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541st Vendetta: History (Teaser)

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Post by Sialboats Sat Feb 07, 2009 8:17 pm

Previous Episode Directory

Chronicles (Operation Frozen Liberties)
541st Chronciles #4
541st Chronicles #5
541st Chronicles #6
541st Chronicles #7
541st Chronicles #8
541st Chronicles #9
541st Chronicles #10
541st Chronicles #11
541st Chronicles #12
541st Chronicles #13
541st Chronicles #14
541st Chronicles #15

541st Chronicles #16
541st Chronicles #17
541st Chronicles #18
541st Chronicles #19

Alright, just a little teaser as I put together all the supplies I need for the set of the first comic. Probally going to have to trade for a few particular goodies. But yes, the comic itself: Not all that great, considering it's a story-based teaser. I thought I had better give a bit of a mysterious backstory for what will be the underlying theme of the series. Zeph, you'll also be happy as I have worked out some of the positioning issues Razz .

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Post by Rogue Sat Feb 07, 2009 8:22 pm

The luminescence of the frames are great! If you could somehow make them into a comic-like structure.
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Post by Zepher Sat Feb 07, 2009 8:30 pm

You are to fantastic for words.

Wonderful comic. Looks like you've finally really got a fantastic storyline (really, your others were incredible, but this seems really cool.)

Nice work on the text. Doesn't it make it easier to read?
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Post by Muskey15 Sat Feb 07, 2009 8:32 pm

Sounds like a great comic! Can't wait till it comes out!
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Post by Comrade Faie Sat Feb 07, 2009 8:38 pm

great start! I love your storyline as always! Man I wish I could do something like this.
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Post by -Aki- Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:33 pm

That was brilliant! I liked how Turaki went mad.
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Post by [Jay] Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:53 pm

The droid in th 5th picture is so cool. Smile
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Post by Jens Sun Feb 08, 2009 8:39 pm

This looks like it will be better than your last one because this one already has an epic stroyline.
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Post by Alpha Sun Feb 08, 2009 8:43 pm

Bloody hell! Shocked

Your preview was fabulous, and what Amador did to Turaki finally backfired on him, eh?

Can't wait! Hola Wow!

I know you can see this, because I just want to point out both Anna and Amador's daughter have the same font.
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Post by why Mon Feb 09, 2009 1:04 am

This is a fabulous story starter! Oh, and Alpha, that bottom text was easy to read.
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Post by Alpha Mon Feb 09, 2009 1:05 am

Isn't that the entire point? It's pointless to have a size 1 font, then you have to waste time to either zoom in, or copy and paste.

Anyhow, I wonder what'll happen next... you're really unpredictable, aren't you? Mad Wink
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Post by Jedi Joe Mon Feb 09, 2009 2:10 am

Wow! I love how Turaki jept shooting the dead body, and all the little burn marks on his body! Razz
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