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Warrior Saga #1

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Warrior Saga #1

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Jan 14, 2009 4:59 am



























What do you think? This will be more story-based and will have a strong plot and not just random scenes like my last one..

Enjoy! Smile
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Darth Yoda on Wed Jan 14, 2009 5:59 am

Hmm, don't mix flesh with yellow... Smile
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Alpha on Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:04 am

Ah yes... don't mix Yellow with Flesh, like DY said.

Looks good, if I were you, I'd add a bar somewhere in there. Can't wait for the next one!

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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:31 am

I did that partially on purpose to show the difference in race...

Oh, and from now on they will probably be posted on Sunday or Saturday...
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Jan 14, 2009 7:14 am

darth yoda wrote:Hmm, don't mix flesh with yellow... Smile

That's my only complaint as well. Still, great story!
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by pdragon27 on Wed Jan 14, 2009 12:29 pm

You guys don't realize that you can use yellow for Asian people!
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Jens on Wed Jan 14, 2009 12:38 pm

pdragon27 wrote:You guys don't realize that you can use yellow for Asian people!

I don't know how this whole Asian people are yellow became popular, I have lived in Singapore for 5 years and "Asian people" are not yellow!

Anyway, great story so far, I hope we'll see some epic gimping!
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by huntmaster on Wed Jan 14, 2009 1:18 pm

jens100 wrote:
pdragon27 wrote:You guys don't realize that you can use yellow for Asian people!

I don't know how this whole Asian people are yellow became popular, I have lived in Singapore for 5 years and "Asian people" are not yellow!

Anyway, great story so far, I hope we'll see some epic gimping!



You lived in sinapore wow?
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Jens on Wed Jan 14, 2009 1:48 pm

huntmaster wrote:
jens100 wrote:
pdragon27 wrote:You guys don't realize that you can use yellow for Asian people!

I don't know how this whole Asian people are yellow became popular, I have lived in Singapore for 5 years and "Asian people" are not yellow!

Anyway, great story so far, I hope we'll see some epic gimping!



You lived in sinapore wow?

First of all it's Singapore and why is there a question mark after wow, I think the question mark is suppose to be after "sinapore". Roll Eyes
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Alpha on Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:13 pm

pdragon27 wrote:You guys don't realize that you can use yellow for Asian people!

Laughing

I'm pretty sure when I look at a mirror, my skin isn't yellow... Razz

On topic, could'ya give me a sneak peak over Xfire? Thanks.

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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Jedi Joe on Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:48 pm

Actually, mixing yellow and flesh isn't that bad. It adds variety!

great job, T-B! The SFX could use some work, but excellent story overall! Smile
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Astor on Wed Jan 14, 2009 4:10 pm

Wow! Nice TB!
Your comics have an own atmosphere that I realy like! Smile
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by 667thLegion on Wed Jan 14, 2009 7:24 pm

great job with the suspense at the end, but may I suggest changing the text at the top to white. I found myself getting closer to the screen and squinting to read it. Wink
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by -Aki- on Wed Jan 14, 2009 7:29 pm

Pretty nice! This is really cool. The Catina interior really has a atmosphere of danger (Just like any Catina Razz). The way they leak blood after every punch/kick makes it seem a bit like Mortal Combat Laughing.
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Jan 14, 2009 7:31 pm

Yeah, sorry about the weak looking effects... still trying to master blood!

@Aki: I was going for combat "realism", no kung-fu-hit-1000-times-before-you-die stuff! Razz
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by -Aki- on Wed Jan 14, 2009 7:36 pm

I know. I was kidding Razz.
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by Bantha on Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:25 pm

That was very cool! I always like well done lego comics. Smile
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Re: Warrior Saga #1

Post by ODST7 on Thu Jan 15, 2009 12:04 am

That looks pretty good thunder! Except the arrow is messy, but overall It's great! Can't wait for the next part.
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