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Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:48 am

Season 1
Episode 3
The Invasion of Inagration Part 2: Charge










































Enjoy!

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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Alpha on Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:49 am

The blurring was too overdone. Razz

But nice Comic, can't wait for more!

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Post by huntmaster on Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:49 am

Wow this is a nice comic I like it very well done. Smile
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Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:51 am

huntmaster wrote:Wow this is a nice comic I like it very well done. Smile

Just to help you out (since this is what Alfi's grilling you about in the C-Box) what speciaifcally do you like. Or dislike. Give some sort of real feed-back.
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Post by huntmaster on Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:55 am

Zepher wrote:
huntmaster wrote:Wow this is a nice comic I like it very well done. Smile

Just to help you out (since this is what Alfi's grilling you about in the C-Box) what speciaifcally do you like. Or dislike. Give some sort of real feed-back.


Oh I forgot to say I like the gimp but I dislike that it's short.
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Post by CT44 on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:02 am

It's not short, it's actually a little long compared to the others on CABG.
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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:04 am

CT44 wrote:It's not short, it's actually a little long compared to the others on CABG.

That's a fact I was going to point out.

Most comics done by Sial are only 11-15 pages, wher mine can be 16-22.

I don't know an average of the others becuse there aren't as many of them....
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Post by Alpha on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:05 am

Mine are about 10-14.

Because I havn't gotten to the good parts yet. Razz

Anyhow, is Mace gonna see action in your Comics? Or is he gonna be a background character, with occasional hologram contacts?

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Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:12 am

Mace? I think I've used him the only time he'll be seen. He can't be main, my comics aren't completely canon, but they really can't be too uncanon. Mace is doing lots of other things during the Clone Wars, e's accounted for almost the whole time. It wouldn't make sense for him to interact with my character. Lesser Jedi (Plo?) may show up at season starters or faniles... but not too much.
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Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:18 am

Very nice.

Good plot, and very nice battle scenes!

And I do agree with Alpha, you should use the blurring sparingly.
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Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:21 am

I don't plan on using it too much guys. But I see your point.

I wanted their first battle to show them in the moment, so that their back stories (and Versilles tackle) will be justified. The blurriness was to show the rubbling from the heavy Larty shots. I know it wouldn't be to heavy, but symbolism has it's place.

I'll keep it in mind from now on though. i thought it would be wierd with only one shot like that though. And if four is over using it... may have to cut it Razz
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Post by Alpha on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:24 am

What WAS the blurring for?

Was there some kinda bombing raid/air support pounding down on the city?

And are the civillians there CIS supporters, or just hostages? Shocked

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Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:25 am

Zepher wrote:I don't plan on using it too much guys. But I see your point.

I wanted their first battle to show them in the moment, so that their back stories (and Versilles tackle) will be justified. The blurriness was to show the rubbling from the heavy Larty shots. I know it wouldn't be to heavy, but symbolism has it's place.

I'll keep it in mind from now on though. i thought it would be wierd with only one shot like that though. And if four is over using it... may have to cut it Razz

You ought ta pay more attention Alf! Razz
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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:27 am

The civilains are just going along with thier lives. Currently their city is under CIS control. They don't love it, but they can't stop the CIS currently. Besides, the CIS rule isn't effecting them to much. I admit I didn't mention that... I assumed it was obvious. It was in my head Razz
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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Alpha on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:27 am

So, the Laarty' be taking shots at innocent people? Razz

Oh well, it was cool in the first shot, but it got a bit redundant after a while. Razz

Just a note, why does Kuplo/whatever his name was care about casualties? It's 1 frackin' trooper, I predict it's ;Clone died now feel sad please' all over again. Wink


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Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:29 am

Alpha wrote:So, the Laarty' be taking shots at innocent people? Razz Exactly. The clones are in it to win it. The Jedi (Versilles) is here to sae people. This equal future conflict!

Oh well, it was cool in the first shot, but it got a bit redundant after a while. Razz Only four shots. And it would be wierd if it was only one. Again I won't use it overly from now on Wow this thing looks
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Post by Felix42 on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:35 am

Awesome! I like the clones, and the GIMP. The battle was nice, too. But, why would the Jedi attack? There were people there. They could have killed them. Sweet comic!
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Post by Jens on Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:13 am

great job! The effects were really cool, I like how you added the lines onto some trans-bricks so you didn't have to gimp too much.

I love the story so far, I can already see future conflicts between the Jedi and Clone.

But one thing, remember the micro shots you always did in the first frame for every Squad 47, yeah I miss that.
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Post by Sialboats on Sat Mar 14, 2009 11:11 am

Bra-flucking-vo, Zeph! This has to be the best one I've seen so far. The plot is straightforward and easy to follow, and the effects are definately improving! Good use of screen-shake to convey the chaos of the masses, and you're really gettin' the hang of the fire effect Wink .


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Re: Episode 3: The Invasion of Ingration Part 2: Charge

Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:07 pm

Other than the fact that I personally did not like the fire in this one... thanks! It means a lot coming from you of course, and after T-B and Alfi's tearing of it ( Razz ) I wasn't sure if it was good or not! So thanks to you and Jens!
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Post by Alpha on Sat Mar 14, 2009 5:02 pm

Well excuse me. Razz

But the fire really is turning out well, now all you need to do is make it extend out in mass numbers, or increase the size. When you increase the size, make about 20+ strokes up, and it'll look . good.

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Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 14, 2009 5:17 pm

Yeah. I'm going to shy away from fire for a while, simply becuase I won't need it!
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Post by Fixer on Sat Mar 14, 2009 5:52 pm

Nice work, as usual, Zeph! Clear pictures, intriguing story, and great FX.
The only thing I absolutely don't like are the blindingly bright yellow tiles on the floor;
but that's a minor nitpick mostly having to do with a personal preference about the color yellow.

Keep 'em coming! (:

-Fix, who absolutely despise the color yellow.
If someone gives me a yellow Ferrari though, I'm not going to outright refuse.
Though it might depend on the year and model... ;P


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Post by Comrade Faie on Sat Mar 14, 2009 7:01 pm

To start, I always love your pictures. Very clear and not grainy.

I also love how you can focus in on one object and make the others look like their not in focus, like in real life.

The fire is good, but I think your sets are just lacking that little something. Detail. I love detailed sets, I love how Sial always had miscellaneous objects (streetlight, etc...).

So I would suggest a bit more realistic pizazz. Wink


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Post by Zepher on Sun Mar 15, 2009 2:40 am

Commander Faie wrote:To start, I always love your pictures. Very clear and not grainy.

I also love how you can focus in on one object and make the others look like their not in focus, like in real life.

The fire is good, but I think your sets are just lacking that little something. Detail. I love detailed sets, I love how Sial always had miscellaneous objects (streetlight, etc...).

So I would suggest a bit more realistic pizazz. Wink

I agree with you Faie, and will definatly work on that. I'm getting lazy (with both AN and the comics) and have just made quick sets. Starting in two weeks I'll work harder on details! Thanks for snapping me back into high gear Wow this thing looks
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