704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
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704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
Previous Episodes
#1 - Night Ops.
#2 - A Larger Perspective
#3 - Repercussions
#4 - Time to Die, Jedi...
#5 - Old Friends
#6 - No BDZs, but...
#1 - Night Ops.
#2 - A Larger Perspective
#3 - Repercussions
#4 - Time to Die, Jedi...
#5 - Old Friends
#6 - No BDZs, but...
BDZ = Base Delta Zero
704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
Last edited by Alpha on Sat Apr 04, 2009 9:44 pm; edited 2 times in total
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
That was great. I really loved the part where you saw through his visor. It reminded me of RC. Very nice.
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Wow I am speechless that was so cool with the special effects and the plot is cool because it leaves hanging just like a good book!
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Last edited by prowl on Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:59 pm; edited 1 time in total
prowl- Non-Guild Member
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Location : north carolina
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
I like the frames, but you put two of the same slides and it has almost the same as everyone's, "commader shot revived taken back to battle, or covert mission and stuff". Sorry but I got a little tired of that. But it is a good comic in esence.
that guy in that movie- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Location : burning my @$$ off in miami
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
Awesome comic! The GIMPing is great, and the bridge is awesome too. The helmet scene was awesome! Two pics were the same. When the clones came down. The CIS leaders are simple, but cool. Overall, awesome!
Felix42- Non-Guild Member
- Location : In a rebal flagship over the Death Star.... darn Tie fighters!!
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
They're not exactly CIS leaders, they're a group of Mercs under Evian, AKA Alpha's aide.
Until my request is met and I receive some Red Guard helms, that's how they're gonna look.
Until my request is met and I receive some Red Guard helms, that's how they're gonna look.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
I love the helmet HUD!
I can't wait to see those mercs in action!
I can't wait to see those mercs in action!
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
- Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
The helmet scene was very nice, god job.
Clonecommando874- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Location : California
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
Another great comic Alpha. I loved the helmet effect and the GIMPing was epic!
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Lovely helmet effect. I like it!
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
Okay, the helmet effect is a bit iffy. Looks fake.. but there's nothing you can do about that . I'm not too sure what's going on around him though. He's being dragged from the clutches of a conflagration -- or something?
Furthermore, why did an ISP just fall from the sky ?
It's meh, as far as I'm concerned. Decent action scenes, but something just didn't feel right about some of the diolog, or the story .
Furthermore, why did an ISP just fall from the sky ?
It's meh, as far as I'm concerned. Decent action scenes, but something just didn't feel right about some of the diolog, or the story .
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #6 - 'No BDZs, but...'
No Base Delta Zeroes? WTF does that have to do with your story? Great comic, though. And where did that ISP come from? You're leaving out scenes again...
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