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Rebel Bunker

Post by 80-0 on Fri May 08, 2009 5:06 pm

This is a small pillbox-esque bunker for the Rebellion. And it just happened to be under attack by a Matoran AND the forces of the Empire at the same time. Razz











Inside the bunker there are six beds and three dual gunracks; nothing spectacular.

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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Fri May 08, 2009 5:14 pm

Where's the Imperial Officer's head from? From that angle, it looks a bit like Jayne from Firefly.
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Post by Bizzle on Fri May 08, 2009 5:16 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Where's the Imperial Officer's head from? From that angle, it looks a bit like Jayne from Firefly.


Haha so right Jinja.


I like this 80-0. Very simple yet nicely done.

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Post by 80-0 on Fri May 08, 2009 5:22 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Where's the Imperial Officer's head from? From that angle, it looks a bit like Jayne from Firefly.

It's one of the heads from the 'KK3' line. It wasn't as crappy as KK1 and KK2 and had a lot of new stuff, new heads, etc. It's a particularly medeival head; he has stern eyes to go with the goatee, and a shock of dark orange hair on the top of the printing. One of my favorite heads.

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Post by DarthPineapple on Fri May 08, 2009 5:26 pm

It's a bit simple, it's just a box with some figs on it. I miss the detail. Like the AA gun though.
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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by 80-0 on Fri May 08, 2009 5:28 pm

I intend to make the AA gun more of a gun rather than a mere plate slapped on a tilter.

As for the bunker...

If you walked up to a WW2 reenactment and saw soldiers lying on top of a pillbox shooting with MGs down below, wouldn't you say it's just a tan box with some people on it? Razz

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Post by Jedi Joe on Fri May 08, 2009 5:35 pm

It seems a little plain, 80-0. It's really good, it just needs some greebles. Smile
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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by 80-0 on Fri May 08, 2009 5:36 pm

Exactly! This is definitely where I need to apply greebles. As you can see I attempted to begin that on the ground floor.

But fear not, when I get pictures of the rest of the bunker including the interior and possibly a modified AA gun, there will be greebles, ladders, etc. Wink

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Post by Zepher on Fri May 08, 2009 8:17 pm

Needs way more greebs, but the gun is okay. Maybe make it more 3-D though, it looks flat right now. Also, maybe add some more nature colors, even just browns, on the floor level to show the difference between the ground and the bunker. It possibly looks like a cliff right now. You need to show more a seperation, and coloring is how you do that!
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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by Code_Green on Fri May 08, 2009 10:36 pm

I liked it. You really should enter the Bionicle v.s Star wars contest. (Going over making sure you haven't entered already)
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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by 80-0 on Fri May 08, 2009 11:31 pm

@ Zeph: Greebles are coming; that's an interesting point you make about brown. I haven't used brown a terrible lot in my MOCs of late, so it shouldn't hurt. I'm just working on finishing my Bank Robbery SNOT scene which should certainly blow this little pillbox away. Razz

@ Code Green: Already entered. Razz

P.S. Can I use this colored text one little time plzthx?

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Post by Gerrard on Sat May 09, 2009 12:44 am

I would greeble it a bit more but you did a good job with the scene. Smile
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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by 80-0 on Fri Jun 05, 2009 6:08 pm

I'm bumping this with a few new pics of the turret, which I modified in a VERY strange way.

I'm not entirely pleased with how it looks in relation to the bunker but the turret itself I like.



By all means for better pics check the Gallery, where new pics are getting uploaded as we speak, er, I type.

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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by Gerrard on Fri Jun 05, 2009 9:03 pm

I actually like this one a lot! It looks a lot better, the grey in this is nice. Smile
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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by foxrex101 on Fri Jun 05, 2009 9:05 pm

Wow it really doesn't go with the bunker like you said, but it's just alot more awesome than your older one and it's just pretty frakin awesome Smile .
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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by Code_Green on Fri Jun 05, 2009 11:18 pm

I can't belive how stupid that post looks when I look at it now. (Reffering to my previous post in this topic.)
Your really good at stating the obvious! (Talking to myself. The first sign of when someone is going crazy.)


It looks way better now!
("there you go again...stating the obvious!"-crazy me Razz )
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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by 80-0 on Fri Jun 05, 2009 11:39 pm

Mhmm...

I suppose if I hadn't scrapped it to make the C-Wing I could've worked to make an underground facility with a much more unboxy bunker in order to achieve a better standing for the cannon, for which I have no name. Any takers?

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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by shadow trooper on Sat Jun 06, 2009 4:02 am

I just have one complaint about the first one, why does the imperial officer have yellow skin when the rebels are all fleshie?
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Re: Rebel Bunker

Post by 80-0 on Sat Jun 06, 2009 1:23 pm

/headdesks

For once I actually feel wholeheartedly stupid. Razz

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