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Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by Phazezorz on Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:32 am

BACKSTORY:
Upon a Republic Venator, A Separatist Fleet met the Republic in the Karthakk System. After heavily bombarding them, they boarded them.These Clones have made it past a few of the droids, only to see a light saber slicing through their way out.The clones ready themselves, one taking cover behind the heavy gunner and trying to call for help, one with guns ready, and one who's less optimistic their going to make it



Faraway View



Close-up on Door




Close-up of Lightsaber slicing through door (Sorry, he hasn't learned to slice in circles yet)



Clones




Door, with dark, eerie lighting






Overhead view




View with Nothing





Upward View




Clones (and Droids) used in this diorama.
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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by 667thLegion on Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:37 am

D@mn I hate it when we get new guys that are good! Mad Laughing Excellent job! Keep poppin' out them MOCs!
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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by depwn on Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:55 am

Nice!I love the lightsaber cutting through the door
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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Apr 07, 2009 4:44 am

Good to see you in the Guild!

I really like this hallway! It's kinda plain, but I see that you tried hard on this one!
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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by CT44 on Tue Apr 07, 2009 4:52 am

I like how you have the lightsaber cutting through the wall. Plus, the heavy cannon looks like a pretty decent build. Smile
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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by [Jay] on Tue Apr 07, 2009 11:01 am

Nice, But I think it needs greebs. Smile

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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Apr 07, 2009 5:10 pm

I agree with Matchstick, the simple grill tile doesn't usually constitute enough greebles. You have to use more detailed pieces and it would look better if they aren't "flat".
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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by DarthPineapple on Tue Apr 07, 2009 5:11 pm

It's a bit plain, but I love the lightsaber cutting through the door. I also love your gun, it's awesome! Smile
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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by astoriabluelegos on Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:41 pm

I think it looks fantastic! I mean it's a kriffin HALLWAY guys, how much detail does it need, all the hallways I have been in have been fairly plain. Wink Razz But seriously, good MOC. Smile Blue Arc


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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by Alpha on Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:44 pm

Pretty good, I'd say an above average MOC, but it needs more greebles... less tiles...

Maybe an bursted pipe somewhere... a canister consumed in flames... Wink

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Post by DarthWhatever on Tue Apr 07, 2009 11:53 pm

Alpha wrote:Pretty good, I'd say an above average MOC, but it needs more greebles... less tiles...

Maybe an bursted pipe somewhere... a canister consumed in flames... Wink

i agree with u and probaly some dead droids somewhere could be bigger but overall good work
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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by Master Potato on Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:27 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:It's a bit plain, but I love the lightsaber cutting through the door. I also love your gun, it's awesome! Smile

What he said. Yeah the corridor could do with something else. A loudspeaker system maybe? Or a door leading to another corridor. But it's a good build anyway Blue Arc Whitey


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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by Gerrard on Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:49 pm

Nice, I really like it. The doorway was very well done, just the only thing needed is greebling.
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Re: Last Survivors/Unwelcome Visitor

Post by Bizzle on Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:59 pm

Very nice my friend. I like the gun and the lightsaber cutting through the door. I would maybe put a little red on the floor and add some greebs' to the wall.

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