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Post by Uberlag Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:06 pm

-DATAFILE-
SCARSHIELD BATTALION-SECTION 12-7-A MISSION TO SULLUST
-RELAYING DATA-


The Scarshield Battalion has been assigned to lead the assault on CIS Mining and Droid Processing facilities on the planet Sullust, the exterior of the planet is blanketed by a toxic atmosphere that kills any organisms that require oxygen, luckily for the clones, their armor works just fine in keeping out the toxic gasses. As they descend to the rendezvous point, they are immediatly shot down by CIS A-A guns, as they finally make a crash landing near some mountains, with their LAAT in pieces, the Scarshield Battalion must fight for their lives if they want to make it off of Sullust in one piece.

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NOTE: This is not intended to be OMG SUPAR AWESOME, it is merely a storyline starter, and please excuse the crap-tastic backround.
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Post by Zepher Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:08 pm

Can't say I love the rcoks, but oher then that it's very nice!
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Post by 667thLegion Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:09 pm

I like the wreakage! This is pretty good, but the rock top that is toppled over looks odd. If it's supposed to be like a rocket hit the rock, maybe make it shattered more, with grey bricks all over. Nice job over all. Wink
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Post by Thunder-blade Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:09 pm

Nice! The 2 AATs look awesome!

Nice debris everywhere...

Ya know, you can download GIMP so you can put speech bubbles like the rest of the 44th...
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Post by Uberlag Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:10 pm

Rocks were a last ditch effort to make the place seem rocky-ish, because it is Run away! .
Thunder-blade wrote:Nice! The 2 AATs look awesome!

Nice debris everywhere...

Ya know, you can download GIMP so you can put speech bubbles like the rest of the 44th...

How would speech bubbles be appropriate here at all? Wink
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Post by Jedi Joe Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:14 pm

Bleh, who needs speech bubbles? I sure don't.

It's ok, but as you said, it wasn't intended to be OMG SUPER AWESOME.
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Post by commander gomez Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:15 pm

Shocked That is all have to say when I see it .I like the broken gunship too. Smile
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Post by Uberlag Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:15 pm

I'll fix it....eventually.....
It was just collecting dust, might as well do something useful with it.
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Post by Jedi Joe Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:18 pm

Uberlag wrote:I'll fix it....eventually.....
It was just collecting dust, might as well do something useful with it.

Same with mine, I just like looking at it. It's hard to put in a MOC since it is usually in the air most of the time. I might make an LAAT/c with it just for kicks.
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Post by Zepher Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:20 pm

Here's my advise Uberlag.

I know you're getting back into the game, so here's some help!

-Rocks look out of place where they are.
-Make debris look like the feel from something. I usually build a kinda crude ship and then destroy it so trhe pieces fall logically.
-Make the clones in cover. It's not logical to see them running towards the tank. You could of had some nice behind debris shots.

Overall though, I really like it as stated before!
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Post by Uberlag Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:23 pm

I'm not going to go back in there and re-destroy it, plots got to move on, you know.
Things will get better from here, I just needed a starting point.
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Post by Zepher Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:25 pm

Uberlag wrote:I'm not going to go back in there and re-destroy it, plots got to move on, you know.
Things will get better from here, I just needed a starting point.

I didn't mena redo it. Just store that for later!
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Post by Uberlag Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:27 pm

Oh I see, next time I destroy a ship I will think of that Razz .
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Post by Delta 77-Ponce Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:42 pm

Hey Uber love the troopers what did you use on them???
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Post by Uberlag Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:44 pm

Black paint, and that's about it.
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Post by Comrade Faie Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:45 pm

Nice AAT's! I like all the scrap from the gunship everywhere! Fordo Yo!
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Post by Muskey15 Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:18 pm

great job customizing the clones!
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Post by SIMACE Sat Jan 10, 2009 1:06 am

Not bad at all, but that clone commando ringing that droids neck is pretty cool! Looking at the pieces, the scene is pretty good overall.
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Post by pdragon27 Sat Jan 10, 2009 2:43 am

An entire battalion on one LAAT? That's not very realistic is it?
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Post by 80-0 Sat Jan 10, 2009 2:47 am

Umm... That is unrealistic; one larty can't hold 576 men, not now, not ever... Laughing

Maybe an Acclamator, though. Wink
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Post by Jedi Joe Sat Jan 10, 2009 2:54 am

80-0 wrote:Umm... That is unrealistic; one larty can't hold 576 men, not now, not ever... Laughing

Maybe an Acclamator, though. Wink

He only sent a squad from his battalion. We all agreed that sending squads would be more appropriate for a mission like this.
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Post by Uberlag Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:36 am

pdragon27 wrote:An entire battalion on one LAAT? That's not very realistic is it?

HELLO MR LITERAL!
DO YOU HAVE 120,000+ CLONES IN YOUR LEGION?
NO?
THAT'S NOT VERY REALISTIC IS IT?
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Post by Zepher Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:51 am

Uberlag wrote:
pdragon27 wrote:An entire battalion on one LAAT? That's not very realistic is it?

HELLO MR LITERAL!
DO YOU HAVE 120,000+ CLONES IN YOUR LEGION?
NO?
THAT'S NOT VERY REALISTIC IS IT?

And you got angry when someone retaliated becuase someone told them that thier creation sucked Wink
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Post by Uberlag Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:53 am

Wait whaaaaat?
I don't understand the context of your post Zeph.
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Post by Jedi Joe Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:54 am

I'm gonna laugh if Pdragon is some richass kid and actually has that many clones.
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