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Post by LPAnimations Thu Apr 16, 2009 7:56 pm

The fouth installment in the Elite Squadron Saga, please give me your honest opinions. I might make a thread to the rest of them, but for now: here it is:

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Post by -Aki- Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:04 pm

Wow. Just wow. This is fantastic! Everything! The story, the sets, the characters, everything! I loved the idea of rogue troopers, and that shadow scout was brilliant. My fave part was when they scanned the Stormtroopers equitment. That storm with the red markings, was brillinat! I would love to see more stuff from you like this. BRILLIANT work Smile!
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Post by DarthPineapple Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:16 pm

That is a really nice vid! Next time, use some proper voices please. These just sound horrible.
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Post by PizzaMovies Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:18 pm

Excellent work! I really like it! Although I hate the voices... But the animation was good, as well as the story! Smile
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Post by LPAnimations Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:21 pm

PizzaMovies wrote:Excellent work! I really like it! Although I hate the voices... But the animation was good, as well as the story! Smile

You used the same voices for your normal clones in the 501st but yes i see your point. Thank you for the tip.
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Post by PizzaMovies Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:53 pm

LPAnimations wrote:
PizzaMovies wrote:Excellent work! I really like it! Although I hate the voices... But the animation was good, as well as the story! Smile

You used the same voices for your normal clones in the 501st but yes i see your point. Thank you for the tip.

I realize that... It was a bad idea on my part... Laughing
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Post by Rook Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:16 pm

Some more detail in scenes would be cool but. Not bad for first thread here. Wink
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Post by Gerrard Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:54 pm

Very nice first post! Everything went pretty smoothly, good job!
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Post by CT44 Thu Apr 16, 2009 11:23 pm

Glad you found the guild, LP! Anyways, nice vid, I saw it on Youtube. Laughing
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Post by Superperson Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:43 am

Awsome video. I love your lego movies. Hola Wow!
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Post by buckjames Fri Apr 17, 2009 2:18 am

Cool video! You use effectslab, right?
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Post by LPAnimations Fri Apr 17, 2009 12:55 pm

buckjames wrote:Cool video! You use effectslab, right?

Yes, I do
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Post by [Jay] Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:04 pm

Wow that was amazing Liam, I'd really like to see more videos like this. Smile
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Post by 80-0 Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:08 pm

I like the beginning with the Jesse Harlin/RC flutes, but after that, I hate to say it, it kinda got worse and worse. For example, the voices. NOT the fact that they're chipmunk clones( Laughing ), but that at some points the voice tracks simply got cut off. And again, when the Juggernaut was driving over the river the stop motion was very choppy, if not there at all. You could easily have put the camera on a pod and wheeled it by on video mode yourself, but hey, not everyone has a pod. Then you could've at least built something to stand it on.


My critique: Pretty good so far; the music fits in well; maybe work on detailing that battlefield the four commanders are walking through, and always play through your voice clips before adding them as they may be glitched.
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Post by Astor Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:10 pm

Good! I didn't really figure out why the stormies attacked the clones and why everyone high pitches their clone voices btw.
Pretty neat, I hope to see more vids like this from you.
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Post by 80-0 Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:11 pm

They'd sound a lot better:

1. If they just gave them regular voices.

2. They gave them a low but British voice.
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Post by CT44 Fri Apr 17, 2009 2:05 pm

Astor wrote:Good! I didn't really figure out why the stormies attacked the clones and why everyone high pitches their clone voices btw.
Pretty neat, I hope to see more vids like this from you.

You would have had to seen his other vids to understand it. . .


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Post by VenatorClassCruiser Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:44 am

Definitely a good animation, but the voices were too high and they echoed a bit. I like it a lot, besides the critique! Smile
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Post by 80-0 Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:46 am

That's [/quote] if you please, Mr. CT44. Razz
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Post by Orangecorps Sun Apr 19, 2009 2:15 am

What effects did you use?
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Post by angmar100 Sun Apr 19, 2009 2:17 am

Particle illusion. You think you could have guessed?
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Post by The Jinja Ninja Mon Apr 20, 2009 5:12 pm

80-0 wrote:They'd sound a lot better:

1. If they just gave them regular voices.

2. They gave them a low but British voice.
Surely the clones should have a NZ accent? Razz Plus, there's really no such thing as a 'British' accent. Specify further, and we may help. Wink
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Post by 80-0 Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:17 pm

Ooh, New Zealand... *imagines Peter Jackson* Razz

In the CW series it has seriously departed from the good ol' Concord Dawn accent of Episode 2/3, and made it more 'Oi, there's a bloody clankah battalion comin' in head on!'
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Post by MuffinHobo Thu Apr 23, 2009 1:50 am

Great animation,effects, and story... but the weapons could be better they were random and assorted.
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Post by Code_Green Thu Apr 23, 2009 7:37 am

I don't know why Cody was there but not Obi-wan, but watever.
It was a really cool movie!
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