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704th Tactical Strike - #4 - 'Time to Die, Jedi...'

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704th Tactical Strike - #4 - 'Time to Die, Jedi...'

Post by Alpha on Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:51 am

Previous Episodes

#1 - Night Ops.
#2 - A Larger Perspective
#3 - Repercussions
#4 - Time to Die, Jedi...



Downloaded Obsidian's brushes again for the glass, though I think I went a bit crazy. Razz Anyhow, first time greenscreening in mass numbers, so be lenient! Razz Wink

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Post by huntmaster on Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:53 am

Nice job alpha I like the part with the marine(sorry I don't know his name). Embarassed
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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #4 - 'Time to Die, Jedi...'

Post by pdragon27 on Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:00 am

Hmm..interesting... but why would the clones die in space? Their suits protect them. That last shot wasn't as epic as Sial's...
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Post by Jedi Joe on Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:02 am

Wow, that's awesome, Alf!

I love how Viper got grey hair, by being overdosed with the age genome... Razz
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Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:05 am

Haha! The caption in the last one was pure win! Razz

It looks good! great storyline!
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Post by Gerrard on Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:05 am

Sweet that is awesome! I like the part at the end where it is blurry. It is a perfect picture and special effect!
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Post by 80-0 on Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:19 am

Pardon my ignorance, but what does sirritartli or whatever he says at the end mean? Surprised

Nice comic otherwise! Smile

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Post by Gerrard on Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:23 am

I think it is saying....


"Sir, sir it's alright" or something like that.
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Post by Alpha on Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:32 am

Gerrard wrote:I think it is saying....


"Sir, sir it's alright" or something like that.

Yup. Nailed it on the head, threw it in the center, . straight. Razz

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Post by Gerrard on Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:57 am

Why thank you Alpha, that means a lot. Razz
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Post by Felix42 on Fri Mar 13, 2009 2:36 am

Awesome comic!! I like the space scene! Poor Viper. He is an old man! Weird cloners... The hologram was nice! The effects were cool too! Sweet comic!
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Post by Alpha on Fri Mar 13, 2009 2:37 am

Pdragon wrote:Hmm..interesting... but why would the clones die in space? Their suits protect them. That last shot wasn't as epic as Sial's...

They don't die, but they get sucked into even with their suits on, these are regular foot soldiers, not those elite, commando h4xing Zero-G Troopers.

And I don't get why people compare to Sials... I wonder... insertrollsmileyhere

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Post by Awesome-o-saurus on Fri Mar 13, 2009 2:43 am

I don't know either. This ain't Sial's comic, it's your comic. I do hope people will think that way when I post mine.

Very nice by the way. I like the cracked glass effect.
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Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Mar 13, 2009 4:33 am

Alpha wrote:
Pdragon wrote:Hmm..interesting... but why would the clones die in space? Their suits protect them. That last shot wasn't as epic as Sial's...

They don't die, but they get sucked into even with their suits on, these are regular foot soldiers, not those elite, commando h4xing Zero-G Troopers.

And I don't get why people compare to Sials... I wonder... insertrollsmileyhere

Yeah they didn't die... not yet anyway Razz
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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #4 - 'Time to Die, Jedi...'

Post by Sialboats on Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:55 pm

Two major plot holes.

One: The whole "mystery" behind the glass breaking of the windscreen is not mysterious at all.. just irritating.
Two: Where'd the assassin droid come from?

Story was good, barring those two errrors Razz .

As always, I envy the ilumination of your bolts, (color balance much Wink ), but advise you to not become dependant on brushes. You seriously botched the windscreen cracks, the metal panes had lines all over them, and the opacity on the cracked pieces in the subsquent frame overlapped and ruined the realism. Perspective was also off on the last shot... Wink

My two credits Smile .
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Post by 667thLegion on Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:22 pm

I think it was good! I liked the shattered windscreen thing at the beginning! What brushes did you use?
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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #4 - 'Time to Die, Jedi...'

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Mar 14, 2009 12:01 am

Alpha wrote:
Downloaded Obsidian's brushes again for the glass, though I think I went a bit crazy. Razz Anyhow, first time greenscreening in mass numbers, so be lenient! Razz Wink

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Does that help 667th? Razz

Can I have a link to these brushes?
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Re: 704th Tactical Strike - #4 - 'Time to Die, Jedi...'

Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:10 am

I didn't like the shattered glass, and I was confused as to what happened on Mace's ship.

Also, they said Torren died? I'm confused on that... maybe if you two had a super list of overlapping comics, that would be cool (like really fit in the order that it happened it...)

Over-all good other than those two things. It's lacking any epic scenes, but you know, Viper's talking with Zeph (Jedi, not me) was cool. It's a clear set up to a new and different story arc, so it's all good.

Can't wait for more! It's a wierd sort of cliff hanger, not really worried about the characters, just... wondering, but I'm hooked on wondering what's next!
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Post by Alpha on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:21 am

Torran didn't die, he was just cut off, so Viper was referring to the fact that he was 'incapped', as he was trapped in orbit. Wink

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Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:21 am

Yep, I requested that Alf make a nod at what's happening to Torran (since we're in the same Corps) so you kinda have to read both our comics to really get it. Wink
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Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:24 am

I do. I told you, I'm a huge fan of your comics TB (Curently my personal favorite on CABG) but I mut of not remembered that detail. i'll go back and find it.
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Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:35 am

How can you like my comics better than Sial's?

IMO, some of my comics are rushed, the GIMPing doesn't look good in places, and my storyline is kinda jumpy..

Thanks though! It means alot! Smile
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Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:38 am

Storyline jumping is good. I love stories where tons of characters are running around, and you have to really work to keep track of them! That way when they meet back up you can go back and seewhen they last met, and what's happened to them since. It's personal preference.

GIMPing is just effects. They matter, but story is what I care about. lots of purty pictures aren't even close to an intense and fun story.

On that respect... Sial's are also incredible, and I consider him a fantastic auther in the comic and writing world.
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Post by Alpha on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:40 am

Yeah, because no one cares to see EVERY maneuver and motion, they just want to get to the point and enjoy an awesome comic. Wink



Coughcough. Razz

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Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:42 am

Yeah, I was aware.

I don't know what the top part of your post was referencing though.
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