Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

BACKSTORY:
Upon a Republic Venator, A Separatist Fleet met the Republic in the Karthakk System. After heavily bombarding them, they boarded them.These Clones have made it past a few of the droids, only to see a light saber slicing through their way out.The clones ready themselves, one taking cover behind the heavy gunner and trying to call for help, one with guns ready, and one who's less optimistic their going to make it



Faraway View



Close-up on Door




Close-up of Lightsaber slicing through door (Sorry, he hasn't learned to slice in circles yet)



Clones




Door, with dark, eerie lighting






Overhead view




View with Nothing





Upward View




Clones (and Droids) used in this diorama.

D@mn I hate it when we get new guys that are good! Excellent job! Keep poppin' out them MOCs!

Nice!I love the lightsaber cutting through the door

Good to see you in the Guild!

I really like this hallway! It's kinda plain, but I see that you tried hard on this one!

I like how you have the lightsaber cutting through the wall. Plus, the heavy cannon looks like a pretty decent build.

Nice, But I think it needs greebs.

I agree with Matchstick, the simple grill tile doesn't usually constitute enough greebles. You have to use more detailed pieces and it would look better if they aren't "flat".

It's a bit plain, but I love the lightsaber cutting through the door. I also love your gun, it's awesome!

I think it looks fantastic! I mean it's a kriffin HALLWAY guys, how much detail does it need, all the hallways I have been in have been fairly plain. But seriously, good MOC.

Pretty good, I'd say an above average MOC, but it needs more greebles... less tiles...

Maybe an bursted pipe somewhere... a canister consumed in flames...

Alpha wrote:Pretty good, I'd say an above average MOC, but it needs more greebles... less tiles...

Maybe an bursted pipe somewhere... a canister consumed in flames...

i agree with u and probaly some dead droids somewhere could be bigger but overall good work
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DarthPineapple wrote:It's a bit plain, but I love the lightsaber cutting through the door. I also love your gun, it's awesome!

What he said. Yeah the corridor could do with something else. A loudspeaker system maybe? Or a door leading to another corridor. But it's a good build anyway

Nice, I really like it. The doorway was very well done, just the only thing needed is greebling.

Very nice my friend. I like the gun and the lightsaber cutting through the door. I would maybe put a little red on the floor and add some greebs' to the wall.