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Episode 7: The Invasion of Ingration Part 6: Rescue

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Post by Zepher Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:07 pm

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Catch-up: Vimpu has threatened to kill Versilles and Marik if Gruff and Old Papa refuse to surrender the planet. Kuplo is creating a distraction while, at least he thinks, everything else is going according to plan. Gruff and Old Papa, while refusing to save Versilles and Marik, have shut down half of the Droids by seizeing and shutting down one of the droid control towers.

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Okay, time for editors notes!

I know you're going to tear the opening set apart becuase you're going to hate the colors. Fair enough. I've always imagined cities to be colorful. You don't. We differ. We'll be leaving this planet within the next few comics, so we won't have to to debate it further shortly!

I personally loved the opening set, and wish I could of played with it more!

That's really it for this episode! Hope you enjoyed!

-Zeph


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Post by CommanderMitten Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:15 pm

WAit a mintue, why didn't Versilles use the force to nock the twi-lek dude out of the window?Other than that good comic. Smile Green

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Post by Sialboats Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:15 pm

The GIMP is okay, you have wonderful blaster bolts, however I'm finding the positioning thereof to be lacking sometimes. Nice to see the captivity line being tied up; and all in all, I have to say that the city doesn't seem too colorful. You make up for it with the chaos of the battlefield Wink . It's almost fitting - the disparity between the two. War, rainbows... works nicely Razz .
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Post by -Aki- Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:21 pm

That was probally the best so far! That artrillery peice was pretty cool, but in one early slide, you can actually see the human general's rocket Laughing.
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Post by Alpha Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:22 pm

Pretty good, pretty good.

Though if they're rescuing the commanders now, you should've made the story about rescuing them longer. Wink
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Post by Zepher Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:23 pm

-Aki- wrote:That was probally the best so far! That artrillery peice was pretty cool, but in one early slide, you can actually see the human general's rocket Laughing.

He was loading for a long time Razz
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Post by The Jinja Ninja Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:25 pm

Zepher wrote:I personally loved the opening set, and wish I could of played with it more!
Could have. You're just doing this to annoy me now, aren't you? Wink
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Zepher wrote:I personally loved the opening set, and wish I could of played with it more!
Could have. You're just doing this to annoy me now, aren't you? Wink

No, I'm legitimently stupid Razz But seriously, I suck at grammar. Maybe I'll learn one day.

So... how'd you like the comic Razz


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Post by Sialboats Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:27 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:
Zepher wrote:I personally loved the opening set, and wish I could of played with it more!
Could have. You're just doing this to annoy me now, aren't you? Wink

He just wished he could of irritated you more.























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Zepher wrote:So... how'd you like the comic?
Pretty good. Some of the dialogue was kinda stilted, and you need to work on your speech bubbles, but otherwise the effects and storyline seemed better than usual. I especially like the couple of top-down shots near the end. More dramatic framing like this would be nice in future - I'm very fond of low-angle shots if you'd like a tip, but that's probably just the endless Firefly marathons of the last few weeks talking. Wink Actually, just watch Firefly. Those guys know how to direct. And write. And edit. And be so very shiny.
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Post by Gerrard Sat Apr 25, 2009 10:56 pm

Everything turned out pretty good Zeph. Just I would work on the special effects just a "tiny" but more. Otherwise, I thought that you did very well!
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Post by Code_Green Sun Apr 26, 2009 2:38 pm

You and Sialboats are my favorite comic creators!
I think it was a little confusing with all the colours, but other than that, it was great!
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Post by Zepher Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:01 am

The Jinja Ninja wrote:
Zepher wrote:So... how'd you like the comic?
Pretty good. Some of the dialogue was kinda stilted, and you need to work on your speech bubbles, but otherwise the effects and storyline seemed better than usual. I especially like the couple of top-down shots near the end. More dramatic framing like this would be nice in future - I'm very fond of low-angle shots if you'd like a tip, but that's probably just the endless Firefly marathons of the last few weeks talking. Wink Actually, just watch Firefly. Those guys know how to direct. And write. And edit. And be so very shiny.

Will do. The dramatic framing, that is. I'll work on it. The hard part, is low laying shots require me to build really tall buildings, and I've only so many pieces...
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Post by wrecks Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:10 am

Thats a great action comic, lots of guns and rockets. Your rocket effects are awsome looks nice. (And to be honest, I'm kinda glad the blue toydorian died, didnt like him.)

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Post by 80-0 Fri May 01, 2009 7:34 pm

Zepher wrote:
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Zepher wrote:I personally loved the opening set, and wish I could of played with it more!
Could have. You're just doing this to annoy me now, aren't you? Wink

No, I'm legitimently stupid Razz But seriously, I suck at grammar. Maybe I'll learn one day.

So... how'd you like the comic Razz

Legitimately? Those permits are expensive man! Hola Wow!
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Post by someguy577 Fri May 01, 2009 9:51 pm

I love the story, but still the red and yellow in the beginning scene messes with my eyes.
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Post by Zepher Tue May 05, 2009 9:45 pm

Missed this weeks episode, but I should be back on schedule shortly!
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