Snowfire #2 The Flashback

Comic numero dos. (pardon the spanish.) Ok, so I didn't have enough peices around for a set, so I went with green screen in some spots. And if you can't tell, this is a training room. I sort of got inspiration from the training room in X-Men.































And sorry about the second to last picture, that quote from Grievous says "I expect", not "Jexpect." Well, that's what it looks like to me atleast.


ENJOY!

Very nice I really liked that blood effect.

Nice! Everything is pretty well done! Did the drink on the guys shirt magically disappear.

Gerrard wrote:Nice! Everything is pretty well done! Did the drink on the guys shirt magically disappear.

Gosh dangit! I knew I was forgeting to do something! Um... yeah. He pulled out one of those Tide sticks between frames and just zapped it right up.

Oh well, yeah sometimes I do that too. Just forget those details.

That was awesome! I love the idea of Star Wars superheros. The effects were pretty good too, although the greenscreen looks a little tacky.

Jedi Joe wrote:although the greenscreen looks a little tacky.

I think that sums it for me... although I shouldn't be one for talking since my current work isn't cropping too well for me .




But no, it's an interesting comic to say the least. However the dialog, I don't know... seems strained. So do the planet names .

Wow, that drunk guy falling over was hilarious!

(Sorry, had to point that out... )

Good job, I like the last frame a lot.

Jedi Joe wrote:Wow, that drunk guy falling over was hilarious!

(Sorry, had to point that out... )

Did you notice that it's the senator that gets killed in my first comic? And yes, the green screen is tacky, and the dialog does have some problems. I really just want to get to the action, but there's lot's of explaining to do. Well thanks for all the C&C!

On the fourth picture, the man doesn't seem to be thinking anything, but there is a thought bubble. What's up with that?
100th post!

Code_Green wrote:On the fourth picture, the man doesn't seem to be thinking anything, but there is a thought bubble. What's up with that?
100th post!

It's supposed to indicate him thinking back... hence the title "The Flashback."