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Episode 17: "The Heat"

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Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Zepher on Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:41 pm

Season 2
Episode 17
"The Heat"


Other Stories in this Arc

Squad 47: The Crisis
Squad 47: The Report
Squad 47: The Battle
Squad 47: The Plan

This is the second to last one! I hope you enjoy! This is the most action packed one yet, and the saddest. I know you haven't gotten attached to the character's to much, but I felt bad while filming it. Maybe it means I'm just to emotional Razz

































(You may ask how they didn't see this coming. I would kindly tell you to shut up.)



























Well, one more comic in this story arc! Hope you enjoyed! The next one will come with a poll, this one's lacking incase you read the poll before the comic, and knew the deaths!

Hope you enjoyed, and that you felt at least a bit bad for thier sacrifice Waaa! Oh, and I also know my effects aren't great, but they're starting to get there! I hope.

-Zeph


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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Alpha on Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:44 pm

Oooh! Looks good! The unexpected HSD is neat, and the SBD attack later resembles the SBDs from SW:TCW!
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:48 pm

great! Yes very nice, although I'd suggest, after there is an explosion (like the grenade one) to change some of the tiles by black ones. At least 1 2x2 in the middle and some 1x1's around it. Also, That rocket the droid shot in the beginning should have done a lot more damage.
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Zepher on Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:06 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:great! Yes very nice, although I'd suggest, after there is an explosion (like the grenade one) to change some of the tiles by black ones. Would of, but didn't have the right pieces. I'm still playing around with effects like that!

At least 1 2x2 in the middle and some 1x1's around it. Also, That rocket the droid shot in the beginning should have done a lot more damage. Yeah... but I didn't want to kil lthose characters, just give them a problem and no way back, so they would die no matter what.

Why is no one sad! Fenix and Silence were the second and third most high favorite characters. couldn't someone show affection? Else I'll feel stupid feeling sad about killing them Razz
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by -Aki- on Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:07 pm

Wow! This is the best by miles! The explosions were awesome!

The odd thing is that he said "Just a bit of shrapnel, I'll be fine", when his entire leg is missing Razz.
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Post by Zepher on Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:08 pm

Aki-kundu wrote:Wow! This is the best by miles! The explosions were awesome!

The odd thing is that he said "Just a bit of shrapnel, I'll be fine", when his entire leg is missing Razz.

His leg got shot off later! You can see it in shot 13 and 14, but the next time you see him it's missing. It is to be assumed that it got shot off during one of the fights!
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by 134st Legion on Wed Jan 07, 2009 7:25 pm

I realy like to try to use the program you using, but i dont know what it`s called. Sad
It would be realy cool if you could give me a link, and the name to the place you downloaded, or buyed it. Razz
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Jan 07, 2009 7:27 pm

It's GIMP....

And this is very cool Zeph!
You blaster bolts need some work though... use a bigger brush and use more "Grow"
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Sialboats on Wed Jan 07, 2009 7:36 pm

Your bolts do need a little more work, but other than that, the comic was spot on! While some scenes were a bit spotty (took me a moment to figure out how they got there) the rest stood up quite well. The ending was also rather interesting Wink .

And, uh, I don't think you overused my technique (stupid noobs Razz ) at all Wink !
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by pdragon27 on Wed Jan 07, 2009 8:49 pm

Silence died! Waaa! Waaa! Waaa! He was my favorite... You should revive him with some cybernetic parts!
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Muskey15 on Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:21 pm

NOO! Silence! Nice comic, anyway. The effects are better than mine, easily, so great job!
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by 667thLegion on Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:29 pm

Very nice job! I really liked the explosion effects. But how didn't they see the HSD?! Razz
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by flare on Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:31 pm

YOU LIED! Shocked. You said that if we voted the most times for a guy he would survive! Razz. And I thought we haven't even seen 4-5 guys yet? Or were they in this comic?

Well it was a good story. But how are you going to do order 66 when half of them are dead? Or Am I need the wrong year line?
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Sialboats on Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:55 pm

667thLegion wrote:Very nice job! I really liked the explosion effects.



*Mumbles something about never revealing trade secrets again.*



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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Comrade Faie on Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:00 pm

Nice MOC! I love your sets, and your plots together they rock! great explosions! Fordo Yo!

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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by commander gomez on Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:09 pm

Zeph what are you talking about the effects are great. In fact they are better than any other I have seen in my life. Smile
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Zepher on Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:10 pm

Sialboats wrote:
667thLegion wrote:Very nice job! I really liked the explosion effects.



*Mumbles something about never revealing trade secrets again.*



Razz

Aw, you're such a sweetie for sharing your effects with my Wow this thing looks

Thanks all. And yes Falre, I lied. it didn't matter who you voted for. I just wanted to make sure you got attached to the character!

As for the few you didn't see, they were the two heavier troopers with the big guns. One died during a cut away scene (inbetween the droid explosion and the HSD attack) and the other died when the HSD stepped on the building he was in.

Bear in mind this arc still has one more comic, and that Gimmick and Nooks are not yet dead, and that the droids are down!
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:22 pm

A MOD lied?? That's not good for your reputation... Wink
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Zepher on Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:33 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:A MOD lied?? That's not good for your reputation... Wink

I have such a good rep on this site, I can do whatever the hell I want! Razz
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Clonecommando007 on Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:52 pm

great explosions and awesome action shots! I love this series! Good work!!

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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Jan 08, 2009 1:33 am

Zepher wrote:
Thunder-blade wrote:A MOD lied?? That's not good for your reputation... Wink

I have such a good rep on this site, I can do whatever the hell I want! Razz

Pssshh... that's no excuse! What about when you take over the site with ABL, what will the people thi--

Oh... I wasn't supposed to say that was I.. Laughing
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by legorevolution on Thu Jan 08, 2009 1:47 am

Jesus Zeph! That was incredibly graphic! You should post a viewer discretion before your next bloodbath moc (for our n00ber members of course). Wink Despite the excessive bloodshed, it was pretty entertaining. I didn't really understand the spider droid though... as I thought they were inside a base? Did it come through the roof or something? Also lasers seal the wound as soon as they hit so I don't think there'd be that much blood, but for grenades it makes sense. Good work!
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Jan 08, 2009 1:50 am

Yeah... do you guys remember a comic I did awhile back? It had tons of (GIMPed) blood...

Almost all the comments I got was "Hey! There's no blood from blasters!" Razz
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by legorevolution on Thu Jan 08, 2009 1:55 am

Thunder-blade wrote:Yeah... do you guys remember a comic I did awhile back? It had tons of (GIMPed) blood...

Almost all the comments I got was "Hey! There's no blood from blasters!" Razz

Seriously there isn't! Lightsabers and blaster bolts cauterize(?) the wound before it can bleed. It makes sense because it's futuristic technology, and I imagine is pretty nice to whoever the victim was Razz When you guys throw in a ton of gory blood everywhere, it reminds me of WWII too much...
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Re: Episode 17: "The Heat"

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Jan 08, 2009 2:10 am

I know that, I was laughing because it was stupid of me to do that...
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