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Post by pdragon27 Sat May 02, 2009 8:15 pm

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Custom built for speed, the Sparrow-Hawk can fly at 250 mph. Featuring an old-school turbine engine, no wonder it goes so fast! It is also driven single-handedly, allowing the driver to wield a weapon in his left hand.
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Post by Alpha Sat May 02, 2009 8:24 pm

Hmm.

There's too much going on, all these edges poking out here and there, it needs to be smoother/sleeker.

But you've got the basic shape down, I'd revise it a bit, add slopes/panels, unless this is meant to be steampunk SW.
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Post by pdragon27 Sat May 02, 2009 8:29 pm

This ain't Star Wars at all. Its part of my faction which is set in my own fictional world which is sorta steam-punk.
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Post by DarthPineapple Sat May 02, 2009 8:31 pm

I don't really like it, too many sharp edges, it looks like it could be made out of junk (in real life). Sad
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Post by pdragon27 Sat May 02, 2009 8:32 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:I don't really like it, too many sharp edges, it looks like it could be made out of junk (in real life). Sad

Well, I guess that's what CUSTOM-BUILT and STEAMPUNK mean....
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Post by Halen Sat May 02, 2009 8:48 pm

I like it alot, its very steampunk and/or apocolego. It could use some refinement around where the controls are located, the cone in the front doesn't really seem to attach to the main body. It definantly has the cobbled together look of a steampunk creation and props for using the awesome tusken raider torso.
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Post by pdragon27 Sat May 02, 2009 8:54 pm

Commander Halen wrote:I like it alot, its very steampunk and/or apocolego. It could use some refinement around where the controls are located, the cone in the front doesn't really seem to attach to the main body. It definantly has the cobbled together look of a steampunk creation and props for using the awesome tusken raider torso.

It is Steampunk/Apocalego. Its part of my faction's fantasy world. If you get in the guild, you'll see.
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Post by DarthPineapple Sat May 02, 2009 9:08 pm

Pdragon wrote:
DarthPineapple wrote:I don't really like it, too many sharp edges, it looks like it could be made out of junk (in real life). Sad

Well, I guess that's what CUSTOM-BUILT and STEAMPUNK mean....

No need to feel offended, it just isn't really steampunk-y to me. Steampunk isn't just a junkyard full of metal and wood.
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Post by pdragon27 Sat May 02, 2009 9:10 pm

Yeah, I don't really care. I'm two for two as far as favorites go on Flickr. Smile
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Post by Superperson Sat May 02, 2009 9:14 pm

It looks ok. It has to many details. Smile
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Post by pdragon27 Sat May 02, 2009 9:15 pm

You obviously haven't seen Tac's speeder.
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Post by Garet6 Sat May 02, 2009 9:18 pm

It looks very thrown together. I know that's how you intended it to look but it's not worked out to be honest.
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Post by Alpha Sat May 02, 2009 9:21 pm

Tac's, is 1 color, and it doesn't have parts sticking out. Though I don't like his either.

Yours does, on the contrary. Oh, and another thing, NEVER COMPARE MOCs.
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Post by pdragon27 Sat May 02, 2009 9:22 pm

Alpha wrote:Tac's, is 1 color, and it doesn't have parts sticking out.

Yours does, on the contrary. Oh, and another thing, NEVER COMPARE MOCs.

I'm not. I'm just saying Tac's has sooooo many greebs in respnse to what Superperson said.
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Post by Alpha Sat May 02, 2009 9:24 pm

Ah, nevermind. I think I've gone crazy in the past week. Waaa!
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Post by pdragon27 Sat May 02, 2009 9:26 pm

I think you have. JK. But please, :spammers:
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Post by prowl Sat May 02, 2009 9:41 pm

I think it is ok I really like there is detail in it for sure such as the engines but it needs to be more Aerodynamic if you know what I mean. Wink
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Post by pdragon27 Sat May 02, 2009 9:44 pm

Its gotta a friggin' turbine engine. Y'know? The ones on fighter jets? It doesn't really need to be anymore aerodynamic than it already is. Plus its steampunk..
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Post by prowl Sat May 02, 2009 9:49 pm

But sence when are speeders box's? (please do not come across this as rude)
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Post by Gerrard Sat May 02, 2009 9:54 pm

It looks like it is a little too "greebled" if you know what I mean. It is a good color match though between the fig and the bike.
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