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Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by pdragon27 on Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:20 pm

Okay, here is a moc I made a couple weeks ago with my new battlepacks....





I'm really proud of the last pic; I took it with the camera facing me!

Tell me what you think!

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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Bizzle on Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:22 pm

Hey nice vig pd. I like how the assassin droid is swinging through the air.

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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Gerrard on Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:47 pm

Make it bigger and it will be better. But otherwise, it's pretty good!
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:48 pm

Heh, 'Crystal Planet' sounds like the bootleg version of Mygeeto or Christophsis. Laughing

The MOC's okay, nothing spectacular. I'd have preferred a more built-up landscape and better greebs on the lampposts, but nobody ever listens to criticism anyway.
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by pdragon27 on Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:55 pm

Yeah, I made it in like 5 min... didn't really feel like greebling... I just wanted a place to play with my new bps... Razz
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by why on Tue Feb 17, 2009 10:05 pm

Wow! This a great little scene. I think you should make a larger one with a HUGE battle in it. That would be sweet!
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Feb 17, 2009 10:14 pm

Eh, not bad, add some greebles (when you feel like it Wink ) and some more detail!
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by pdragon27 on Tue Feb 17, 2009 10:15 pm

Yeah... I ripped it apart last week though.... I don't even know why I posted it...its sooo bad.... after all, I built it in five min...
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Muskey15 on Tue Feb 17, 2009 11:36 pm

A nice creation. Maybe make a larger version of it, with some more clones.
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Zepher on Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:38 am

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Heh, 'Crystal Planet' sounds like the bootleg version of Mygeeto or Christophsis. Laughing

The MOC's okay, nothing spectacular. I'd have preferred a more built-up landscape and better greebs on the lampposts, but nobody ever listens to criticism anyway.

Not to call you out on his topic to much, but that's not always true. Some people go back and revise (I do ocasscainally) and some store it away for the next time they build something along the same lines. I for example now know that thin legs on a Mecha, even if meant to be, are never good.

On to the MOC, needs more meat, but what you've got right now is good!
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Alpha on Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:40 am

'Crystal Planet', eh?

Wink

Anyhow, not bad, but nothing signifigant, considering you put it together in approximately 5 minutes. Wink

But, yeah, just add some more greebles, and maybe a bunch of debris, but you've scrapped it already, so...

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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by MikeZulu on Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:43 am

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Heh, 'Crystal Planet' sounds like the bootleg version of Mygeeto or Christophsis. Laughing

The MOC's okay, nothing spectacular. I'd have preferred a more built-up landscape and better greebs on the lampposts, but nobody ever listens to criticism anyway.

Nobody listens to your criticism! Razz

I thought it was good - but as whoever said above, giving it more meat will make it heaps better
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Gerrard on Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:36 pm

"The Jinja Ninja"Heh, 'Crystal Planet' sounds like the bootleg version of Mygeeto or Christophsis. Laughing

HAHA, yeah that's what I thought. No but still a good build.


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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Jens on Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:56 pm

That shot you were really pround of, wouldn't it be easier just to turn the moc around and stand up....
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by huntmaster on Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:10 pm

Nice use of battle packs still great job. Smile Green
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by pdragon27 on Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:08 pm

Jens wrote:That shot you were really pround of, wouldn't it be easier just to turn the moc around and stand up....

Yeah. I realized that AFTER I took the shot... But I probably never would have taken it if I turned it...I was trying to get the entire back, not just a close-up. Wink
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Alpha on Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:34 am

Seeing this makes me expect more stuff.

So, make some more stuff. Wink

With greebles. Razz

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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by pdragon27 on Thu Feb 19, 2009 12:29 pm

I'll be posting some new topics tomorrow....
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:53 pm

Wow, 2 pages on a five minute MOC? That's never happened before...

*remembers Rook's Felucia"

Never mind! Razz[center]
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Re: Battle of Crystal Planet

Post by Valkire on Thu Feb 19, 2009 9:12 pm

That is really cool job you've done there
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