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The Bone Crusher

Post by Zepher on Sat May 02, 2009 7:57 pm

The Blood Doctor's persnoal Super Hero Speeder, used to patrol the streets without getting stuck in Traffic!

A 360:









Enjoy

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Re: The Bone Crusher

Post by Alpha on Sat May 02, 2009 8:32 pm

Um... kay...

Firstly, it's too blocky. The sides are just slants going upward, fix it a bit.

Secondly, there are gaps. And it needs to be sleeker.

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Re: The Bone Crusher

Post by Superperson on Sat May 02, 2009 9:21 pm

It's kind of to small but it's ok. Smile
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Re: The Bone Crusher

Post by Gerrard on Sat May 02, 2009 9:52 pm

Everythings too bunched, I would make it wider and sleeker.
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Post by Code_Green on Sat May 02, 2009 10:08 pm

Interesting use of bones/teeth pieces. Like it, don't love it.
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Re: The Bone Crusher

Post by 80-0 on Sun May 03, 2009 12:06 am

I like the way the horns/teeth are tapered on the cockpit, and that little back flap is a neat touch. It's more like an 'eco-friendly' version of a speeder, similar to those 'eco-friendly' golf-cart-esque cars they're making now. Wink

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Post by torrent3 on Sun May 03, 2009 12:38 am

80-0 wrote:I like the way the horns/teeth are tapered on the cockpit, and that little back flap is a neat touch. It's more like an 'eco-friendly' version of a speeder, similar to those 'eco-friendly' golf-cart-esque cars they're making now. Wink
They're called smart cars, you know, the ones you almost run over 'cause you can't see them. Razz

It's pretty neat, but I think it would look better with some dark red.
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Post by 80-0 on Sun May 03, 2009 2:01 am

Heh. Seems the only people who buy them aren't very smart to begin with. Wink

But back on topic.

You could make that little white mini-pillar into a gas-lid of sorts by leaveing one on only one side.

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Post by Zepher on Mon May 04, 2009 3:39 am

Thanks for the feed-back everyone, except of course Gerrard, who just restated Alfi's comment watered down slightly! 80-0, that's exactly the look I was going for, and SmartCars are great for the amount of Gas they burn, no matter how stupid they may look. Or funny. They sure look funny. Imagine all the streets in the world using them! That would be awesome.
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Post by Jedi Joe on Mon May 04, 2009 3:20 pm

It needs to be a little sleeker. But other than that it's pretty awesome!

Good job making it look like one of those dopey Smart Cars... Razz
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Re: The Bone Crusher

Post by 80-0 on Mon May 04, 2009 3:24 pm

Zepher wrote:Thanks for the feed-back everyone, except of course Gerrard, who just restated Alfi's comment watered down slightly! 80-0, that's exactly the look I was going for, and SmartCars are great for the amount of Gas they burn, no matter how stupid they may look. Or funny. They sure look funny. Imagine all the streets in the world using them! That would be awesome.

Yeah, but for highway travel? One pothole at a high speed and you'll be flipping over and over and over and ov-oh wait, you're dead... Wink

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Post by torrent3 on Mon May 04, 2009 8:19 pm

All the streets in the world!?! Quick! Put the Jeep in 4-wheel drive. (backs up [cue the sound of bending metal] "Oops! Sorry, didn't see you, or you either." Drives down the road destroying little cars)
Now just to make a tank instead of a smartcar! Razz
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Re: The Bone Crusher

Post by legorevolution on Tue May 05, 2009 3:11 am

I like the concept and colors Zeph but make it longer! The bones are an interesting add, especially right in the middle of the windshield, but I think you need to fix them up a little. Do that and it should look fine.
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