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134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

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134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

Post by 134st Legion on Mon Jan 05, 2009 2:45 pm

After a heavy battle General Kasajsi returns at base.
Reports are comming in that droids have set up a trap on Tatoonie.
General Kasajsi sends Clones to investigate.



Back at the base











Im new in this thing so im not know how to use Speciel effects if you have a program i can use please tell me.
And please comment on what i could do better


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Re: 134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

Post by Alpha on Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:41 pm

Okay, first, work on the spelling in the comic.

Second, use text bubbles. Don't just put a bubble near someone's head, put a triangle somewhere there.

Third, you need greebles. It's just a bunch of bricks on a plate.

Fourth, well...

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Re: 134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

Post by DarthPineapple on Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:46 pm

Hmm kind of a vague story and the MOC isn't that good as well...
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Re: 134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

Post by Jedi Joe on Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:50 pm

Can someone tell me what was going on here? 💫
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Re: 134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

Post by Alpha on Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:15 pm

So first, it goes from a battle, to the ship? How did it happen? Did they use a teleporter and MAGICALLY GET BACK ON THE VENATOR?

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Re: 134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

Post by -Aki- on Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:21 pm

Cool it guys. It may not be the best, but I liked it. The clones you used are really cool. Nice work Smile.
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Re: 134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

Post by Alpha on Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:22 pm

Yes, I must admit, those Clones are nice! If you need help with SFX, go to the GIMP tutorials. I'm sure T-b, Sial, Joe, or I can help you.

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Re: 134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Jan 05, 2009 5:15 pm

It's actually not too bad for a first try!

Just work on what you want to happen, it is kinda jumpy.

I really like the first scene though! And the minifigs you use are very nice!

Dialogue and story is what you need to work on now, the set (background) is ok!
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Re: 134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

Post by 134st Legion on Mon Jan 05, 2009 6:50 pm

Thanks for the many comments, I will try to be bether next time a make this again. Wow this thing looks
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