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Snowfire #2 The Flashback

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Snowfire #2 The Flashback

Post by 667thLegion on Tue Apr 28, 2009 12:40 am

Comic numero dos. (pardon the spanish.) Ok, so I didn't have enough peices around for a set, so I went with green screen in some spots. And if you can't tell, this is a training room. I sort of got inspiration from the training room in X-Men.































And sorry about the second to last picture, that quote from Grievous says "I expect", not "Jexpect." Well, that's what it looks like to me atleast.


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Post by foxrex101 on Tue Apr 28, 2009 12:44 am

Very nice A toast! I really liked that blood effect.
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Post by Gerrard on Tue Apr 28, 2009 12:59 am

Nice! Everything is pretty well done! Did the drink on the guys shirt magically disappear. Smile
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Post by 667thLegion on Tue Apr 28, 2009 1:07 am

Gerrard wrote:Nice! Everything is pretty well done! Did the drink on the guys shirt magically disappear. Smile

Gosh dangit! I knew I was forgeting to do something! Mad Um... yeah. He pulled out one of those Tide sticks between frames and just zapped it right up. Surprised
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Post by Gerrard on Tue Apr 28, 2009 1:08 am

Oh well, yeah sometimes I do that too. Just forget those details. Smile
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Re: Snowfire #2 The Flashback

Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Apr 28, 2009 1:27 am

That was awesome! I love the idea of Star Wars superheros. The effects were pretty good too, although the greenscreen looks a little tacky.
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Post by Sialboats on Tue Apr 28, 2009 1:31 am

Jedi Joe wrote:although the greenscreen looks a little tacky.

I think that sums it for me... although I shouldn't be one for talking since my current work isn't cropping too well for me Wink .




But no, it's an interesting comic to say the least. However the dialog, I don't know... seems strained. So do the planet names Shocked .
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Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Apr 28, 2009 1:33 am

Wow, that drunk guy falling over was hilarious!

(Sorry, had to point that out... Razz )
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Post by Darth Yoda on Tue Apr 28, 2009 1:52 am

Razz Good job, I like the last frame a lot.
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Post by 667thLegion on Tue Apr 28, 2009 2:07 am

Jedi Joe wrote:Wow, that drunk guy falling over was hilarious!

(Sorry, had to point that out... Razz )

Did you notice that it's the senator that gets killed in my first comic? Laughing And yes, the green screen is tacky, and the dialog does have some problems. I really just want to get to the action, but there's lot's of explaining to do. Well thanks for all the C&C!
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Re: Snowfire #2 The Flashback

Post by Code_Green on Wed Apr 29, 2009 9:43 pm

On the fourth picture, the man doesn't seem to be thinking anything, but there is a thought bubble. What's up with that?
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Re: Snowfire #2 The Flashback

Post by 667thLegion on Wed Apr 29, 2009 10:01 pm

Code_Green wrote:On the fourth picture, the man doesn't seem to be thinking anything, but there is a thought bubble. What's up with that?
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It's supposed to indicate him thinking back... hence the title "The Flashback." Wink
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