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Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by Sialboats on Sun May 03, 2009 6:00 pm





Designed by the now-defunct Gallridian StarDrives, the signature ship of the company is popular among Kaier Vineyard's executives for it's speed and it's economy. Bought up when the starship manufacturer filed bankruptcy by the Kaier family, these compact starships allow their top lawyers, negotiators, and lobbiers to travel the galaxy in comfort - abiet cramped - while proliferating the power of this wine industry goliath. Termed cozy, this two man inter-system craft carries a suprisingly high amount of fuel, allowing it to cover vast distances. The interior is adaptable, used to fit the requirements of each pilot; but it's basic model has a small main cabin, a forward facing transperisteel cockpit bubble, and second-level office with quite the view (also functions as emergency steering station).





Okay, okay, okay, while it isn't a new edition of Vendetta, it's the least I could do this week Waaa! . My pitiful attempts at scraping together a starship with what few viable pieces (of that color) that I have. Enjoy Wink !
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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by Jedi Joe on Sun May 03, 2009 6:08 pm

Meh, it's a bit chunky and unappealing.

Work on the blockyness, and make it less multicolored.
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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by Zepher on Sun May 03, 2009 6:16 pm

Can't say I love it. The frontal two cockpits jutting out isn't working for me, and the colors are a bit off. Your other work is always wonderful, this isn't living up to what you can do at all. Sorry. Try setting one of the cockpits back a little bit, it may look better that way.

Instead of this

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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by Sialboats on Sun May 03, 2009 6:24 pm

But the problem is Zeph, I don't have cockpits that would quite do that and leave headroom for the occupants. If I try to recess the top one, I'd have to build it higher, and I can't really "spread" her out more so it fits. This really should be no higher than maybe 6-8 studs at it's width Mad .

It's not so much skill as it is a complete lack of proper parts Wow this thing looks'oh: .


Hmm... somehow I was expecting to be chewed a new arse for the conflicting angles within the first two posts.
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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by pdragon27 on Sun May 03, 2009 6:34 pm

Meh. Its hard to see the shape from the thumbnails, but from what I can see, it looks pretty bad.
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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by Sialboats on Sun May 03, 2009 6:53 pm

That seems to be the consensus...
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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by Zepher on Sun May 03, 2009 7:34 pm

Pdragon wrote:Meh. Its hard to see the shape from the thumbnails, but from what I can see, it looks pretty bad.

That is not even in the slightest bit constructive.
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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by pdragon27 on Sun May 03, 2009 7:47 pm

I can't see anything, how am I supposed to be constructive? Sial, please could you post some bigger pics?
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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by Alpha on Sun May 03, 2009 7:51 pm

If you can determine why it's bad, you can determine why it's bad.

Laughing

It's not bad, it reminds me of those Skiprays (Not the FoC ones). Though it is a bit chunky, and the second cockpit doesn't really do it for me.

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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by Sialboats on Sun May 03, 2009 8:33 pm

Pdragon wrote:I can't see anything, how am I supposed to be constructive? Sial, please could you post some bigger pics?

You can click on the thumbnails so that you can see a larger photo Wink .
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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by Gerrard on Sun May 03, 2009 8:34 pm

It is not a terrible MOC, but it is not a great MOC. Don't really like the cockpits just joliting out and do it the way Zeph said. I would also make it wider. Smile
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Re: Gallridian-Class Executive Shuttle

Post by pdragon27 on Sun May 03, 2009 9:28 pm

Meh, those chrome pieces seem really out of place. And the ship just seems jumbled together, you know? Try and smooth it out, replace those jagged edges with curves.
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