Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
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Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
...CC-489 is seperated from the rest of Beta squad and encounters two Jungle outfitted droids. Using his quick wits, he jumps into a patch of tall grass and waits to ambush them.
The figs:
And for all of you who are going to say that I stole Revo's grass technique, it wasn't that hard to figure out how to stack some bricks on eachother...
C&C welcome.
The figs:
And for all of you who are going to say that I stole Revo's grass technique, it wasn't that hard to figure out how to stack some bricks on eachother...
C&C welcome.
Re: Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
Plus I share my creations in hopes that others can try and use similar techniques It's a little plain, I'd maybe throw in a few rocks, small stream, or even fallen log just to add some more detail. I can tell someone got the Jungle-Cutter set recently love that set. I do like the dark bley torsos on the droids, and it is a decent moc nonetheless.
Re: Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
Decent, not great. those brown parts were a litlle oddly placed, but what the hey.
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Thanks everybody! All this feedback is really helpig me.
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Nice creation, it's simple in a good way. like others have said, beef it up a little.
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A stream would be ideal. And if the commando was posed a bit more, maybe actually aiming at the droids or something...
Master Potato- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Alderaan, wondering why we've got a new moon...
Re: Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
A little too simple still but we're getting there. Include some terrain like rocks, hills, streams, etc.
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It looks good, and like everyone has previously stated, with a little more detail it would be truely awesome!
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
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It definantly needs to be bigger and a lot more detail It's a start, but I would put it in the WIP section.
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Meh. I almost thought I somehow fell on MOCPages again... It could use a lot of work. As Revo said, add a fallen log or something! Make it UNIQUE. Add something no one's ever done before. Or doesn't often do...
Be Creative with the squad name
Wasn't Beta Squad the name of a clone commando squadron that basically got killed off in the Battle of Geonosis? My squad's name is Pi Squad. Some name that is not in use would be ideal. The creation itself is good. Could you tell me how to do that clone commando helmet trick? Hopefully, that clonie gets back to "Beta Squad" in one piece!
Re: Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
I don't think Beta Squad was an ACTUAL clone Squad...
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Yea, no Beta... Just Theta.
Anyways, This is better than your last creation but still has a lot to be desired. i suggest you take the dense out of the title.
Anyways, This is better than your last creation but still has a lot to be desired. i suggest you take the dense out of the title.
Re: Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
It is simple. I think if it was a battle it would be awsome.
Superperson- Non-Guild Member
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Very nice. I just made my own commando squad. Lightning Squad is its name.
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This.....this is too simple.........my grandma can make better!
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fireworkgamer- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
This is ridiculous!!! Your a noob spamming up a topic and he's a guild member! Sure the MOC isn't the best and could use some detail but shut your mouth and stop insulting him fluck n00b!!! I eat n00bs like you for breakfast and I'm pretty hunger so start running!!fireworkgamer wrote:This.....this is too simple.........my grandma can make better!
Read our rules about flaming and bashing.
Awsome job on the forest!
This is one of the best Kesheyyyk sets I have ever seen! Brovo to you! -Commander324
commander324- Non-Guild Member
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Location : USA
Re: Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
Just use the edit button will you. Otherwise you are going to be shot down by a certain mod - sooner rather than later I expect.
Last edited by Master Potato on Sat May 02, 2009 6:50 pm; edited 1 time in total
Master Potato- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 27
Location : Alderaan, wondering why we've got a new moon...
Re: Somewhere in the dense jungles of Kashyyyk...
You stole Revo's grass technique!
It wasn't his technique at all actually.
But the MOC is pretty simple, but ok. Maybe some rocks could work.
It wasn't his technique at all actually.
But the MOC is pretty simple, but ok. Maybe some rocks could work.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
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Location : The Netherlands
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