704th Tactical Strike - #4 - 'Time to Die, Jedi...'
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704th Tactical Strike - #4 - 'Time to Die, Jedi...'
Previous Episodes
#1 - Night Ops.
#2 - A Larger Perspective
#3 - Repercussions
#4 - Time to Die, Jedi...
#1 - Night Ops.
#2 - A Larger Perspective
#3 - Repercussions
#4 - Time to Die, Jedi...
Downloaded Obsidian's brushes again for the glass, though I think I went a bit crazy. Anyhow, first time greenscreening in mass numbers, so be lenient!
704th Tactical Strike - #4 - 'Time to Die, Jedi...'
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Nice job alpha I like the part with the marine(sorry I don't know his name).
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Hmm..interesting... but why would the clones die in space? Their suits protect them. That last shot wasn't as epic as Sial's...
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Wow, that's awesome, Alf!
I love how Viper got grey hair, by being overdosed with the age genome...
I love how Viper got grey hair, by being overdosed with the age genome...
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
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Haha! The caption in the last one was pure win!
It looks good! great storyline!
It looks good! great storyline!
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Sweet that is awesome! I like the part at the end where it is blurry. It is a perfect picture and special effect!
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Pardon my ignorance, but what does sirritartli or whatever he says at the end mean?
Nice comic otherwise!
Nice comic otherwise!
80-0- Non-Guild Member
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Location : New York, New YORK!
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I think it is saying....
"Sir, sir it's alright" or something like that.
"Sir, sir it's alright" or something like that.
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Gerrard wrote:I think it is saying....
"Sir, sir it's alright" or something like that.
Yup. Nailed it on the head, threw it in the center, . straight.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Awesome comic!! I like the space scene! Poor Viper. He is an old man! Weird cloners... The hologram was nice! The effects were cool too! Sweet comic!
Felix42- Non-Guild Member
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Pdragon wrote:Hmm..interesting... but why would the clones die in space? Their suits protect them. That last shot wasn't as epic as Sial's...
They don't die, but they get sucked into even with their suits on, these are regular foot soldiers, not those elite, commando h4xing Zero-G Troopers.
And I don't get why people compare to Sials... I wonder... insertrollsmileyhere
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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I don't know either. This ain't Sial's comic, it's your comic. I do hope people will think that way when I post mine.
Very nice by the way. I like the cracked glass effect.
Very nice by the way. I like the cracked glass effect.
Awesome-o-saurus- Non-Guild Member
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Alpha wrote:Pdragon wrote:Hmm..interesting... but why would the clones die in space? Their suits protect them. That last shot wasn't as epic as Sial's...
They don't die, but they get sucked into even with their suits on, these are regular foot soldiers, not those elite, commando h4xing Zero-G Troopers.
And I don't get why people compare to Sials... I wonder... insertrollsmileyhere
Yeah they didn't die... not yet anyway
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Two major plot holes.
One: The whole "mystery" behind the glass breaking of the windscreen is not mysterious at all.. just irritating.
Two: Where'd the assassin droid come from?
Story was good, barring those two errrors .
As always, I envy the ilumination of your bolts, (color balance much ), but advise you to not become dependant on brushes. You seriously botched the windscreen cracks, the metal panes had lines all over them, and the opacity on the cracked pieces in the subsquent frame overlapped and ruined the realism. Perspective was also off on the last shot...
My two credits .
One: The whole "mystery" behind the glass breaking of the windscreen is not mysterious at all.. just irritating.
Two: Where'd the assassin droid come from?
Story was good, barring those two errrors .
As always, I envy the ilumination of your bolts, (color balance much ), but advise you to not become dependant on brushes. You seriously botched the windscreen cracks, the metal panes had lines all over them, and the opacity on the cracked pieces in the subsquent frame overlapped and ruined the realism. Perspective was also off on the last shot...
My two credits .
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I think it was good! I liked the shattered windscreen thing at the beginning! What brushes did you use?
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Alpha wrote:
Downloaded Obsidian's brushes again for the glass, though I think I went a bit crazy. Anyhow, first time greenscreening in mass numbers, so be lenient!
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Does that help 667th?
Can I have a link to these brushes?
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I didn't like the shattered glass, and I was confused as to what happened on Mace's ship.
Also, they said Torren died? I'm confused on that... maybe if you two had a super list of overlapping comics, that would be cool (like really fit in the order that it happened it...)
Over-all good other than those two things. It's lacking any epic scenes, but you know, Viper's talking with Zeph (Jedi, not me) was cool. It's a clear set up to a new and different story arc, so it's all good.
Can't wait for more! It's a wierd sort of cliff hanger, not really worried about the characters, just... wondering, but I'm hooked on wondering what's next!
Also, they said Torren died? I'm confused on that... maybe if you two had a super list of overlapping comics, that would be cool (like really fit in the order that it happened it...)
Over-all good other than those two things. It's lacking any epic scenes, but you know, Viper's talking with Zeph (Jedi, not me) was cool. It's a clear set up to a new and different story arc, so it's all good.
Can't wait for more! It's a wierd sort of cliff hanger, not really worried about the characters, just... wondering, but I'm hooked on wondering what's next!
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Torran didn't die, he was just cut off, so Viper was referring to the fact that he was 'incapped', as he was trapped in orbit.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Yep, I requested that Alf make a nod at what's happening to Torran (since we're in the same Corps) so you kinda have to read both our comics to really get it.
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I do. I told you, I'm a huge fan of your comics TB (Curently my personal favorite on CABG) but I mut of not remembered that detail. i'll go back and find it.
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How can you like my comics better than Sial's?
IMO, some of my comics are rushed, the GIMPing doesn't look good in places, and my storyline is kinda jumpy..
Thanks though! It means alot!
IMO, some of my comics are rushed, the GIMPing doesn't look good in places, and my storyline is kinda jumpy..
Thanks though! It means alot!
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Storyline jumping is good. I love stories where tons of characters are running around, and you have to really work to keep track of them! That way when they meet back up you can go back and seewhen they last met, and what's happened to them since. It's personal preference.
GIMPing is just effects. They matter, but story is what I care about. lots of purty pictures aren't even close to an intense and fun story.
On that respect... Sial's are also incredible, and I consider him a fantastic auther in the comic and writing world.
GIMPing is just effects. They matter, but story is what I care about. lots of purty pictures aren't even close to an intense and fun story.
On that respect... Sial's are also incredible, and I consider him a fantastic auther in the comic and writing world.
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Yeah, because no one cares to see EVERY maneuver and motion, they just want to get to the point and enjoy an awesome comic.
Coughcough.
Coughcough.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Yeah, I was aware.
I don't know what the top part of your post was referencing though.
I don't know what the top part of your post was referencing though.
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