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Episode 6: The Invasion of Ingration Part 5: Captured

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Episode 6: The Invasion of Ingration Part 5: Captured

Post by Zepher on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:10 am

Before anyone yells are me, yes, I know that figure is Shi Wun or Wi Shun (could never keep them straight). This was what I orginally made her for. Same with Genenal Poshnash, but we havn't gotten to him yet.

Enjoy!

Season 1
Episode 6
The Invasion of Ingration Part 5: Captured
















































For those of you who didn't get it, Shemis was a flash back! Hola Wow!

Hope you liked it, it was longer than a normal episode!

-Zeph

(Please comment. I need help. You'll notice my sets are a lot more detailed, thanks to CFaie! You can help me too!)
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Post by Scouttrooper366 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:15 am

Nice, Pretty short. It felt short but was probably just as long. I can't wait for ep. 7. 😁
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Re: Episode 6: The Invasion of Ingration Part 5: Captured

Post by Zepher on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:19 am

It was longer by 3 slides thaen a normal one, which I stated. But thanks anyways.
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Post by Gerrard on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:21 am

Nice, I though it was long but it was pretty interesting, Nice job!
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Post by Scouttrooper366 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:21 am

Really? It seemed shorter.(five)
Oh don't forget to link it inyour pinned thread.
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Post by Comrade Faie on Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:32 pm

Nice! I really like how he is cut short by the shot that puts him into a coma, the flashback was good as well!

Your also getting better at putting random scenery or extra scenery!

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Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:38 pm

It was pretty good, but what's up with all the blood?
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Post by Superperson on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:15 pm

It was ok. The story was kind of boring. Laughing
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Post by CT44 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:17 pm

I liked how he got cut off when he was injected with the shot to make him go into a coma.

(Can't remember his name Razz )
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Post by 80-0 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 5:10 pm

Now wait just a minute, that's Wi Shun not Shi Wun. Razz

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Post by Zepher on Sat Apr 18, 2009 7:30 pm

I liked the name Shi Wun beter, but the figure for Wi better Wink Razz

What would you like to see added to the story Superperson?
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Post by Alpha on Sat Apr 18, 2009 8:09 pm

Because Zeph just messaged me that his comic was up, and I bet he was going to say to comment...

Here I am. *Huffpuffcoughcough*


Anyways, onto the plot. It was good, though I was expecting to see a bit more action. Though I hate it how you use yellow heads, and blaster fire doesn't make you bleed. It doesn't tear you apart anyways.

The flashback was good, but there wasn't anything to it. It was just Gruff trapped in a cage talking random gibberish about how the town and approves of Sh!t Won, but what relevance does that have to do with the present day?

Unless you're planning to go back in time again, and this is a setter-up...

It just sounds like a random flashback, it'd be a bit more epic if it had to do with the death of someone important, or maybe discovering a plot to destroy the Jedi planet or something. Wink

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Post by Zepher on Sat Apr 18, 2009 8:13 pm

Alpha wrote:Because Zeph just messaged me that his comic was up, and I bet he was going to say to comment...

Here I am. *Huffpuffcoughcough*


Anyways, onto the plot. It was good, though I was expecting to see a bit more action. Though I hate it how you use yellow heads, and blaster fire doesn't make you bleed. It doesn't tear you apart anyways.

Next one's mostly action. I like stories though.

As for the blood, everytime I do this I get the same response. But it's certainly much more fun making it gory, and it shows that they're really dead better. When Axel was hit by a blast in CC-007's comics I thought he had dodged it until C-007 said he was dead.

And I like gore Wink


The flashback was good, but there wasn't anything to it. It was just Gruff trapped in a cage talking random gibberish about how the town and approves of Sh!t Won, but what relevance does that have to do with the present day?

That's Versilles. Go re-read the character guide, or previous episoes Wink

Unless you're planning to go back in time again, and this is a setter-up...

Ding ding ding ding! We have a giant winner! Yeah, about 1/4th of this sieries will be various flash-backs of various characters. But this is the first one for Versilles, who is the main charcter and will have by far the most!

It just sounds like a random flashback, it'd be a bit more epic if it had to do with the death of someone important, or maybe discovering a plot to destroy the Jedi planet or something. Wink
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Post by 80-0 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:33 pm

Zepher wrote:I liked the name Shi Wun beter, but the figure for Wi better Wink Razz

What would you like to see added to the story Superperson?

Nothing; it was enough boredom to make him laugh; note the Laughing smiley. Razz

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Post by Zepher on Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:24 pm

Maybe I'll just PM him the longest and most borig stories I can from now on, just to make him laugh.

Who says you can't attempt humour 80-0! I'm laughing. Razz
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Re: Episode 6: The Invasion of Ingration Part 5: Captured

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Apr 19, 2009 8:32 pm

The sets look a lot nicer, and I like how the plot is developing. Nice job!

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Post by Sialboats on Tue Apr 21, 2009 12:07 am

This episode is a lot of gloating, and I find gloating to be the best mechanic for furthering a plot Razz ! My only complaint here is the flashback - as there's not too much to seperate the flashback from the normal scene upon first take Wink . Other than that, it's very good.
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Post by CommanderMitten on Sat Apr 25, 2009 2:07 pm

Zepher wrote:
Alpha wrote:Because Zeph just messaged me that his comic was up, and I bet he was going to say to comment...

Here I am. *Huffpuffcoughcough*


Anyways, onto the plot. It was good, though I was expecting to see a bit more action. Though I hate it how you use yellow heads, and blaster fire doesn't make you bleed. It doesn't tear you apart anyways.

Next one's mostly action. I like stories though.

As for the blood, everytime I do this I get the same response. But it's certainly much more fun making it gory, and it shows that they're really dead better. When Axel was hit by a blast in CC-007's comics I thought he had dodged it until C-007 said he was dead.

And I like gore Wink


The flashback was good, but there wasn't anything to it. It was just Gruff trapped in a cage talking random gibberish about how the town and approves of Sh!t Won, but what relevance does that have to do with the present day?

That's Versilles. Go re-read the character guide, or previous episoes Wink

Unless you're planning to go back in time again, and this is a setter-up...

Ding ding ding ding! We have a giant winner! Yeah, about 1/4th of this sieries will be various flash-backs of various characters. But this is the first one for Versilles, who is the main charcter and will have by far the most!

It just sounds like a random flashback, it'd be a bit more epic if it had to do with the death of someone important, or maybe discovering a plot to destroy the Jedi planet or something. Wink

This sounds a lot like the TV series LOST, a really good show if you can get what's going on. Green
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