go down

Re: Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Page 1 of 2 1, 2  Next

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum