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704th Tactical Strike - #2 - 'A Larger Perspective'

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704th Tactical Strike - #2 - 'A Larger Perspective'

Post by Alpha on Sat Feb 07, 2009 4:32 am

Previous Episodes

#1 - Night Ops.
#2 - A Larger Perspective


Okay, I made a couple mess-ups here and there, and I forgot to take the blade out of the Lightsaber, hence why there's an enormous blade. I could, however, blur it more, although that would be disproportioned. Oh, and the next comic will be much longer. Oh yes, I almost forgot, thanks TB for reminding me, credit to the last frame goes to Sial, with his AWESOME COMIC SERIES. If you havn't read them, you havn't lived. So, in other words, go die in a hole if you havn't read those.


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Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Feb 07, 2009 4:34 am

Nice!

Though the last scene looks WAY too much like something Sial did... Wink

Also, your muzzle flares need some work...they're kinda spiky...

I like the humor in this though! Can't wait for the 3rd part!
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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #2 - 'A Larger Perspective'

Post by Alpha on Sat Feb 07, 2009 4:35 am

I know, I could try to just use a brush and make a smear-like shape, but I was a bit frustrated with KotOR earlier, so it didn't come to mind.

And yes, I forgot to add Sial in the credits, hold on.

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Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Feb 07, 2009 4:37 am

What I do is do a basic shape, motion blur it a bit, and then do the Gaussians all over again (like a lightsaber or blaster bolt)

That way it's more flowing and natural!
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Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Feb 07, 2009 7:21 am

Nice! I like the special effects.
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Post by Mika Lin on Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:07 pm

great job. I especially like the last picture, with all the light.
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Post by generaldagger on Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:14 pm

I like all the rough army style talking, it really gives it an atmosphere! great job! Pilot
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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #2 - 'A Larger Perspective'

Post by Sialboats on Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:57 pm

As always Alpha, not much to pick on! The blood effect could use some work, but the rest is spot on. I'm still envying those damned blaster bolts... Razz

And, uh....

Alpha wrote:



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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #2 - 'A Larger Perspective'

Post by Alpha on Sat Feb 07, 2009 6:12 pm

Heh.

Razz Laughing

But obviously, you can't recreate that awesome scene, so yeah. Wink

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Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Feb 07, 2009 7:32 pm

Wow, very nice, Alf!

I love the blaster bolts and the last scene, not to mention the story and the way the clones talk is spot on!
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Post by Muskey15 on Sat Feb 07, 2009 8:00 pm

Incredible comic, Alpha! The effects are great!
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Post by why on Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:00 am

What happened? It goes from arth talking to Viper, and then they won the battle. You could have put more to it. Your last scene looks EXACTLY like Sial's. Other than those things, the only thing that was freaky was the granny. I hope you make her a secret agent for the seps! Wink
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Post by Alpha on Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:07 am

why wrote:What happened? It goes from arth talking to Viper, and then they won the battle. You could have put more to it. Your last scene looks EXACTLY like Sial's. Other than those things, the only thing that was freaky was the granny. I hope you make her a secret agent for the seps! Wink

True, but the only point of this was to introduce the prisoner, there's not much to put into a battle that was only supposed to be a piece of the plot. Wink

And yes, there's a reason I based that last scene off Sial's, it's like a glory blaze, when you're happy, and just won a battle, you'd wanna pose for the camera and raise your flag. Wink

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Post by Clonecommando007 on Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:54 pm

Wait; so are Alpha and Thunder working together with their legions to attack nar - shadda? Because it's getting really confusing, as we have Two #2 comics from Nar Shadda.

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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #2 - 'A Larger Perspective'

Post by Alpha on Mon Feb 09, 2009 11:13 pm

Yup, we're doing a CORPS project, we often team up with eachother, even though we're so 1337.

Joe and I are taking a trip to Manaan after this.

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Post by Uberlag on Mon Feb 09, 2009 11:14 pm

Anyone wanna be wit me in Saleucami?
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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #2 - 'A Larger Perspective'

Post by Alpha on Mon Feb 09, 2009 11:15 pm

Well, TB could help you wrap up, but since your Legion is liek ausum...

You know you don't need help. Wink Razz

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Post by Uberlag on Mon Feb 09, 2009 11:17 pm

Razz
And with my new badass storyline, anything is possible!
Yeh, do wat you wantzorz.
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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #2 - 'A Larger Perspective'

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Feb 09, 2009 11:17 pm

I don't have enough jungle pieces for Sacleumi... Wink

Plus I like my storyline with the CIS General..

Maybe Joe once he's done with Manaan?
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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #2 - 'A Larger Perspective'

Post by Alpha on Mon Feb 09, 2009 11:19 pm

Well, Manaan is gonna take quite a while...

Joe already started it, after Comic 10 of Nar Shaddaa, the Battle of Manaan begins.

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Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Feb 09, 2009 11:20 pm

Looks like Uber is on his own! Wink
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