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Post by [Jay] on Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:12 am

In a small corridor of a venator many troopers have been taken captive by a small sqaud of droids. Luckily for the clones a trooper hiding above them jumps down and starts shooting rapidly at the clankers. Before he knows it he is shot down and collapses to the floor of the corridor, saving the troopers.







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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by 134st Legion on Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:51 am

I think it need many more details. Smile
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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by Clonecommando007 on Thu Apr 16, 2009 11:40 am

You freaking cheater. Wink

Let's take advantage of the overhand and extend it by twofold. Laughing

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by [Jay] on Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:02 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:You freaking cheater. Wink

Let's take advantage of the overhand and extend it by twofold. Laughing

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I don't get what you mean. Shocked

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by Comrade Faie on Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:23 pm

He means make the walls taller which is what I think you should do as well.

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by CT44 on Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:24 pm

I think this is alright. . .It needs more details, though.
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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by [Jay] on Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:25 pm

Commander Faie wrote:He means make the walls taller which is what I think you should do as well.

Do you mean add walls on the second floor, or just make the existing ones taller? :scratch:

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by Comrade Faie on Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:33 pm

Extend it so the clone helmet doesn't fit over it.

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by 80-0 on Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:54 pm

It's very crowded and a lot is left unfinished, for example the top of those wall bricks, and the area behind the jumping clone. Maybe put a chute with a ladder and a grate so it's like the clone just climbed down the ladder and kicked off the grate to jump out.

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Post by [Jay] on Thu Apr 16, 2009 3:05 pm

80-0 wrote:It's very crowded and a lot is left unfinished, for example the top of those wall bricks, and the area behind the jumping clone. Maybe put a chute with a ladder and a grate so it's like the clone just climbed down the ladder and kicked off the grate to jump out.

Yeah, that sounds good. I think I'll change it.

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by Rook on Thu Apr 16, 2009 3:26 pm

Oh Matchy you're killing us. You're in the Guild! You can do better! Sad

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by Gerrard on Thu Apr 16, 2009 3:56 pm

I like it but it is too small. And it needs more greebling. But it looks good! Smile
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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by DarthPineapple on Thu Apr 16, 2009 4:09 pm

Match, come on, this are just some standard bricks. Where are the details? Sad
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Post by deanalmarresh on Thu Apr 16, 2009 4:13 pm

Very nice, I like this. Not too over done. It has some great features, for instance, the 'rock like' grey details are very nice. I like the amount of droids you have included, not too 'overcrowded'.
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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by [Jay] on Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:30 pm

I tried to re-do it but I left it on a chair and my brother tried to sit down on it. It may take some time to make it again. Sad

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by 80-0 on Thu Apr 16, 2009 7:14 pm

Wait. He tried to sit down on it? Shocked

I assume the brother/Matchstick relations haven't been up to snuff lately? Razz

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by [Jay] on Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:02 pm

He's a bit cross after I did a crap sharpie-job on one of his trooopers. Razz

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by 80-0 on Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:20 pm

One of HIS troopers? You mean you aren't the sole proprietor of the Legos in your house?

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by Jedi Joe on Fri Apr 17, 2009 2:03 pm

All I see is a bunch of bricks n' figs slapped on a baseplate...

I think you can do better than that.
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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by naterboy1 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:33 am

The bottom line is add more details!
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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by [Jay] on Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:20 pm

Updates are up, is it an improvement? Smile

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by PhiMa on Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:23 pm

Nice! You added more detail and a roof! I love how the clones swinging down from the corridor above. Yet there's still something about it...I don't know what though....
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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by 80-0 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:19 pm

Looks a lot better there. Not much to say, though. Smile

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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by Gerrard on Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:43 pm

This one is definately better, some more details make it much more creative and interesting!
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Re: Venator Rescue

Post by CT44 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:30 pm

This is a lot better Match! I like how the clone is swinging down from the roof. Nice job! Smile
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