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Sirius Okra's 'Starling': AI Round 3 Entry

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Post by Garet6 Sun May 10, 2009 9:39 am

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The ship was originally built by Okra's father, but Sirius 'adopted' the ship and carried on making improvements upon it. The final product amounted to the Starling, with a hyperdrive and an otherwise top speed of 4000mph. Okra is seen here wearing his flight suit.

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Post by Code_Green Sun May 10, 2009 9:45 am

Cool. Sleek. Nice. Love it! Thumbs up
Really like the minifigure.
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Post by DarthPineapple Sun May 10, 2009 9:46 am

It's a bit plain. Maybe add some detail and greebs. The concept is awesome but it lacks detail.
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Post by Garet6 Sun May 10, 2009 9:55 am

DarthPineapple wrote:It's a bit plain. Maybe add some detail and greebs. The concept is awesome but it lacks detail.

It's meant to be sleek, adding greebs would make it all bumpy.
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Post by DarthPineapple Sun May 10, 2009 9:57 am

Yea, but still... it looks a bit too sleek.
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Post by Garet6 Sun May 10, 2009 9:58 am

DarthPineapple wrote:Yea, but still... it looks a bit too sleek.

It's SUPPOSED to be very sleek.That's how he rolls. Wink
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Post by commander fel Sun May 10, 2009 10:46 am

I think that looks really sleek, and the pilot looks good with the mandalorian armour. Nice job! Smile
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Post by 80-0 Sun May 10, 2009 1:23 pm

I definitely love the Mando armor, and the build reminds me of a boxy but sleek version of Zam's speeder.

P.S. I see your little old grey/new grey in the first pic... Wink
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Post by Garet6 Sun May 10, 2009 1:38 pm

80-0 wrote:P.S. I see your little old grey/new grey in the first pic... Wink

That was actually done on purpose, the ship was meant to have been built over a long time period and so differant colour shades makes sense! Smile
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Post by Darth Yoda Sun May 10, 2009 4:40 pm

Both of your replies seem like excuses to me.

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Post by Commander Vulcan Sun May 10, 2009 4:47 pm

Yeah that looks cool Gareth, it looks really cool sleeked out like that, I can tell that it can't actually fit the guy in it but tell me if he actually can.
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Post by Gerrard Sun May 10, 2009 4:47 pm

Bit boxy but the sleekness and color make up for it. Simple, yet very cool. Smile
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Post by Garet6 Sun May 10, 2009 4:58 pm

Commander Vulcan wrote:Yeah that looks cool Gareth, it looks really cool sleeked out like that, I can tell that it can't actually fit the guy in it but tell me if he actually can.

It can fit a fig in there snugly, although he has to be lying down.

They weren't excuses DY, they were just things I forgot to mention. Anyway, what does it matter?
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Post by buckjames Mon May 11, 2009 11:50 pm

Finally, something thats not so bright Smile ! I felt like the others were gonna melt my face off as if I were looking at the lost ark.
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Post by Jedi Joe Mon May 11, 2009 11:52 pm

Good concept, bad execution.

It needs to be less blocky to be sleek, so now it just seems plain.
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Post by Blast Wed May 13, 2009 12:39 am

Were is the lazers and cock pit? Sirius Okra's 'Starling': AI Round 3 Entry 108108
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Post by Bantha Wed May 13, 2009 12:44 am

Blast wrote:Were is the lazers and cock pit? Sirius Okra's 'Starling': AI Round 3 Entry 108108

Does it need to have lasers? And it does have a Cockpit. Wink
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Post by Blast Wed May 13, 2009 12:45 am

Bantha wrote:
Blast wrote:Were is the lazers and cock pit? Sirius Okra's 'Starling': AI Round 3 Entry 108108

Does it need to have lasers? And it does have a Cockpit. Wink

Then he should show it? Kashyyyk
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Post by Bantha Wed May 13, 2009 12:47 am

Blast wrote:
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Blast wrote:Were is the lazers and cock pit? Sirius Okra's 'Starling': AI Round 3 Entry 108108

Does it need to have lasers? And it does have a Cockpit. Wink

Then he should show it? Kashyyyk

Well you can see it, but he doesn't have to take separate photos for it. Wink
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Post by Blast Wed May 13, 2009 12:51 am

Beside that good ship. And I don't need to see the cock-pit. Wink
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed May 13, 2009 2:21 am

Ok, blast, when you say 'Cockpit' with a hyphen, 'Cock-pit', you're making the sacred place of piloting sound like a gay porn site. Ok? Wink

And the Cockpit is in the back under a grey sloped piece. It's a cool cockpit. Not everything needs to have it's cockpit right out front where it gets shot at.
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Post by Gerrard Wed May 13, 2009 2:39 am

Blast wrote:Were is the lazers and cock pit? Sirius Okra's 'Starling': AI Round 3 Entry 108108

Cock-pit, I think that CC got that one pretty well. Razz

And why does it need lasers?
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Post by Garet6 Wed May 13, 2009 8:00 am

Heheheh... Hyphen. Wink

Anyway, thanks for the comments CC! Razz
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Post by Rook Wed May 13, 2009 3:44 pm

It reminds me of the summer trips to Peru with my cousin. She was fond of a young dark skinned native with bright eyes. She often liked to sneak out at night go to the local…

…cock pit, does sound funny. Razz

Ships a little weak around the front end of the cockpit. A little too flat headed for most ships.


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Post by 80-0 Wed May 13, 2009 3:46 pm

You know, thinking of it that way makes one question where the word came from in the beginning.

It certainly does make sense, when you think about it. >_> <_<
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