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What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

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What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Phazezorz on Mon Apr 06, 2009 5:46 pm

Hey guys, This is my first Episode in my new series "What Clones do on their day off" It is a mix of action/comedy, and will span many genres of lego themes. I just kinda made this in a hurry, so sorry for some of the blurry pictures. Well, Without further a due, "What Clones Do On Their Day Off"....




Clone pilot: doo *pads on letter keys* Doo doo.
Clone Commander: What are you doing?
Clone pilot: I'm surfing this cool website called Mocpages.
Clone Commander: Mocpages?
Clone pilot: Yeah, it's a website with all of these cool people and custom lego creations
Clone Commander: You do know the author Is making us do all this stuff for a Mocpage?
Clone pilot: What makes you say that?
Clone Commander: Well, Read his text right above this picture
Clone pilot: *reads it* Preposterous! Now if you'll excuse me, I need to join some alliances.
Clone Commander: Like what?
Clone Pilot: Like The Army of Trinity, The Silver Confederation, BIO-MOX, And a ton of others
Clone Commander: You do know, the author is in all of those alliances
Clone Pilot: Pshaw! Imah Play Lego Star Wars!
Clone Commander: How? Lego doesn't give us Mini-figs Apposable Thumb

Clone Pilot: *Throws up Laptop*CURSE YOU LEEEEEEGOOOOOOOOOO!

*Clone Pilot and Commander Argue, Galactic Marine Enters*

Clone Pilot: What are you???
Galactic Marine: I'm a Galactic Marine
Clone Pilot: Hmph, Pretty poor attempt if I do say so myself
Galactic Marine: I know, It's the author, he took a sharpie.......*shudders*
Clone Commander: *shudders*
Galactic Marine: It gets worse, follow me. *Both follow Galactic Marine*

Clone Pilot: Oh...

Clone Commander: My......

Everyone: ...CHESSE! *All stare at Well Of Mini-figs
Clone Pilot: NOOOOOOOOOOOO! JIMMY! RANDOM CLONE PART 79! WHYYYYY! *Cries, leaning in too far, falling into pit*
Clone Commander: CURSE YOU AUTHOR FOR MAKING A CLIFFHANGER PLOT!!!!! *dives in to save Clone Pilot*

To be Continued..............
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Well as you can tell, this was made during my first few weeks on Mocpages. At that time, I didn't worry about complex builds, overloaded with detail, I only worried about the story, as well as the stories comedy. But in some of the later episodes (I.E. Ones after 4) will (hopefully) have more detail. Thanks for looking!
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by DarthPineapple on Mon Apr 06, 2009 5:55 pm

First, make some proper sets and don't take them on your table. Use a white background It just looks bad. Secondly, use text balloons!

I'm sure you can do better than this, because this is just lame.
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Phazezorz on Mon Apr 06, 2009 5:57 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:First, make some proper sets and don't take them on your table. Use a white background It just looks bad. Secondly, use text balloons!

I'm sure you can do better than this, because this is just lame.

Like I said before, I made this before I took building seriously. Before it was just something I did to pass the time. As for the text balloons, well I'm still working on that. In the later Episodes, I will be sure to use your advice. Thanks


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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by DarthPineapple on Mon Apr 06, 2009 5:59 pm

Ok, looking forward to it. This has some potential if it's made in a proper comic. Wink
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by [Jay] on Mon Apr 06, 2009 6:00 pm

Firstly, I agree with DP. You need to use speech bubbles.
Secondly, I thougth your comic was very funny and finally welcome to the guild. Smile

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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by pdragon27 on Mon Apr 06, 2009 6:22 pm

Oh my god. This is almost worse than cln-cmndo's. (Anyone remember his?) Actually, it is worse. his actually had some bricks...this doesn't. It is the most pitiful excuse for a comic I've ever seen. If I were you, I'd GTFO before Sial gets back on....
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Rook on Mon Apr 06, 2009 6:22 pm

Needs a lot more detail! We're the CABUILDERSG.

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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by pdragon27 on Mon Apr 06, 2009 6:24 pm

I really can't wait to see Jinja's or Sial's response. $10 it makes us ROFL. Anyone wanna take that bet? Razz
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Comrade Faie on Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:52 pm

Rightyoo then, first of all don't be funny, that's my job. Wink

Second of all, more bricks less house.

Third of all, less randomness more sarcasm.

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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Apr 06, 2009 9:22 pm

Hmm, the building sucks, but the dialogue was ok.

If you played on the noobiness of MOCpages a little more that'll be awesome! Razz
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Superperson on Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:06 pm

The story could had been better.
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Muskey15 on Tue Apr 07, 2009 3:00 am

The comic is kinda okay, though I don't see what's good in it. AND YOU BROKE THE 4TH WALL! IT'S THERE FOR A REASON!! Mad
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Awesome-o-saurus on Tue Apr 07, 2009 3:28 am

Huh, you're gonna get eaten alive by the more hardcore members here... Plot definatley could go somewhere, but also could use some work. Make fun of those star wars kiddies who steal decals from this site, or something.
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Gerrard on Mon Apr 13, 2009 11:26 pm

Hmmm, I am not a big fan of this. Not enough legs, and plotline is not good enough. Keep working on it.
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Thire on Mon Apr 13, 2009 11:57 pm

that is a cool laptop Shocked

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its great

Post by metru nui boy(clone troop on Sat Apr 25, 2009 7:28 pm

preety good i like it,can't wait for part II


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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by torrent3 on Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:24 pm

Very funny. Do clones actuallyy get a day off?
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Re: What Clones Do On Their Day Off Ep.1: The Well Of Mini-Figs

Post by Blast on Thu May 21, 2009 1:27 am

Make another one! They are awesome!
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