Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle
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Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle
Designed by the now-defunct Gallridian StarDrives, the signature ship of the company is popular among Kaier Vineyard's executives for it's speed and it's economy. Bought up when the starship manufacturer filed bankruptcy by the Kaier family, these compact starships allow their top lawyers, negotiators, and lobbiers to travel the galaxy in comfort - abiet cramped - while proliferating the power of this wine industry goliath. Termed cozy, this two man inter-system craft carries a suprisingly high amount of fuel, allowing it to cover vast distances. The interior is adaptable, used to fit the requirements of each pilot; but it's basic model has a small main cabin, a forward facing transperisteel cockpit bubble, and second-level office with quite the view (also functions as emergency steering station).
Okay, okay, okay, while it isn't a new edition of Vendetta, it's the least I could do this week . My pitiful attempts at scraping together a starship with what few viable pieces (of that color) that I have. Enjoy !
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Meh, it's a bit chunky and unappealing.
Work on the blockyness, and make it less multicolored.
Work on the blockyness, and make it less multicolored.
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Can't say I love it. The frontal two cockpits jutting out isn't working for me, and the colors are a bit off. Your other work is always wonderful, this isn't living up to what you can do at all. Sorry. Try setting one of the cockpits back a little bit, it may look better that way.
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But the problem is Zeph, I don't have cockpits that would quite do that and leave headroom for the occupants. If I try to recess the top one, I'd have to build it higher, and I can't really "spread" her out more so it fits. This really should be no higher than maybe 6-8 studs at it's width .
It's not so much skill as it is a complete lack of proper parts 'oh: .
Hmm... somehow I was expecting to be chewed a new arse for the conflicting angles within the first two posts.
It's not so much skill as it is a complete lack of proper parts 'oh: .
Hmm... somehow I was expecting to be chewed a new arse for the conflicting angles within the first two posts.
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Meh. Its hard to see the shape from the thumbnails, but from what I can see, it looks pretty bad.
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Pdragon wrote:Meh. Its hard to see the shape from the thumbnails, but from what I can see, it looks pretty bad.
That is not even in the slightest bit constructive.
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I can't see anything, how am I supposed to be constructive? Sial, please could you post some bigger pics?
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If you can determine why it's bad, you can determine why it's bad.
It's not bad, it reminds me of those Skiprays (Not the FoC ones). Though it is a bit chunky, and the second cockpit doesn't really do it for me.
It's not bad, it reminds me of those Skiprays (Not the FoC ones). Though it is a bit chunky, and the second cockpit doesn't really do it for me.
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Pdragon wrote:I can't see anything, how am I supposed to be constructive? Sial, please could you post some bigger pics?
You can click on the thumbnails so that you can see a larger photo .
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It is not a terrible MOC, but it is not a great MOC. Don't really like the cockpits just joliting out and do it the way Zeph said. I would also make it wider.
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Meh, those chrome pieces seem really out of place. And the ship just seems jumbled together, you know? Try and smooth it out, replace those jagged edges with curves.
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