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Droid production Facility(Amocican Idol entry) *Pic heavy!*

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Post by CT44 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:08 pm

This is my entry for Amocican Idol. Hope you like it! Smile










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Post by Clonecommander9-9-9 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:10 pm

Why is there a saw blade? Other than that great!
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Post by CT44 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:11 pm

In a production facility things need to be cut and sawed. Wink
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Post by Alpha on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:13 pm

DETAIL.

DEEEETAIL.

NEEDS MORE DEEEEEEEEEETAAAAAAIL!

Otherwise...

FAAAAAAIL!

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Post by CT44 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:15 pm

Maybe post something constructive and give me some examples...
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Post by Code_Green on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:18 pm

Here's something constructive for you to chew on:

Green base plates? I know that there are plants on the outsides but inside the green looks silly (sorry Embarassed ).
The saw is probably to cut up the droid legs so that they can move more freely.
The walls aren't that impressive. If you work on them the whole thing will look a lot better.
Other than that, the belt that the droids are on look great!
It would be cool if we could see a line of finished droids at the end. That would be sweet! Smile


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Post by Garet6 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:20 pm

Horrifically coloured and rubbish detail. Green floor, single layered and gapped walls? Seriously?
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Post by 667thLegion on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:21 pm

CT44 wrote:Maybe post something constructive and give me some examples...

Sorry dude, but I don't think you can handle criticism. He said DETAIL, which means add more detail. And I agree. Inside the factory, all you have is the assembly line and a box on a baseplate. Bunches of greebles could be added on the floor. The outside is sort of random, and the "gate" where those magnaguards are, is just an arch. It's not connected to anything! Work on it. Wink
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Post by CT44 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:22 pm

Sorry I forgot to mention that General Grievous had picked this location(On a very dense jungle planet)So that it would not be picked up by the Republic as easily as it would on a very populated city planet.

Sorry. Embarassed
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Post by Garet6 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:25 pm

CT44 wrote:Sorry I forgot to mention that General Grievous had picked this location(On a very dense jungle planet)So that it would not be picked up by the Republic as easily as it would on a very populated city planet.

Sorry. Embarassed
Back story won't save this pile of rubbish.
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Post by CT44 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:26 pm

You aren't even posting anything constructive! Gosh, it's just like Fail, Oh this sucks...

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Post by Code_Green on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:28 pm

Rubbish is a strong word, Garre6. I would say pile of leftover food that hasn't been thrown yet Razz .
I am constructive, CT44!
All you need is a (preferably) gray floor, lots of droids in a line getting their weopons, and everything else I said in my previous post.
In the undying words of Ricky Geraveis: There you have it.

Okay, it wasn't funny, but it was meant to be! I'm trying to help you!


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Post by CT44 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:28 pm

Okay, that wasn't even funny...
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Post by Garet6 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:34 pm

CT44 wrote:You aren't even posting anything constructive! Gosh, it's just like Fail, Oh this sucks...

Mad
What? The colours are terrible SO MAKE THEM BETTER. The walls are full of gaps SO FILL THEM IN. It's not other people's fault if you're too stupid to read and understand unless it's in a numbered bullet pointed list.
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Post by CT44 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:36 pm

First of all, don't call me stupid that's called Flamming.
Second of all, Everybody is saying either work on it or that it sucks.
Third of all, you didn't give me any constructive critiscm untill that last post.

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Post by Code_Green on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:39 pm

Ct44 is right, garre6.

You've done the hard part, now you just have to decorate it! Smile
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:45 pm

What you need to do is have a chute or something coming down through the wall onto the conveyer belt. Smile And as everyone else said, greeble it up.

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Post by torrent3 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:47 pm

I don't know what to say. Just look at this. Wink
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Post by Garet6 on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:52 pm

Code_Green wrote:Ct44 is right, garre6.
No, he and you are just a bit thick and THAT ISN'T MY NAME. Learn to read and spell.
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Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:56 pm

It looks more like a de-construction facility but it's ok. Make the conveyor belt longer and a build up instead of break down. Wink

By the way droids 'hang' to the belt I believe.
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Post by Sialboats on Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:58 pm

I'm agreeing with the folks here, right now. It's pretty fail for something of it's size.

One: Why is the factory floor grass?
Two: Why is the building itself so insubstantial?
Three: Why isn't there any elevation outside?
Four: How the hell is that producing droids?
Five: That building is open to both air, and ground assault. No defenses whatsoever. No ROOF!
Six: The exterior vegitation is lacking.

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Post by Code_Green on Sun Apr 26, 2009 10:00 pm

Sorry, "Garet6". No need to innsult us! I was just agreeing with CT44 that you weren't very constructive.
Oh, and Sialboats, a roof would be very hard to make for something of that size, but you had a lot of good ideas.
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Post by Gerrard on Sun Apr 26, 2009 10:03 pm

I would add computers and technological devicesto the whole room to make it more detailed and look more like a facility. Wink
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Post by Sialboats on Sun Apr 26, 2009 10:03 pm

Code_Green wrote:Sorry, "Garet6". No need to innsult us! I was just agreeing with CT44 that you weren't very constructive.
Oh, and Sialboats, a roof would be very hard to make for something of that size, but you had a lot of good ideas.

Then make it so it looks like it has a roof, but is cut away Wink .

And I'm not too sure who the hell you think you are to cast judgement on my statements...
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Post by Rogue on Sun Apr 26, 2009 10:06 pm

This should be more of a WIP. There should be vast improvements that have already been stated and please, don't cut-down the experts.
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