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Through the Gorge

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Through the Gorge

Post by Axel on Sat May 09, 2009 1:56 am

Just a small trip into microspace-esque stuff.

The year is 2130. Space travel is common for those who can afford it. The Moon has been settled. Mars has been successfully terraformed. However, food supplies are running low for the poor humans that can't find a way to get off planet. Here, a convoy of supply ships deliver food to those humans. They travel through a gorge, deliver supplies to the base built into the side of the cliff, and move on...





















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Re: Through the Gorge

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat May 09, 2009 4:10 am

It's an ok MOC. The ships are pretty cool, but the trench needs work. But it's a good start!
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Post by legorevolution on Sat May 09, 2009 8:01 am

Interesting backstory, but the moc needs work. I think if you're doing Mars you should stay with all the same color of the dirt rather than just having random bley bricks in there. The vehicles are pretty cool too, but I think this should be on an 8x8 plate rather than the thinner one you've got now.
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Re: Through the Gorge

Post by [Jay] on Sat May 09, 2009 9:52 am

This is a pretty cool MOC, itrs so smooth and detailed. I'd like to see more minis from you. Smile

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Re: Through the Gorge

Post by Axel on Sat May 09, 2009 11:28 am

legorevolution wrote:Interesting backstory, but the moc needs work. I think if you're doing Mars you should stay with all the same color of the dirt rather than just having random bley bricks in there. The vehicles are pretty cool too, but I think this should be on an 8x8 plate rather than the thinner one you've got now.

It's not on Mars. Actually, it's sort of a post-apoc earth, but space travel has been enabled. I did it on a thin plate to try and convey a sense of length...

Oh, did I mention that this was pretty much a 10 minute build... Smile
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Re: Through the Gorge

Post by Gerrard on Sat May 09, 2009 2:00 pm

The greebling is great and I like the colors here. Can't really find anything wrong but the only thing I am not a fan of is the grey with the brown. Otherwise, great job. Smile
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