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The Redeemer

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Post by -Aki- Sun Apr 05, 2009 10:26 am

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The Redeemer is Generals Alec's personal starfighter. What it lacks in firepower, it makes up for in speed and agility. It's also heavily shielded, allowing Alec to literally smash through enemy fighters.

Ok, this is what makes the moc for me: It's opening mechanism. I was inspired by Saber Scorpion's "AfterBurner".
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Voila!

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Although it's quite a hard fit...

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It's well worth it!
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Post by PhiMa Sun Apr 05, 2009 12:19 pm

Hmmm, it's an interesting concept and design, but it's still a bit plain. May I suggest adding some more greebles?
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Post by noobswatter Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:54 pm

Nice idea for the cockpit! Although it looks odd on a small ship , try it on a larger one.
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Post by rofl Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:57 pm

It's small but good I think you should make a little larger otherwise I like it Wink
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Post by Superperson Tue Apr 07, 2009 3:11 am

I think thats a good mini craft.
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Post by Thunder-blade Tue Apr 07, 2009 4:39 am

Eh the shape isn't good at all. The slopes are all over the place.

I like where you're going with the SNOT and the cockpit though!
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