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704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'

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Post by Alpha Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:21 am

Previous Episodes

#1 - Night Ops.
#2 - A Larger Perspective
#3 - Repercussions
#4 - Time to Die, Jedi...
#5 - Old Friends
#6 - No BDZs, but...


BDZ = Base Delta Zero

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Post by FireHawk302 Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:26 am

That was great. I really loved the part where you saw through his visor. It reminded me of RC. Very nice. Wink
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Post by prowl Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:30 am

Wow I am speechless that was so cool with the special effects and the plot is cool because it leaves hanging just like a good book! Wink

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Post by that guy in that movie Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:30 am

I like the frames, but you put two of the same slides and it has almost the same as everyone's, "commader shot revived taken back to battle, or covert mission and stuff". Sorry but I got a little tired of that. But it is a good comic in esence.
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Post by Felix42 Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:34 am

Awesome comic! The GIMPing is great, and the bridge is awesome too. The helmet scene was awesome! Two pics were the same. When the clones came down. The CIS leaders are simple, but cool. Overall, awesome!
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Post by Alpha Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:45 am

They're not exactly CIS leaders, they're a group of Mercs under Evian, AKA Alpha's aide.

Until my request is met and I receive some Red Guard helms, that's how they're gonna look.
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Post by Jedi Joe Sat Apr 04, 2009 4:29 am

I love the helmet HUD!

I can't wait to see those mercs in action! 😁
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Post by Clonecommando874 Sat Apr 04, 2009 6:24 am

The helmet scene was very nice, god job.
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Post by [Jay] Sat Apr 04, 2009 8:32 am

Another great comic Alpha. I loved the helmet effect and the GIMPing was epic! Smile
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Post by DarthPineapple Sat Apr 04, 2009 8:39 am

Lovely helmet effect. I like it! Smile
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Post by Sialboats Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:31 pm

Okay, the helmet effect is a bit iffy. Looks fake.. but there's nothing you can do about that Wink . I'm not too sure what's going on around him though. He's being dragged from the clutches of a conflagration -- or something?

Furthermore, why did an ISP just fall from the sky Shocked ?

It's meh, as far as I'm concerned. Decent action scenes, but something just didn't feel right about some of the diolog, or the story Wink .
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Post by pdragon27 Sat Apr 04, 2009 1:29 pm

No Base Delta Zeroes? WTF does that have to do with your story? Great comic, though. And where did that ISP come from? You're leaving out scenes again...
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