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95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

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95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:18 am

This is kind of a short one.



















Sorry if this one is kinda jumpy, I did this over the course of 3 days, guess my train of thought was interrupted. Laughing
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by 80-0 on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:21 am

Looks pretty good, if one or two shots are blurry, but I like the story and your characters have definitely improved in quality. Wink

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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Uberlag on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:21 am

The commandos at the end are BADASS!
I WANT COMMANDOS NAOW!
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by shadow trooper on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:22 am

Pretty neat. Just make it a little longer.
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Zepher on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:24 am

I liked it TB, though all the characters are confusing. What happened to the other ARC's in Xet's squad again? The others that are missing?

and yeah, a few pictures were blurry.

Still: I need you as a GIMP MENTOR!!!!! Waaa!
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Post by Darth Yoda on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:25 am

shadow trooper wrote:Pretty neat. Just make it a little longer.

Since I've decided to be more mature I won't say that's what she said.... Wink

Tb this is excellent except the blurry pics as 80-0 pointed out.
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by 80-0 on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:26 am

LOL! That's almost just like what the other guy said! Wink

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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Gerrard on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:27 am

Nice TB> I really like it. Will be looking forward to the next one!

Oh and I also the the Gun shot when they are trying to capture the arc trooper. GIMP I suppose?
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Felix42 on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:36 am

Awesome comic, TB! You have a sweet story line. But, why did that soldier bleed, when the ARC kicked him? Did he kick him in the jaw? Because that would explain why the soldier keep bleeding. Awesome GIMPing!!! I love the hologram! And, the blaster bolts! Cannot wait for the next comic!
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:37 am

Zepher wrote:I liked it TB, though all the characters are confusing. What happened to the other ARC's in Xet's squad again? The others that are missing?

and yeah, a few pictures were blurry.

Still: I need you as a GIMP MENTOR!!!!! Waaa!

So this is what happened Zeph. The other 3 ARCs have been captured by the CIS. And Xets was in the lower city because he was kicked off the airspeeder.

And the pics are blurry because I used my tripod and I had to zoom alot.
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by pdragon27 on Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:16 am

2 Hours? I doubt even real battles take that long. And in the Star Wars world... Ships get destroyed in a matter of minutes... Well, I love that badass ARC. How'd you do those Mythosaur skulls net to the "chokes"? Is it a special font? If so, can meesa have a linky?
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Alpha on Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:31 am

Bloody, did you somehow predict that I was gonna send Anna to the Infinity to command the overhead space battle?!

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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by LegoBoyRobert on Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:38 am

Dang sweet, TB. I hope to see a lot more of those commandos. Nice battle with the ARC, too.

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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Commander_Fox on Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:58 am

Pretty good! The GIMPing is awesome, as always. I ENVY YOUR SHARPIE-ING SKILLZ!
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by 80-0 on Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:53 pm

Pdragon wrote:2 Hours? I doubt even real battles take that long. And in the Star Wars world... Ships get destroyed in a matter of minutes... Well, I love that badass ARC. How'd you do those Mythosaur skulls net to the "chokes"? Is it a special font? If so, can meesa have a linky?

What the heck? Mythosaur? All that is is the Mandalorian skull, and it's as easy as pie to change in color or size.

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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Comrade Faie on Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:37 pm

I like it, the GIMP blood is pretty good. I love how you can incorporate a lot of your clones into one battle.

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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Jedi Joe on Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:03 pm

I am also wondering why the militant bled when Xets choked him.

Everything but that is AWESOME! Smile

The commandos are awesome at the end, but we all know my upcoming chromized commandos will school them... Wink
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:54 pm

Nice looking scene you have there.
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Sialboats on Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:08 pm

My two credits:

The plot was hard to follow at times, and the GIMP wasn't too great. We go from a blurry picture with a barely discernable hologram, to a dead ARC who comes back to life and pwns a whole squad of milita, to a battleship with six very large vulture droids outside the window, going in a direction different than it is, to a bunch of Republic Commandos in a gunship.

Not your best work Waaa! .
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:20 pm

Yeah, I got pretty lazy on this one...

And I think I was a little overambitious with the many storylines, and I didn't execute it properly...
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Gerrard on Sun Mar 01, 2009 7:17 pm

Ok then, my question is answered. Wow this thing looks
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Zepher on Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:08 pm

Sialboats wrote:My two credits:

The plot was hard to follow at times, and the GIMP wasn't too great. We go from a blurry picture with a barely discernable hologram, to a dead ARC who comes back to life and pwns a whole squad of milita, to a battleship with six very large vulture droids outside the window, going in a direction different than it is, to a bunch of Republic Commandos in a gunship.

Not your best work Waaa! .

I disagree with you completely. The three storylines is what made me love this so much. Changing stories every so often is good. you only had two, and they simply traded out once, but it's got an epic feel to it, which I really like.
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Re: 95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Mar 02, 2009 12:10 am

Well I'm glad you enjoyed it Zeph!

But I will take all of Sial's ideas to heart, there's always room for improvement!
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