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Post by Igor7 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:01 pm

That's a good start, although I will say, as its been pointed out, this isn't the best MOC. It's still a great attemp for a comic, especially the first comic about your legion.
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Post by Commander jake on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:30 pm

it was alright u need to put things on the table

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Post by 80-0 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:32 pm

Commander jake wrote:it was alright u need to put things on the table

Welcome to the CABG! I ought to just tell you you should work on your grammar, punctuation, and spelling, plus read the Guild Constitution; once you've done those you should do fine here. Smile

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Post by clone trooper101 on Sun Jan 11, 2009 6:56 pm

I liked it, the scout commander thingy was a bit weid thought.
I thought the base would give out heat.
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Post by Appo the clone on Sun Jan 11, 2009 9:21 pm

Is the next one gonna have abattle


in it? Shocked


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Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Jan 12, 2009 1:20 am

Not bad, it's a good start!

Can't wait to see more of them!
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Post by pdragon27 on Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:11 pm

The next one will be better now that I figured out Sialboats' explosion technique. He didn't tell me. I figured it out. I'm not telling anyone because I think he'll get mad.
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Post by Commander Four on Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:45 am

I don't like the Commando...you need to sand paper his fin not cut it...also it was a bit plain and why would the CIS need heat when the base would be already heated inside? And who sends only 3 troops to destroy a whole base!?
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Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:59 am

It's pretty good, but you could have added more, and you guys didn't have to start being all scientific and start bitching up on him... Laughing
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Post by pdragon27 on Sat Jan 17, 2009 1:43 pm

Commander Four wrote:I don't like the Commando...you need to sand paper his fin not cut it...also it was a bit plain and why would the CIS need heat when the base would be already heated inside? And who sends only 3 troops to destroy a whole base!?

HOLY CRAP! Did you even read the darn thing???? They are scouts! The heat from inside the base leaked out! And the commando's helmet was messed up anyway....
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Post by Commander Four on Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:25 pm

pdragon27 wrote:
Commander Four wrote:I don't like the Commando...you need to sand paper his fin not cut it...also it was a bit plain and why would the CIS need heat when the base would be already heated inside? And who sends only 3 troops to destroy a whole base!?

HOLY CRAP! Did you even read the darn thing???? They are scouts! The heat from inside the base leaked out! And the commando's helmet was messed up anyway....
I did and usually a base would be locked up pretty good...well the droids are stupid though. Razz
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Post by The Jinja Ninja on Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:45 pm

Commander Four wrote:I did and usually a base would be locked up pretty good...well the droids are stupid though.
Read up on convection - heat can get through locked doors. Razz
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Re: The 27th Journals #1

Post by pdragon27 on Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:46 pm

Obviously he isn't past the 8th grade....
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