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Post by Uberlag on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:37 am









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Post by Bizzle on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:44 am

Nice. I like your clones alot. And the black and white gunship is cool.
Any spoilers as to what will happen in the next comic?

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Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:52 am

Eh, stop making short ones and combine them to make long ones! Razz

It's not bad, nothing really happens though, nice gunship though!
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Alpha on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:53 am

WIN.

And knowing Uber, it's just gonna be 'KILLDROIDNEXTDROID'. Razz

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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Uberlag on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:24 am

Welp, just uploaded 10 more pictures so I'll merge these 2 probably.
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:29 am

This is a bit short, make some larger ones in the future. Also, what about text bubbles instead?

EDIT: After you've edited it is longer but still a bit too short. Wink


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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Uberlag on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:30 am

Re-check, I just added 10 more slides.
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Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:31 am

And I edited it. Wink
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Uberlag on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:32 am

14 slides conveying a plot well is short?
Whats your definition of a long comic?
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Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:35 am

Well let me say it in another way: The things that happen in it are very short. They only land and then search a base, and a trooper gets something odd. In real probably like 2-3 minutes, which isn't really a story.
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Alpha on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:36 am

Pretty nice!

Though the story could be a TAD bit longer. Wink

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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:39 am

The scenery was pure awesome!

The greebles and fallen stuff made me believe it was an attacked base! Good work!
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Post by Uberlag on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:40 am

The base part was quick, but the time between scouting and entering the base was alot longer, maybe a few days.
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Alpha on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:42 am

Yeah, but the base was really cool.

As in all the fallen objects, though it'd be cool if part of the roof caved in. Razz

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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Uberlag on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:52 am

Oh yeah, that one trooper shot himself, if you guys were wondering.
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by -Aki- on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:55 am

That was pretty cool! I like their gunship.
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by cc-117 on Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:23 pm

Holy, Aki, what are you doing up that late? Shocked
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Post by Valkire on Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:45 pm

I really like the comic, and your troops look good!
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:01 pm

cc-117 wrote:Holy, Aki, what are you doing up that late? Shocked

He lives in Europe... not in the US. Wink
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Post by [Jay] on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:07 pm

Was that trooper on drugs, why was he acting so strange?

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Post by Zepher on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:25 pm

I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.
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Post by MuffinHobo on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:36 pm

great job uber! I love the gunship! Laughing
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Muskey15 on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:39 pm

Cool idea with the crazy trooper! It was a good comic as well! I'm jealous of your gunship. Can't wait to see #5!
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Uberlag on Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:51 pm

Zepher wrote:I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.

Theres no real 'ghosts' the trooper went insane with the murder of all his brothers, so he thinks that Angar and his troops are ghosts.
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Re: 92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Post by Gerrard on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:45 pm

Thats creepy! More to come?
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