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The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:43 am

Here is my first comic about my legion. So, look at my legion thread to see characters.
Here we go:










I hope you liked it!
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Alpha on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:45 am

Looks good, but the snow and the table are just a tad bit plain. Wink

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Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:46 am

Yeah, I did it very quickly... anyways this is just to set the scene... The next ones will be better.
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Muskey15 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:48 am

Nice beginning! Hope to see more soon. It looks very promising!
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:50 am

Thanks! Does anyone like Captain Adenn?
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Alpha on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:52 am

Well, it'd be kinda helpful clearly to state which one he is...

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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Uberlag on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:53 am

I don't like it.
You may be trying to start this, but if this is anything like what your going to do, it needs a major overhaul.
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:53 am

He's the commando. Next to Captain Turbo (red one). I told you to read my legion page for characters! *tisk* *tisk* Alpha... Razz

@Uber: I'm a bit short on pieces right now...
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Uberlag on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:55 am

I've seen amazing things done with small amounts of pieces.
And why would there be water, if it is a frozen planet it would freeze too, and why would Separatists need water?
And what genius would send 3 troopers to destroy a Sep. Base?


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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Alpha on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:55 am

I mean, you could either SNOT the snow or layer it...

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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:56 am

The ice melted from the heat of the base... and they're scouts if you even read the thing!

@Alpha: I'm short on white pieces period.
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Alpha on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:57 am

The base emits heat?

Anyhow, I can't wait to see your GIMP'ing. Presumable in the next comic, right? Smile

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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Uberlag on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:58 am

pdragon27 wrote:The ice melted from the heat of the base... and they're scouts if you even read the thing!

@Alpha: I'm short on white pieces period.

Heat of the base?
What would they be doing to cause massive snow melt?
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:03 am

I imagine they don't want to freeze, and have the temperature at like 60 or 50 degrees...
And according to Aki, its a mining operation so maybe they are melting down the metal or whatever they are mining...
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Muskey15 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:05 am

PD, do you have alot of gray pieces/bricks? If so, you could change the color of your ship's interior to gray. Just suggesting...
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:08 am

Nope. I think I used all of them on my bounty hunter's ship which I'll post later...
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by -Aki- on Sun Jan 11, 2009 8:45 am

Looks awesome! A great start to our great storyline Smile.
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Sialboats on Sun Jan 11, 2009 10:27 am

I'm not commenting on GIMP or anything, but rather your MOC and your... well... LOGIC!

Good god, the MOC is waaay too small and far to undetailed. I could understand if you didn't have a lot of pieces, but that's just sad! And for christ's sake, why would the clones look for water and suddenly decide to head back to base? Wouldn't they go and recce the area untill they found the base and THEN report back? Furthermore, wouldn't the seps be wise enough to cover the liquid water, and why would they even need liquid water in the first place? If it's runoff from the heat of the base, keep in mind that there isn't heat enough from a simple base to melt through ice on a sub-artic planet.

And I swear, if one more person makes a poor comic using a ice world, I will shoot them dead. Ice worlds, Arkania, is MINE Razz !
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 12:58 pm

Ok, I'll admit I didn't spend much time thiniking this one through... I was more focused on the next one.... Which will be better! And I only did an Ice Planet because my legion is a Cold Assault Legion! And because that's the storyline of the 162nd Eliminator Corps.
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:05 pm

Hmm it's very simple but okay. Not the best comic I've seen but certainly not the worst either.
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:06 pm

Thanks DP. The next one will be a lot better. I just order about 80 white pieces from PaB.
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:12 pm

From PaB? Have you ever heard of Bricklink? You could get like 150 pieces for the same price, since PaB is very expensive!


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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by Muskey15 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:13 pm

Don't you mean Bricklink? Brickshelf is a gallery host.


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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:13 pm

My parents don't allow me to BL, I think...
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Jan 11, 2009 1:14 pm

Muskey15 wrote:Don't you mean Bricklink? Brickshelf is a gallery host.

Wow this thing looks'oh: Yes I meant Bricklink. I was too fast. Embarassed
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