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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by 80-0 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:22 pm

Sialboats wrote:
The Jinja Ninja wrote:Well, that made no sense... 'Davy' is no different from Axel (if anything, Axel should have been more independant, given that he's a shocktrooper), so what's his motivation to defect? That really did seem to come from nowhere, seeing as they were in the middle of a civil conversation. Also, why didn't Davy take the bridge first? It's a perfectly good tactic and could have saved some of his men's lives. Oh, and if Davy's creating a splinter group, seperate from the 222nd, why does he give a toss about Helioscaunt? Everyone praising this comic for its 'plot' seem to have overlooked a fair few flaws. Razz

Shock troopers aren't independant, in fact, they're bred to be more obidient -- they're the Chancellor's men. I think he didn't take the bridge first because he didn't realize that he should take the bridge first, and that went down as a tactical flaw. He doesn't want to see his commander make a stupid error like he did, so he is taking matters into his own hands, losing it when he hears of the impending failure on Helioscant. Since his commander won't agree with him, and he is in a fit of insanity, he attempts to shoot him.

80-0 wrote:Maybe it was a solid bullet with a tiny expando-sponge which is aimed directly at the spine to cause rupture once it is free to take on new size what with the liquids in the body.

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Try hollow point bullets. When entering a person's body, the force of impact causes it to shatter once inside the body, giving a shotgun effect on the inside of the body. If the soldier was shot in the back, by a hollow-point slug, than the shotgun effect would have happened all down his spine, rupturing it Wink .

Fair enough and all(and I was in jest about the expando-sponge Razz ), but may I just ask you what the purpose of quoting Jinja's post which appears seemingly irrelevent to this subject?

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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:23 pm

Sial was just answering two questions in one post. Wink
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Sialboats on Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:24 pm

80-0 wrote:
Fair enough and all(and I was in jest about the expando-sponge Razz ), but may I just ask you what the purpose of quoting Jinja's post which appears seemingly irrelevent to this subject?

It was called "Not Double Posting" Razz .
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Comrade Faie on Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:24 pm

Axel, poor Axel... unless you give a wacky plot twist he's gone. Razz

I like it, but I felt there could have been more fighting in the street in some of the scenes.

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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:24 pm

Epic Fail Sial... you did just that! Razz
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Sialboats on Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:28 pm

This doesn't call for a normal face palm... no, sir.

This calls for a :









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Now, back on topic Wink !
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by PhiMa on Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:31 pm

Yeah, he did that on purpose TB. Anway, great comic CC, I really like your 222nd chronicles.
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Clonecommando007 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 8:40 pm

Thanks for all the comments guys!

And I know some of my words are used wrong; I'm just trying to make the diologe sound the best and am filling it in with words.

DarthPineapple wrote:Nice comic, as usual! Don't mix Phase I (CW) and Phase II though.

Uh...that was kinda the whole point, and is the plotline of this comic series, if you actually read everything in it's entirety.

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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by FireHawk302 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:57 pm

Laughing I started an argument about the rupture. And it all happened when I was out running errands. Razz But seriously, if I had a broken spine, I would not want to lay on my back. Wink
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by MyOwnCreations on Fri Mar 27, 2009 10:18 pm

What was the white stuff surrounding the town? Aside from that it's awesome!
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by FireHawk302 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 10:47 pm

MyOwnCreations wrote:What was the white stuff surrounding the town? Aside from that it's awesome!
Why don't you read the other comics, like he told you to do. Roll Eyes
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by MyOwnCreations on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:20 pm

firehawk302 wrote:
MyOwnCreations wrote:What was the white stuff surrounding the town? Aside from that it's awesome!
Why don't you read the other comics, like he told you to do. Roll Eyes

Ummm I have read all of the other comic's... I was wondering what the white stuff surrounding the town was.
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Alpha on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:30 pm

If you had read them, you'd find out that they're gasses/clouds/whatever from Helioscaunt's surface...

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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by CT44 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:31 pm

It's like on Dagobah. . .You know how there is all that fog/cloud stuff. . .
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Dark Ranger on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:52 pm

Oh my gosh!! A clone traitor! It's almost like what's going to be in my comic (when most of it is done)!
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by MyOwnCreations on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:52 pm

Alpha wrote:If you had read them, you'd find out that they're gasses/clouds/whatever from Helioscaunt's surface...

I know I was wondering what the material was...
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by CT44 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:53 pm

The material that he used was just cotton balls. Razz
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:57 pm

Sialboats wrote:Shock troopers aren't independant, in fact, they're bred to be more obidient -- they're the Chancellor's men. I think he didn't take the bridge first because he didn't realize that he should take the bridge first, and that went down as a tactical flaw. He doesn't want to see his commander make a stupid error like he did, so he is taking matters into his own hands, losing it when he hears of the impending failure on Helioscant. Since his commander won't agree with him, and he is in a fit of insanity, he attempts to shoot him.
So you're speculating that he not only lost a year because of poor tactical skills, but also shot his superior officer to stop a mistake that would more likely have been caused by himself? Doesn't sound like a successful clone to me - Kams should've put a round through his skull before he left Tipoca.
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Muskey15 on Sat Mar 28, 2009 12:17 am

Awesome comic! The clone medics are great, and the plot is excellent.
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by MyOwnCreations on Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:13 am

CT44 wrote:The material that he used was just cotton balls. Razz

Oh well I'm really stupid how could I not guess that! Laughing
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Zepher on Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:28 pm

I didn't like Axel's death, that was really a waste. Dying in only the 6th comic. Meh, it makes me sad.

Overall, it was really cool. Other than his death, I really like it. The renegade clone is cool as wel. While I'm still waiting to see some reallyawesome effects, it's strong, and I really like the Ned bay.

May I ask for a character guide though. It's starting to get a little confusing for me...
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by LegoJammin96 on Sat Mar 28, 2009 8:04 pm

It's a really good comic and the sets are very creative. Your comic series is better then most in my opinion
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Mar 29, 2009 8:45 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:
Sialboats wrote:Shock troopers aren't independant, in fact, they're bred to be more obidient -- they're the Chancellor's men. I think he didn't take the bridge first because he didn't realize that he should take the bridge first, and that went down as a tactical flaw. He doesn't want to see his commander make a stupid error like he did, so he is taking matters into his own hands, losing it when he hears of the impending failure on Helioscant. Since his commander won't agree with him, and he is in a fit of insanity, he attempts to shoot him.
So you're speculating that he not only lost a year because of poor tactical skills, but also shot his superior officer to stop a mistake that would more likely have been caused by himself? Doesn't sound like a successful clone to me - Kams should've put a round through his skull before he left Tipoca.

What happened was, this 'Commander Davy' had his ship boarded. He realized that he could in essence take the ship back whenever he wanted. He decided to train his men in better combat skills while onboard the ship, to make them elite. That's why he didn't take the bridge back right away, he wasn't in a hurry to get out, he wanted to make his Regiment into an elite division.

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Nice

Post by deanalmarresh on Tue Mar 31, 2009 6:52 pm

This was very good, a nice installment.
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Men Down

Post by MyOwnCreations on Wed Apr 01, 2009 9:59 pm

I was just looking through the comics again and saw the blue T'wlik in 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance. Is she going to be in the next comic?
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