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Post by Comrade Faie on Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:36 am

Note this is not my MOC this is Tygerb's, he asked me to post it since he can not. He wants to know what to add and how to improve on it. He says it will be a small transport. Note mine.

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Dark grey

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Post by MuffinHobo on Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:37 am

Eh I don't really have much to say about it yet.... still needs some work. Smile
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Post by Alpha on Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:38 am

Uhh...

smoothen it out a bit?

Anyways...

Firstly, the Light Gray mixed with Light Blueish Gray doesn't work.

Secondly, it needs some tiles, or some detail, it just looks like a moving pile of bricks.

Thirdly, it could have some smoothening, but he's off to a good start...

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Post by pdragon27 on Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:41 am

The front is good...hmm...I can see where he is trying to go with this...I've tried it before... hmmm...

Add a roof.
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Post by tygerb on Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:41 am

I added more to it I will post pics here tommorrow. I think the cargo bay is a little to high.
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Post by Gerrard on Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:51 am

A whole view of the MOC would be nice.
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Post by Shadowstealer on Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:17 am

Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls? Laughing
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Post by Gerrard on Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:22 am

Shadowstealer498 wrote:Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls? Laughing

Haha, nice. Yeah, they are a bit big.
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Post by Commander_Fox on Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:26 am

Shadowstealer498 wrote:Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls? Laughing
I agree, the control are a bit high. I like the cockpit you have posted here, not the one on the link. Good luck on the build!
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Post by Darth Yoda on Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:31 am

Gerrard wrote:
Shadowstealer498 wrote:Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls? Laughing

Haha, nice. Yeah, they are a bit big.

That's what she said


No really.

Anyways, I'm not really sure what you're going for and until I can find out I can't really leave much of a comment...
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Post by tygerb on Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:39 am

I will fix the controls soon. I just finished a rough draft version that I am going to modify. I will post it but I am afraid to because I might get alot of crap. Heres what happened, I ran out of dark grey so I had to use...... blue Embarassed . I know light grey and blue is TB's thing but I will change it as soon as I get the right pieces. It just needs to be modified ohh and it needs engines.
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Post by tygerb on Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:56 am

Sorry for the double post but I will be posting a super update tomorrow compared to what I originally posted.
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Post by Bantha on Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:23 pm

The slopes in the front are very nice!
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Post by DarthPineapple on Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:25 pm

The pics are too big, make them smaller.
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Post by Gerrard on Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:05 pm

darth yoda wrote:
Gerrard wrote:
Shadowstealer498 wrote:Is he trying to poke his eyes out with the controls? Laughing

Haha, nice. Yeah, they are a bit big.

That's what she said


No really.

Anyways, I'm not really sure what you're going for and until I can find out I can't really leave much of a comment...

Dy, let's leave that for the Cbox. Razz
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Post by 80-0 on Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:20 pm

OK, good start. I can envision the final piece already.

Take out the levers and install a computer panel, add curved and studless bricks just like you did to the front only to the back, over the cargo area, and make it easily removable so you can put the stuff in from the top. I'd also suggest making a little door of sorts, because in the world of SW not everyone has a giant humanoid there to lift off every little cargo speeder's top for ease of loading. Wink

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Post by cloneman10 on Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:52 pm

to much white needs more color. secondly needs detail!!!

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Post by huntmaster on Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:20 pm

I don't know it looks pretty good.
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Re: Tygerb's Transport

Post by tygerb on Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:37 am

Does anyone want any upadates yet? Smile
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Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:49 am

tygerb wrote:Does anyone want any upadates yet? Smile

Why do you ask? Do you have pictures?
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Post by tygerb on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:47 am

darth yoda wrote:
tygerb wrote:Does anyone want any upadates yet? Smile

Why do you ask? Do you have pictures?
Not yet just about to take some. I think it is my best work yet but I am a little disappointed. I need to finish the bottom and make bigger engines.
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Post by MuffinHobo on Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:48 pm

Yeah I would like to see if you made any improvements.
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Post by tygerb on Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:02 pm

MuffinHobo wrote:Yeah I would like to see if you made any improvements.
I have been gone so (voice starts to sound like announcer at a big game) ARE YOU READY FOR THE BEST MOC TYGERB HAS EVER MADE? Razz
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Post by CT44 on Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:00 pm

Yes I think we might be ready. Smile
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Re: Tygerb's Transport

Post by tygerb on Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:41 pm

clonetrooper44 wrote:Yes I think we might be ready. Smile

Here you go.






I am mad because while building I was here and I was looking at the Caymen, so when I was building the Caymen was stuck in my head. Like I said before the blue is just a place holder.
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