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Post by Clonecommando007 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:48 pm

Greetings!

This is the sixth installment in my Chronicles series. Originally this comic was to be 31 images long, but I split it into two. The seventh comic has been prepared and is ready to be released, but this one builds up tension.

Please read all prior comics, or you will be completely lost to some of the plot!



























Hope you enjoyed it!

This comic is shorter compared to my other ones, but the plot builds with this and there is quite a bit to read in the begining.

Comments and constructive criticism, as well as anticipation for the fighting scenes can go here! Smile


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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by CT44 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:49 pm

Shocked I loved this one, CC, really great! Smile
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Post by Jedi Joe on Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:54 pm

Axel got killed! Surprised

Good story! I love the action in the med bay!
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Post by Alpha on Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:54 pm

What the fuk'uck!?

He just killed a Clone Marshal Commander, Davy is a defunct Clone who needs to be compromised.

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Post by Clonecommando007 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:56 pm

To be honest, I wouldn't have killed him if the Corps system wasn't re-organized. Razz

Worst still, I have a fully detailed shock trooper that I can't use. Shocked

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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Jedi Joe on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:00 pm

How come the Jedi didn't even do anything?

Jedi + One Clone = Bad day for that clone.
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Post by Gerrard on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:01 pm

Great comic CC! Lot's of action!
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Post by CT44 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:01 pm

I noticed that too, JJ, I couldn't figure out why.
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Post by pdragon27 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:04 pm

Amazing story, as usual CC. I like how you made Davy go mad from all those days fighting the Trandos aboard his ship!
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:07 pm

That Jedi in particular, as you will see, 'General Forlorne', likes to stand back and watch the events unfold. He was relatively unamused. He guessed that Davy was going crazy, but he wanted to see it in him for sure. Besides, no sense in aprehending him right there, no need to. They can capture him at any time they want really.

And Gerrard, if you mean 'lots of action' as in fighting and combat, then you clearly didn't read the comic. Wink

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Post by Dutch on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:10 pm

Man that was epic Shocked I loved the part where he shot the other clone kind of like on Star Wars The Clone Wars:Hidden Enemies. I can,t wait till the next one. Smile
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Post by Heady on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:29 pm

Wow, talk about an amazing comic. I loved the part where Davy snapped, that was ingenious!
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Post by Felix42 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:37 pm

Awesome comic! I like the med trooper. And the med center thing. Davy killing a fellow clone!? That was surprising! The buildings, in the fight, were made well! So Davy wants to be the best Clone Commander, and his men the best troopers? And what does he hope to gain? Well, the comic was awesome, and I cannot wait for the next one.
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Bizzle on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:43 pm

Hey nice comic again CC. But really why didn't the jedi do anything to stop the clone.

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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by 80-0 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:56 pm

A situation like this makes you wonder about the integrity of the Jedi, no? Loved it! Every bit; can't wait to see the rotary crew get in there...

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Post by cln-cmndo on Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:15 am

Wow! That was probably the best one yet!
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Post by Kieya'Yatinn on Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:25 am

You just gave me an idea. Nice comic. But I found boring.
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by CT44 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:27 am

godzilla98 wrote:You just gave me an idea. Nice comic. But I found boring.

Well if you took the time to read it it wouldn't be boring.Roll Eyes
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Post by cln-cmndo on Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:28 am

Wasn't boring in my opinion. Roll Eyes
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Post by CT44 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:29 am

It wasn't boring in anybody's oppinion.
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by cln-cmndo on Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:31 am

godzilla98 wrote:You just gave me an idea. Nice comic. But I found boring.



Exept his...Roll Eyes


Either way, I liked it.
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by 80-0 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:34 am

He, it makes me laugh how many people haven't let go of the Roll Eyes smiley tags and have them memorized, ignorant of the fact that they are no longer in the CABG BBCode. Laughing

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Post by CT44 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:42 am

80-0 wrote:He, it makes me laugh how many people haven't let go of the Roll Eyes smiley tags and have them memorized, ignorant of the fact that they are no longer in the CABG BBCode. Laughing

I know 80-0, it was just such a great smiley and I miss it. Laughing Wink
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Commando Shade on Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:12 am

WOW! That was an awesome comic. A commander killing a commander in cold blood. EPIC! Shocked
Over all, 500% out of 100%.


EDIT: There are three types of people. Those who understand fractions, and those who don't. Razz

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Post by CT44 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:15 am

Commando Shade wrote:EDIT: There are three types of people. Those who understand fractions, and those who don't. Razz

Ok, what did that have to do with anything?
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