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541st Vendetta #5: Frustration

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Post by Sialboats Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:06 pm

Yah, I've been spoling you all with 20 pane comics lately, haven't I? This ones' a bit smaller Wink . Mind the postioning of some of the text bubbles, still trying to perfect height and alignment. Thought regardless of height, left-alignment would be read first... but, I thought wrong Razz .

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Post by FireHawk302 Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:15 pm

Not too bad. Wink But ease off on cursing next time OK? I'm not really offended or anything, it just makes you sound like scummy bastard, you know what I mean?
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Post by Sialboats Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:16 pm

firehawk302 wrote:Not too bad. Wink But ease off on cursing next time OK? I'm not really offended or anything, it just makes you sound like scummy bastard, you know what I mean?

Well that's how Ied's batch instructor was Razz . I wouldn't curse unless I wanted to make an impression, now would I Wink ?
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Post by Thunder-blade Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:17 pm

Wooh! Action! Razz

That was awesome Sial! Effects were top-notch and the set design was perfect!

I absolutely LOVE that news on TV (holonet) effect!
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Post by Alpha Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:17 pm

firehawk302 wrote:Not too bad. Wink But ease off on cursing next time OK? I'm not really offended or anything, it just makes you sound like scummy bastard, you know what I mean?


I hate these kind of uncivilized and unthought of text responses. Mad

It's a BLOODY WARZONE!



Onto the comic, it was pretty daamn good, I see you've included your Battlefield entry, eh? I guess we'll be seeing more 815th officers... Wink
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Post by FireHawk302 Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:20 pm

Oh yeah, forgot to comment on the news thing. Wow this thing looks'oh:

That was very cool and unexpected. Can someone translate all that? Razz
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Post by 667thLegion Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:25 pm

Great job on the effects, and I like the joke about the public school! Laughing Did you use all GIMP for the news report? That was frakin' amazing! Hola Wow!
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Post by Ham701 Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:49 pm

Hehehe, its battle line Charlie, your battlefield entry, isn't it?
Great comic, I loved the holonet broadcast.
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Post by Clonecommando007 Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:09 am

I really like the idea you had with the news station airing the CIS propoganda. Great job once again on the effects and *fake* lighting. Smile
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Post by Jedi Joe Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:15 am

Pretty cool, Sial! This is becoming pretty good, we're finally getting some real action!

Although, why do all the major characters have a British accent? Razz
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Post by Sialboats Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:19 am

Jedi Joe wrote:Pretty cool, Sial! This is becoming pretty good, we're finally getting some real action!

Although, why do all the major characters have a British accent? Razz

Not all characters, do. It's mostly for realism. If the CO has a accent, and the clones are bred to learn quickly, they may learn the accents of those they associate with, if they haven't picked up a speech pattern already.

Ied = Scottish (from instructor).
Turaki = British (from family heritage)
Clones = Varies; some do, some don't. Those that do got it from Turaki
Equinox Commandos = Mostly American, few Asian.
Trek = British (from Turaki)
Captain McCulbert = American
Young Girl = American
Lieutenant Commander Amador = American
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Post by Jedi Joe Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:21 am

Well, almost all of them say bloody, but alot of English speaking Europeans do... Razz
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Post by cln-cmndo Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:43 am

He he... I love the public school joke!
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Post by Sialboats Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:59 am

It wasn't intended as a joke Razz , but rather a statement about what the clones have missed out in life, and how differently they've been affected by it.

When was the last time you've seen a thirty-fourty year old adult ready to kill because someone called them a bad name Wink ?
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Post by Comrade Faie Tue Mar 31, 2009 2:31 am

I like the GIMPing the building and debris is cool as well. An average for your standard. Wink
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Post by 80-0 Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:55 pm

Great as always; I love the 'frustration' near the end... Nice title. Wink
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Post by DarthPineapple Tue Mar 31, 2009 2:07 pm

Awesome. Some of the pics are too big again, though.
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Post by [Jay] Tue Mar 31, 2009 2:12 pm

Hey did any of you notice that this is his battlefield entry?
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Post by Sialboats Tue Mar 31, 2009 8:48 pm

Matchstick wrote:Hey did any of you notice that this is his battlefield entry?

Well, I wouldn't've let it go to waste Wink ! Put me behind a set for a comic.... Razz
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