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92ND LEGION DATAFILE 5 -WAR-

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Post by Uberlag on Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:49 pm






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Post by [Jay] on Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:54 pm

I love those clones. Mmmm... Razz

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Post by thunder-clone on Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:56 pm

Nice, I wish we could see some more. The clones are great, but I wish there was some fighting in it.
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Post by Uberlag on Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:58 pm

I kind of left out a slide with fighting in it, I might throw it in now...
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Post by FireHawk302 on Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:24 pm

Very cool! I love the clones. And the end was very...er...Whats the word...dramatic-ish? Razz
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Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:33 pm

Nice!

Though you need to work on your speech bubble placement. It was hard to tell which one was being said first.
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Post by Felix42 on Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:39 pm

great comc! Those clones are awesome! I just love Captain Anger. (is that his name?) You also have a good story line. And the base in the backround is cool too.
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Post by Gerrard on Wed Feb 25, 2009 8:50 pm

Cool, nice job Uber. I like the plot.
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Post by pdragon27 on Wed Feb 25, 2009 8:53 pm

Good... but work on speech buuble placement and spelling...there were a couple typos...
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Post by that guy in that movie on Wed Feb 25, 2009 10:02 pm

Looks really cool but like Pdragon said there are a few typos........... But this deserves a 50/10. Smile


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Post by pdragon27 on Wed Feb 25, 2009 10:03 pm

that guy in that movie wrote:Looks really cool but like Pdrgon said there are a few typos...........

You have one too. Also, Uber, the end was kinda confusing... So Angar is pinned down or something?
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Post by Clonecommando874 on Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:25 am

I liked the clones the best.
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Post by Zepher on Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:44 am

Man, people can't ever understand your comics it seems.

I get this one completely.

Here's my only advice in comic making.

-Very clear pictures are needed.

-Lighter pictures are needed.

-Work on tieing the bubbles to the mouths.

That's really it! I liked it!

You can also make an episode guide now, whjich I will happily pin!
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Post by clonesilvergree on Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:23 am

The only thing I have to say is that those clones look a little messy...
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Post by Comrade Faie on Thu Feb 26, 2009 8:27 pm

clonesilvergree wrote:The only thing I have to say is that those clones look a little messy...

And you are? You really don't have the right, show me one of your clones.

Anyways I like it Uber! Everything is pretty well done. I hope you make my storyline your comics!

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