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Battle of the Nevarians

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Battle of the Nevarians

Post by PhiMa on Wed Apr 15, 2009 12:28 pm

This topic is picture heavy.

All large force of separatists being lead by ventress have attacked the nevarian village! Seeing as they live on Republic occupied world, they must intercept and the 251st is dispatched, being lead by Jedi General Anon Emus. Although High Priest Kel Tha'zar does not like this, he would rather fight alongside the republic than see his people die. Even though the seppies have no armoured tank units, the 251st is heavily outnumbered. More backup units are arriving per speeder, and Commander Hyperion is leading a attack.

Overall view:


The Nevarian Hunter and his dogs pwning a SBD:


The Clone transport Speeder, a Nevarian Hut (Black, so that no sunlight comes through, seeing as they sleep during the day) and a priest healing another Nevarian:


Commander Hyperion leading a squad of clones:


The flame Warder casting a ring of fire, Kel Tha'zar taking out a BD with his staff of Grom, and Jedi General Anon Emus:


Incoming Assassins:


A Hailfire firing a missile, I think the technique is quite good:


A clone about to be killed by Ventress:


And Commander Hyperion and Jedi Anon Emus (Anonymous Razz )



And a link to the Gallery

So, I think this is alright. I know it could still use some work, and so I'm keeping it like this for now. Comments would be highly appreciated.

Enjoy!
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by 134st Legion on Wed Apr 15, 2009 12:52 pm

Wow that's amassing, I like the fire ring. Smile
The little house could use some work, but overall pretty good.


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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by CT44 on Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:41 pm

It needs A LOT of work. . .It pretty much just looks like a couple rocks here and there and some figs. But with some work this could be a pretty decent MOC.
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by MikeZulu on Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:06 pm

Amusing... the effects with the fire and Hailfire missile are sort of cool.

What I think should be done:

The hut needs to be redesigned - try something other than black and avoid using panels vertically and horizontally together. Put the BURPs together - separated, they look odd and as if they're something other than rocks.
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by mazz on Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:07 pm

Wow that is great Hola Wow! The bunker needs more bricks on it. The ring of fire is great, well done.


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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by RubbahBand on Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:12 pm

That ring of fire is well built, how did you make it?
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:41 pm

That things is... meh. I expected more than just a baseplate with some bricks and plants on it. And certainly expected more of the hut you made. Sad
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by PhiMa on Wed Apr 15, 2009 3:06 pm

Yes, I do know it needs a lot of work, so it'd be nice if you could tell me what to improve, and not just say that you were expecting more.

MikeZulu - I'll give it a shot.

Edit: I've made a prototype hut.



Now, it's still a prototype, and I'll see if I can find better colours...possibly white. Good? Bad? Ugly? Epic fail?
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by The Blue Shadow Virus on Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:53 pm

Some more, red would be cool.
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:56 pm

Use slopes for the hut, make it less blocky. And more round.
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by Clonecommando007 on Wed Apr 15, 2009 9:46 pm

Aaaah! Too many sets not enough MOC! The field is nice, but this is really simplistic and doesn't have enough 'meat' to it. Overall it's very intense and the units are well placed. Smile

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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by 80-0 on Wed Apr 15, 2009 9:52 pm

This is, to be fair, minifig focused, and they are the chief focus the scene(I love the Nevarian dogs!), but of course, maybe more foliage and greens rather than the mere baseplates and odd BURPs. Wink

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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by flare on Wed Apr 15, 2009 10:02 pm

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You call that a Moc? a few figures on a base plate? You really need to add plates to make it have some hills.......

The only thing I think that's basic, but effective of this 'Moc' is the missile leaving the Hail fire.
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by Zepher on Wed Apr 15, 2009 10:52 pm

The figures and they're placing is aweomse. The dogs are nice,but the fire ring and that thrown doid are the coolest. The Hailfire action is cool too.

On the other hand... needs more everything. More rocks. More details. More MOCing, and less sets.

That prototype hut is looking nice. If you have any dark red, it would work well!

Over-all... decent. The figures and they're placing is fantastic, and the build needs work, but isn't un attractive to look at.
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by Darth Yoda on Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:02 pm

Well, the baseplate with some stuff on it has a lot to be desired. On the other hand, I love the figs! That rex combo is sweet.
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by Sialboats on Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:06 pm

Baseplate + Bricks + Minifigures - Technique = FAIL.

Seriously? There's nothing indicative of a battlefield, just a empty space with too much going on, and not enough detail in those things going on.
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by PhiMa on Thu Apr 16, 2009 4:59 pm

So, I've updated it a bit so far:


I added a new hut, more huts, and a path leading to the village(The clone transport will sit there). I'll probably add one more which is about to be blown up by a missile.


I removed the CBP and added a small forest.

Now there are only two sets, The AT-AP and Hailfire. I still need more updates though.
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by 80-0 on Thu Apr 16, 2009 7:13 pm

Sialboats wrote:Baseplate + Bricks + Minifigures - Technique = FAIL.

Seriously? There's nothing indicative of a battlefield, just a empty space with too much going on, and not enough detail in those things going on.

That too much IS the battle. Razz

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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by pdragon27 on Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:13 pm

Wow, here's a quote for that first pic:

Mi lord! It seems as though our special night just became MORE special!

Razz
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by clonecommando 7695 on Sat May 02, 2009 9:48 pm

Nice play set, but why are there dogs? Shocked
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Re: Battle of the Nevarians

Post by Code_Green on Sat May 02, 2009 9:57 pm

It's beginning to look like something now, but it still needs more hils/rocks/plants.
P.s, Anon Ernus really kicks Arse! Razz
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