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Post by CT44 Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:26 pm

Commander Hawk:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3488/3297322785_120855e7e8.jpg?v=0

Still thinking of a background for him.

Comments appreciated! Smile
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Post by Bizzle Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:27 pm

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There I fixed it for you.

I like the color and how smooth he looks good job.
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Post by CT44 Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:28 pm

Thanks, it took me a while to get it just perfect. Smile
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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:29 pm

Nice job!

The color is good, straight lines and it's even!

The one thing you need is detail though, add some stuff on the legs and arms!
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Post by CT44 Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:32 pm

Thanks TB, that means a lot coming from you. Smile
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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:00 pm

No problem. Wink

So add those knee caps and shoulders!
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Post by DarthPineapple Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:24 pm

Nice straight lines, almost perfect!
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Post by CT44 Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:31 pm

Haha, thanks DP, I will post pictures of the updated legs and arms soon. Smile
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Post by MuffinHobo Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:54 pm

Pretty good sharpie job. I think it's pretty good! 😁
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Post by Clonecommando007 Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:17 pm

Overall, a decent sharpie job. Smile You could add a bit, such as detailing with a pinpoint black sharpie for the kneecaps or whatnot, but you have the overall color scheme, and helmet, done well. SmileHigh Five!😁
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Post by Gerrard Sun Feb 22, 2009 2:36 pm

I really like the helmet color. Good job!
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Post by PhiMa Sun Feb 22, 2009 2:46 pm

I like the Overall color. Some kind of yellowish-Orange. I rarely see custom clone like this. Good job!
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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:38 pm

Oh, one more thing you might want to add.

Add a pauldron, because he looks funny with a kama if he doesn't have a pauldron! Laughing
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Post by CT44 Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:40 pm

Ya I know I am waiting untill DP's get here.
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Post by Darth Yoda Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:06 pm

Hmmm... Don't use sharpie on the legs... the helmet looks good though...
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Post by Blue Shadow Virus Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:32 pm

Ooh, yellow...I like it, it's a nicely done figure, the yellow accents are great. Very simple but effective. Good job!
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Post by Commander Mongoose Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:41 pm

What is that weird bloch in the torso? I think that's a turn off, but I like the helmet!
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Post by goog21 Thu Mar 05, 2009 11:27 pm

i love it. i would like it better if it had a little detail on the arms

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Post by Delta 1608 Thu Mar 05, 2009 11:33 pm

very cool, how long did it take you? Hola Wow!

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Post by Sialboats Thu Mar 05, 2009 11:35 pm

BOTH OF YOU!

Goog, and Fake-Alpha, I smell a ban coming on if you don't go back and read the Guild Constitution RIGHT now Roll Eyes . We laud intelligence, and attack those who don't have the decency to even attempt to use basic grammatical and spelling rules.
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