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A Clone Wars Short

Post by PhiMa on Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:09 pm

So, I have a part-time 'job' as a stop-motion movie maker, and I figured why not post one of em here. Here's my Republic Attack Gunship Short, I edited the voices with Wavepad (free). Tell me what you think and don't be afraid to critisize!



Enjoy (Yes I know my comedy sucks xD)
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Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:12 pm

Eh, I didn't find it funny, but the animation was pretty smooth and the voices were decent.
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Post by Bizzle on Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:12 pm

Haha. You should make a series of these that build upon one another cause you are fairly good at this. I like the droids asking if they should fire. Make another one soonish please.

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Post by CT44 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:12 pm

Meh, it was pretty good. The voices were good though!
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Post by PhiMa on Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:18 pm

Darth Bizzle wrote:Haha. You should make a series of these that build upon one another cause you are fairly good at this. I like the droids asking if they should fire. Make another one soonish please.


You can check out my channel and check out all my other stop-motions I've made so far by just clicking on the 'www' button under my name.
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Post by Gerrard on Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:50 pm

The whole thing was pretty smooth and the voices were good. Again, comedy not the best but it is something. Wink
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Post by FireHawk302 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 10:04 pm

Meh. I prefer more seriousness in Star Wars movies. Even if they are Lego. A bit of funniness is fine, but there should be more seriousness then funniness. Add more seriousness, and remove some funniness, and you will have a good balance of funniness and seriousness. Wink
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Post by Bantha on Fri Mar 27, 2009 10:19 pm

Laughing I loved that! Very funny!
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Post by that guy in that movie on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:33 pm

Laughing Now thats what I call funny, but I never remeber the clones voices so deep. Laughing
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Post by Natesap on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:48 pm

That is very funny! Smile

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Post by Liberator on Sat Mar 28, 2009 12:40 pm

It was hilarious. Also, very funny. 10 out of 5.
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Post by omar10 on Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:55 am

That was really really good! Camo Fordo Yo! Green Yellow Blue Arc

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Post by someguy577 on Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:55 am

The animation was smooth, the voices were good, and the humor was hilarious! All in all it was great. Just like fire spray said though you should add just a teensy bit of seriousness.
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I enjoyed this

Post by deanalmarresh on Thu Apr 16, 2009 4:11 pm

I enjoyed watching this stop motion video, great job on it.
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Post by Zepher on Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:20 pm

Animation was smooth, and I at least found the first part funny. When they at first reported that the keys were locked inside. The second part was okay, the clone tower was fairly funny as well! Nice work!
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Re: A Clone Wars Short

Post by 80-0 on Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:22 pm

Climbing up the front? I recall useing a ladder to climb up the side once. Razz

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Ok

Post by commander324 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:23 am

It could be better but I tought it was kinda' funny. Blue Arc
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Re: A Clone Wars Short

Post by CT-1256 on Sat Sep 12, 2009 12:49 am

Hehehe.I think you did a nice job on this. Razz

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