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Episode 1: War

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Post by Zepher Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:41 pm

Season 1
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See if you can spot any ghosts Razz

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(Next episode will be more action packed, promise (In fact, it's almost all action, except... three slide?)


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Post by Rogue Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:42 pm

That looks nice, well done Zeph!
Oh, you got 2 of the same frame though.
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Post by Bizzle Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:46 pm

Wow nice work. I like the story so far..is the flower trooper gonna be part of this? Wink
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Post by Gerrard Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:46 pm

Very well done Zeph! I am looking forward to the next ones!
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Post by Thunder-blade Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:50 pm

Looks good Zeph!

The beginning is great! The introduction is very creative! Almost like a trailer!

One thing I'd change though is the font. It's kinda plain...
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Post by pdragon27 Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:38 pm

I feel like I've heard the beginning before....but where?
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Post by flare Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:40 pm

Pdragon wrote:I feel like I've heard the beginning before....but where?

I think the beginning of the song "pictures of you". Which BTW is a good song.
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Post by bonehead Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:41 pm

That was cool. It really puts you on the edge of you seat waiting for the next one.

"Old papa?" Razz
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Post by pdragon27 Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:41 pm

No... I think it was a movie...
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Post by flare Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:43 pm

Pdragon wrote:No... I think it was a movie...

Ok then Transformers? I'll just keep guessing since I heard "pictures of you" and I saw Transfromers in the car for 5 hours there and another 5 hours on the way back!
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Post by cc-117 Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:48 pm

Transformers? What are you talking about?I've seen that movie 1000's of times, and I didn't see any "pitcures of you" in it! By the way, the new transformers movie coming out is called "revenge of the fallen". Smile


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Post by Comrade Faie Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:49 pm

I spot those flowers. Wink Anyways I like the beginning. Normally you prolong your plots but I like how it was to the point this time.
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Post by pdragon27 Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:50 pm

Aaarrggh. Zeph, please tell me where I've heard this. BTW, is the ghost the rat behind the Kuplo?


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Post by flare Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:50 pm

cc-117 wrote:Transformers? What are you talking about?I've seen that movie 1000's of times, and I didn't see any "pitcures of you" in it! By the way, the new transformres movie coming out is called "revenge of the fallen". Smile

>.< thety are two differnt things I listened to "pictures of you" and differnt times then TRANDSFORMERS!

GUYS GET BACK ON TOPIC!

Good story Zeph!
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Post by Alpha Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:53 pm

Win.

Though it belongs in the Comics section.

Anyhow, the beginning was quite awesome, but the rest was just 'Ohsepztookplanetgogetdaplanetbackkkplzthx.' Razz

Naw, JK, it was awesome. Wink
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Post by cc-117 Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:56 pm

yes, I agree. Very awesome. now if only i could get a hold of MY mom's camera...

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Post by Alpha Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:56 pm

BTW, the ghosts are Marris Brook and Thomas Lane.
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Post by cc-117 Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:57 pm

are they? I don't know who that is.... Wink
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Post by Sialboats Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:08 am

A nice little start-up Razz, although you could have done better with effects on the opening screens Wink .
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cc-117 wrote:ok,ok...sorry dude...

I am not an admin but, better do punctuation right. Shocked
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Post by cc-117 Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:17 am

punctuation?what do you mean? I'm a level A+ in grammar, dude! Smile

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Punctuation? What do you mean? I'm a level A+ in grammar, dude! Smile
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Post by Zepher Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:25 am

Thanks all, I'll move it Alfi, and yes, sometimes story are long winded Faie, but I'm jumping into this one!
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Post by Sialboats Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:31 am

cc-117 wrote:Punctuation? What do you mean? I have a A+ in grammar, dude! Smile

HAH!

Grades mean nothing if you lack the inclination to make use of the subject matter that they are representative of your proficiency in.

Get out Roll Eyes .
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Post by pdragon27 Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:33 am

I know, right? What a waste of edumakayshun. Razz
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Post by Bly Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:43 am

Loved the comic Zeph, great work! It's good to see them back again. Smile

Sialboats wrote:Get out Roll Eyes .

Look Mr. Sunshine, it's not you're job to say leave to another member. CC-117, you really should use correct grammar though otherwise... Wink
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