Battle of Naboo V.2. redone with damage ect.

As the battle of Naboo rages on the 82nd tries to drive the drids from the city to save the city and planet from CIS control. Their mission is to drive the droids out or die trying. As the droids begin to waver the clones rally for one final push then pause. There to help the droids win the battle is a assassin droid. But the clone come back to their senses and once again rally to drive the droids from the city. The clones are aided by two mando's. The clones are lead by Mace,I forget how to spell the rest of his name, and commanders Fox and Bizzle.


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Sorry for the crappyness of the pics but the lighting wasn't right and I didn't feel like waiting till tomorrow to take the pics. This is made with only legos unlike my last Naboo MOC. I couldn't make the arches tan because it was after I received my order that the guy posted them. This took me about 2 1/2 weeks or about 45+ hours to build. Near the top,I don't know if you can see it,there is a level of neon-green 1x1 studs to make it look like a light.


Tell me how to improve ect please.

Pics are WAY too small too see what's happening... give us some bigger pics please!

Thunder-blade wrote:Pics are WAY too small too see what's happening... give us some bigger pics please!

AHHHH. NOOOO!!! That means I have to re-upload them... I'll do it in a min...

The different colors of baseplates is quite odd. Though the MOC itself is nice!

DarthPineapple wrote:The different colors of baseplates is quite odd. Though the MOC itself is nice!

Well the area around the "pond" is supposed to me like a sandy color tile. The gray is like a walk way around it and since I didn't have enough money to by the gray squares to replace the green I left it like that. I was also gonna put bushes there but once again I didn't have enough money.

Maybe put some more objects on th ground, either fallen objects or something like that. But I like it and nice job!

Gerrard wrote:Maybe put some more objects on th ground, either fallen objects or something like that.

Yeah, this looks NOTHING like a battlefield. No battle damage, no front lines, no troops in cover, or trying to get to cover, et cetra.

Vehicle heavy too.

Thanks for the input guys. I can add ALOT of tan ruins and stuff. I don't know about the vehicle though. I like it in the scene. I can add the ruins though. So I'll totally redo this and maybe knock the tree down since the STAP crashed into it.

WOAH! The main reason I say this is because I could never do anything like that!

ok so I added a pillar that is partly destroyed being held up by technic poles. I made a "hole" from an explosion in front of the "pond",I also put a part of a fallen pillar where the command post used to be. The tree is no knocked down with a clone under it. The clone was killed in the fall of the tree. And I added a little bit of cover for the clones where the droid eka is going to be. I kept the LAA/HA but got rid of the command post. It now looks more like a battle field. I will post pics either tonight or tomorrow.

Hmm, now what is Boba Fett doing in there, hmmm?
And I agree with Sial, it looks nothing like a battle, no cover or anything

Ham701 wrote:Hmm, now what is Boba Fett doing in there, hmmm?
And I agree with Sial, it looks nothing like a battle, no cover or anything

He is doubling as a mando. Since I have none.
Well if you read my previous post you wouldn't have said that!!!

Oh hehe, sorry bout that laddie buck!(It's Saint Patrick's Day!)

Ham701 wrote:Oh hehe, sorry bout that laddie buck!(It's Saint Patrick's Day!)

Eh its fine we all make mistakes. I'm a laddie now..Are you a lass or a laddie?

Here is what the final version looks like.















Those are the main changes I made. I still have a be-headed clone by the droid eka.



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Is that enough damage ect for you Sial?

I'll take more pics later the light isn't goon enough right now.

Looks awesome, DB, I really like all of the debris.

It's better, but a lot of the rubble's origins are hard to locate. For example: I know that x pile of debris came from this building, because these pieces build that building. Just look at pictures of REAL battlefields .

I still think it's a bit heavy on the vehicles, and infanty, but that's personal taste .

Maybe put some more gray fallen objects but it is better.

Sialboats wrote:It's better, but a lot of the rubble's origins are hard to locate. For example: I know that x pile of debris came from this building, because these pieces build that building. Just look at pictures of REAL battlefields .

I still think it's a bit heavy on the vehicles, and infanty, but that's personal taste .

yea that one pillar in the middle is easy to identify but the one on the right came from off map so to speak. I might give it another try later but I don't have the time right now to redo parts of it.


Eh I like it but I see what you mean. Im thinkin fewer clones same amount of droids.



Plus you gotta remember that I am relatively new to MOCing. Well atleast on this scale.